I really enjoyed this game. I have to admit it is not a completely original idea but it is well executed leaving the bugs aside. I am looking forward to the game being completed. I hope the dev does not quit because of some whiny ones.
HTML - Just a Woman [v0.5.4] [95dev]
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From what I played I really think it was a pretty alright framework for a game. You have the key concepts for every HTML Female protagonist game pretty down pat with the generic systems and such.
Things I liked:
- Ability to train skills in various ways fairly easily.
- Navigatiable city.
- Stats that make relative sense.
- Framework is solid.
- F95 intended content is there and pretty good for the most part.
- Gaining stats is abysmally slow, I don't like the one stat a day or one surgery a day. If I want to waste the fully day grinding charisma or grinding cooking, let me! Idc if it breaks the balance it just hurts to wait 100 days of perfect gameplay to get to the stats I want.
- I would move corruption and exibition into the main stats screen, it was annoying to open the notes to find that info when needed.
- Please give an introduction. Starting the game off fresh with no introduction toward the character or goals was so strange, even a small "Parents dropped u off lol, but I wanna be a model!!!" would've given me direction.
- Some flavor text for events instead of just a GIF is also the true difference between top tier and the same old shit as well, if you're at all good at writing, please add these. If you're not good at writing, you already used some AI so use it more lol.
- The energy system felt so limiting. I feel like most days I shouldn't completely lose all hunger just felt annoying, especially since every single action required hunger and energy. I would dramatically reduce the rates that these go down so you aren't tired by second action (Or dick lol)
- Final critique cause I'm tired of writing, please for the love of god plan out the day and make things easier to meet. I shouldn't have to eat, shower, makeup, and be out the door and have to sit and wait for uni. Make the times have an hour gap where you can show up early or late, no the exact time. ESPECIALLY for work since it was always the literal minute you got out of school.