VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - Juno's Task [Ch.5.1] [JoJozz]

I struggle to see how this is rated so high. The only good thing I have to say about this is that the renders are decent. The MC is not very likeable and all the women have the same variation of a bimbo body with various cup sizes. The story also sucks as well.

beautiful characters, phenomenal story, loved every minute. eagerly awaiting more. I really think this game has all time potential. This is my first ever review after 20+ games if that tells you anything

This game is genuinely exceptional! It consistently emanates a comforting and welcoming ambiance that brings me closer to the love interests with every moment. Each character possesses a distinct quality that ignites my curiosity and intensifies my eagerness to explore their narratives further. The well-crafted action scenes contribute significantly to the overall impressiveness of this Visual Novel. To sum it up, the game undeniably shines as an outstanding experience.

Short summary:


Some decent renders and animations later on. But none of it makes much sense, the goddess angle falls flat. Models are hit or miss, some are dated, some are pretty. All have massive tits of course.



Good Things

• Some models are nice
• Good tits with good details

Bad points

• Story, writing, and situations are not believable, so I lost interest quickly
• Many models have low detailed faces
• Lighting and post-work are not up to the modern level

well its a good game so far (5.1) - images are hot, sex scenes are good, there are some animations sprinkled in (actually I wouldnt mind only pictures, but then more of them, but both works).

There is no real corruption, because the characters pretty much jump on the MC in the beginning, with a small setback, but shit escalates extremely fast.

I support the decision to get raunchy real fast, some games let you grind for every scene for hours, although I propably would have preferred if the game would have taken a more "realistic" (if you can talk about that) route with actually corrupting the Mom and Sister. Couldve given sex scenes with other LIs fast, but those two are bit off, story wise. But well, it still kinda works.

Story wise nothing new, basically dude has to fuck everyone (and impregnating) to save a godess who propably will fall for him too, as everyone does.

Sounds like a lot of critic, no, its a good game, pacing is good, but there is not real hook to the characters. Propably because they basically fall in love with the MC in a matter of minutes of play time.

But for the great renders, good sex scenes and funny setting I give this 4 stars.

My initial rating as of CH.5.1
Somehow there's too many holes for the plot as of now, but i can understand that this VN is still in the middle of production. I'd be looking for this one with great interest
Though i gotta say, I can't emphasize enough how i find Veronica so adorable and hot at the same time.... like goddangggittt
Also, I'd tip my hat to the devs for putting so much details in most kissing and making out scenes. I hardly notice those in most AVN's i've read

Just played 5.1 version. interesting graphics. simple story. hot women. as always mom hot as hell =D devil girl is pretty nice too. I would love to see how far can this game go, as it has a huge potential. I wish I would make some game too, as I am thinking about it for some time. Nevertheless, try it and I am sure you will like this game!

Hello there!
Brevity is the soul of wit.
If you have a thing for blondy/big breast/bouncy ass/milf and cute face...
This game for you.
Not too many animations.But the rendering and models are pretty good.

Animation: Well crafted models and scenes. Not the best but certainly better then most.
Story: This is a pretty fun premise, gives options for future developments and new characters (as wanted/needed). Hopefully it keeps things fresh.
Scripting: Grammar is good, characters sound like people most of the time.

I like this game, typically not a fan of games that have multiple choices, but this one has a "right path" so to speak so you don't really miss anyting if you stay on it. I hope that continues, I am too lazy and hate replaying games over to see every scene.

I love this game! Beautiful characters, cool story, nice background art for the locations. I am really looking forward to where this goes. Val and Veronica are total babes. Also, nice to see that some women actually have pubic hair and that the MC does not have a horse cock.

Just WOW!
Ever since I played this game, which is very recently, I've been cursing myself for not playing it sooner. It got everything I look for in a good game. Beautiful and HOT models, plenty of sex scenes and well written out, visuals are good. Pretty interesting and kinda different story. But for me the main thing, sexual content, plenty and abundant, well played out and with desireable models. It's now on my list of games I'll be waiting for new updates.

+ renders, Veronica is really beautiful
+ kissing renders looks good
+ Jade is funny
+ music
+ story is ok, but later we start to see less and less of mc and more of what happens behind the scenes
+ compared to other avns i played here, this mc is just a normal guy. First of all he don't get insta boner just by talking to a girl or by seeing her naked - he can even speak like a normal person in these situations.
He don't behave like teenage horny boy who for the first time see a girl - i like that.

- no proper sex scene with twins
- too many BJ
- cockblocking
- sex scene choices(x girl or x) in a harem avn.. a big no for me, choose what scene we want to see is good in avns with routes/branches, but not here. We should see all the content, this is strange and unnecessary.
- mc should be more assertive during sex scenes, most of time he look clueless and girls need to tell/guide him what to do

H-scenes - lot of them are too short in my opinion and for some reason their frequency drop a lot when we progress with the story - especially compared to first chapters, which is really strange. MC also starts annyoing me near the end, he is dull and TOO passive...
3 stars for now

Starts off with your typical porn premise that you see in every AVN, clearly was meant to be modded with the incest patch. Even the magical figure driving the horny scenes isn't that original.

But after that intro bit, after the antagonist becoming apparent, the story becomes fun and stakes increase over course of it. There's also some interesting lore sprinkled along the way to support it. It's interesting enough that you want to see where it goes.

You can also make decisions here and there that can fuck up the routes and scenes you can unlock with the ladies.

The models for the LIs are quite hot, especially for the mom and sister. The visual start off a bit rough but get better and better. It's great to see the dev hone their craft.

There's no animations at first but there's more and more and they get better as well as the story progresses.

The most important part to enjoy any game for me is MC personality and here, well... he is just pathetic. He is not a man but scaredy, weakwilled, sissy soyboy. Sorry this, sorry that, always belittles himself in his head for everything he do or says, he even needs to justify having morning wood in his own fucking room to feel better. Who enjoys this kind of story with this type of mc, who in reality will fuckup his chances even with whorest whore, only god knows.

Doesnt matter how good renders, sex scenes, variety of choices, girl models or their personalities or other aspects of the game if I as player need to play in role of sissy loser, that atleast for me makes any pontential 5/5 game to absolute 1. I myself just your average dude, but even in my worsest times I wasnt even close to be as pathetic as this MC and here we have this FICTIONAL story were everything possible and dev having power to make any possible MC creates this pathetic excuse of a man. With all due respect, F95 needs new tag "pathetic mc" so people with self respect dont waste their free evenings dowloading games with MC's like this.

This is an amazing game, one of the best I've played (version Ch4.0-0.3).

1. The girls are beautiful, varied and have different and well established personalities.
Some of the girls are very beautiful, especially Juno (milf) and Lia (girl).
The MC's mom and sis are also beautiful and pretty: less so in the beginning of the game, but they get better during the later chapters of the game.
Other special female characters are Callista, Freya and Aphrodite (milfs).

2. The story is the best aspect of this game. It's very different from most incest games where the MC's main activity is to seduce his mom, sis and many other girls.
Here the story starts similar to that, but evolves quickly into a much more complex and fascinating story involving Olimpian godesses, a succubus, etc..
An interesting point is that the mom is not the most attractive woman in the game as it is customary in very established incest games like "Milfy City", "No More Secrets", "Life in Santa County", etc.. In my opinion that's Juno, the MC's mentor and initiator of his adventure. Also Juno's role grows to be the most important character in the game after the MC.
Also, the mom is not the ultimate "reward" for the MC, the last woman he gets in the game, which is contrary to the established pattern.
There are a number of characters that oppose the MC and his mentor Juno and the fight between these two groups makes for a captivating and gripping story.
Whereas in a "regular" game the side story is a distraction to MC's seduction of mils and girls, here the story grows to be more captivating than the seduction of various female characters.

Also, the short side story "Milf dilemma" is funny and sexy and the MC gets to fuck Linda from Milfy City, the mom from "The Visit" and another milf from yet another game.

3. In conclusion this game is quite unique among visual novels, it's one of the best I've played and I highly recommend it.

RevCh.4.1
Plot: 18yo guy goes live with some "random woman", then a "genie" appears, MC immediately accepts the task...

The Goods:

• Really nice shaders (at least for the skin, hair, etc)
• Realistic faces and models
• It dips into more "taboo" details, like breastfeeding, dom, etc
• There seems to be some interesting plot developing...

The Bads:

• The environment presentation is extremly poorly crafted, MC goes visiting specific places where their LI lives/work in an unknown town one by one and thats it
• MC doesn't have stereotypical masculine traits, feels like he's a shy 16yo at max with a cotton hair but dead inside
• Lots of blue balls
• Lots of black/white screens you have to click to skip
• No animations, you literally have to spam space to get something closer to flipping a paper very quick like in the good ol days
• Limited POV during "scenes"
• Very short climax
• Some dialogues are veeeeeery long
• Close to 0 atmosphere, MC wakes up and goes about his way to make woman fall in love...

Will give it a 2.5 for now

TL;DR Game is one big tease with little progress.

For a harem game with a focus on impregnation, it has very little of these activities. First we have the sex or lack thereof, sure there are BJs and such but actual sex seems to be missing. Now this might be more acceptable if this was "realistic" in the progression, but for this game that's out the window. Instead we get a lot of blue balling teasing. On top of that after 4 chapters we still don't have single pregnancy only a reference teasing about it.

It's a fun game in all honesty and the recent update added only helped with it's case excited how the dev will execute the 2 paths.
Renders are great and I like most of the characters, the story at the start felt a bit weak but now I am genuinely interested in it. The scenes are good as well the only thing this game is lacking is animations.

Review of Chap 4.1. 4 Stars for this one.

Story - "Porn Logic" so there is some things that happen in the porn world (or else porn games would be rather boring if based on real life). We have goddesses, super pheromones, super hot mom, sister and a bunch of other characters. It is pretty well written, funny, and surprisingly interesting to go through. The story flows pretty well for mostly being a VN with a few choices.

MC - Seen some reviews bashing the MC (he doesn't do anything, no school, no job, doesn't do chores) kinda confused on that as the MC is on summer vacation, has volunteered for 2 different jobs already, and has helped mom with cleaning the house..so whatever to those reviewers.

The MC is a nice guy, not a wimp (has interations with bullies where he stands up to them, and is dedicating to working out so he can kick the crap out of them. Some slight FemDom (looks more extreme at the start of that scene, but it calms down) the MC is not a cuck or wimp.

Art - very impressive, a mix of young ladies, MILFs and even a granny (no sex with her yet other than a time change thing so she is hot). The MC doesn't have a massive dick, kinda big but not ridiculous. The Characters are all hot, some have some of the overdeveloped proportions but it looks good and isn't a distraction.

Bugs - none

Playtime - I took a few hours to work through this one, I was happy with it (but I have not looked how long development has been so far).

Lots of talk about impregnaton (its a theme of the game), incest, milfs.

Very enjoyable, well made, and nice flow. Good magic, goddess, harem game (solo routes seem to be hinted at) pregnancy, milf game.

Cons - sex is a little slow, fewer sex scenes than I would expect for length of playtime.

Hope the Dev continues, great so far.

EDIT: I have now played through the content in version 4.1 and the game got much better than the beginning. The start is bad enough, that it hurts the score, and I'll leave the original review as a spoiler at the end.

The cringe-inducing absurdity of the start of the game starts to turn into funny absurdity once the first day is past. The setup with the roomies is still very weird and unnatural, but once the actual tone of the game gets established, it's less jarring. The weird mishmash personality of the MC in the beginning also becomes much more consistent, even if there are some problems. MC just accepting having been hit in the head with a baseball bat is not cool and made it really hard to like the characters involved. Especially since it is just waved away without any repercussions for the people doing or the one ordering it or even a sincere attempt at atoning for it. Makes the characters seem sociopathic.

Once the game got going, I found it quite enjoyable. It's a bit silly, but intentionally so. Every character takes their traits to an exaggerated level, but it fits the tone of the game. Will not be for everyone, but after the bad start I'm very curious to see where it goes and there seems to be a possibility for interesting growth for the characters, which might make them much more deep and nuanced as the story progresses. If the writer can pull it off.

The renders are good enough, but not exceptional. The models are more varied than in many games. Not so much as an attempt to cater to every interest, but to make the character's appearances fit their roles in the story.

All in all, the game would be a 4-star for me if the bad start didn't drag it down. If the creator keeps improving and maybe (much) later on does some edits to the beginning, this has potential to be an easy 4. Maybe even a personal 5 if the writing ends up cashing in on the potential of the hilarious absurdity and interesting world-building. I'll be glad to update the review again, if that comes to pass.

(Ch 4.003)