It has potential. But that's just about all at the moment.
As a fan of the "LIL Genre", what's there right now hits the familiar notes and could become something solid in time. The characters and their designs each stand out in distinctive enough ways so they don't slide together, while being each appealing to look at.
The MC might even have some genuine edge to him to make him stand out, if I'm reading him right.
But right now everything is bare bones. Less than bare bones even. There's barely a NSFW scene, and while the characters are fun enough they're little more than archetypes at the moment because there hasn't been enough content to develop them beyond that.
And let's not get into the spelling and grammar errors. The developer needs to get a beta-reader to go over their script.
But all things considered, I'm still going to say that I see potential here. There's enough care put into the designs to make them decently distinctive, and the basic plot threads are being laid in a way that could come together nicely in the future. Maybe it's just a gut feeling from the art direction but I do think this could become something quite good in time.
Still though, there's not really much to review now anyway. For anyone reading this, maybe wait until the developer has gotten through a few updates.
As a fan of the "LIL Genre", what's there right now hits the familiar notes and could become something solid in time. The characters and their designs each stand out in distinctive enough ways so they don't slide together, while being each appealing to look at.
The MC might even have some genuine edge to him to make him stand out, if I'm reading him right.
But right now everything is bare bones. Less than bare bones even. There's barely a NSFW scene, and while the characters are fun enough they're little more than archetypes at the moment because there hasn't been enough content to develop them beyond that.
And let's not get into the spelling and grammar errors. The developer needs to get a beta-reader to go over their script.
But all things considered, I'm still going to say that I see potential here. There's enough care put into the designs to make them decently distinctive, and the basic plot threads are being laid in a way that could come together nicely in the future. Maybe it's just a gut feeling from the art direction but I do think this could become something quite good in time.
Still though, there's not really much to review now anyway. For anyone reading this, maybe wait until the developer has gotten through a few updates.