Overall vote: 8
Despite being a 8 i've got 3 bad things to say about this one, to which "only one" is relevant to my rating of 8 that i gave this game.
1) The bad TL REALLY bumps down the experience of reading this.
Overall it's a good TL but there are problems ...
noticed some typos, the MC name wrongly pronunced here and there and some sentences cut short.
This is not small amount of a problem of about 5-6 sentences, THE WHOLE SCRIPT IS FILLED WITH THESE ISSUES.
This one didn't went through the QC phase.
Which it's not the fault of the game per se, reason why this doesn't affect my voting ...
HOWEVER IF I WERE TO COUNT THIS ON MY RATING OF THE GAME THEN IT WOULD BE GOING DOWN TO 7!
2) It's technical and it's regarding a bug in the save / load department. If you're not someone like me that saves a lot then you didn't even encountered this problem why? Cause all of your saves were on the first default page ... if you save a lot then you're gonna use up multiple pages and when changing pages in this game you are gonna encounter multiple bugs variating from error messages to game freezing / crashing.
However this is just a technical issue and it sure as hell can't be impacting my vote.
3) Third and only reason that is relevant is that there's a clear "missing" part in the plot. Anyone noticed that in between the third and fourth "lending" there's a sense of things taking a 180, being too fast, something clearly missing? I do get that the writer wanted to keep this a standard 4 "lending" sessions that the classics had but here is in my opinion the only real flaw of a otherwise really great game. I would much rather the author cut out / lower a couple of sex scenes and put more plot in between the 3rd and the 4th lending cause there's a clear plot hole here ...
Despite being a 8 i've got 3 bad things to say about this one, to which "only one" is relevant to my rating of 8 that i gave this game.
1) The bad TL REALLY bumps down the experience of reading this.
Overall it's a good TL but there are problems ...
noticed some typos, the MC name wrongly pronunced here and there and some sentences cut short.
This is not small amount of a problem of about 5-6 sentences, THE WHOLE SCRIPT IS FILLED WITH THESE ISSUES.
This one didn't went through the QC phase.
Which it's not the fault of the game per se, reason why this doesn't affect my voting ...
HOWEVER IF I WERE TO COUNT THIS ON MY RATING OF THE GAME THEN IT WOULD BE GOING DOWN TO 7!
2) It's technical and it's regarding a bug in the save / load department. If you're not someone like me that saves a lot then you didn't even encountered this problem why? Cause all of your saves were on the first default page ... if you save a lot then you're gonna use up multiple pages and when changing pages in this game you are gonna encounter multiple bugs variating from error messages to game freezing / crashing.
However this is just a technical issue and it sure as hell can't be impacting my vote.
3) Third and only reason that is relevant is that there's a clear "missing" part in the plot. Anyone noticed that in between the third and fourth "lending" there's a sense of things taking a 180, being too fast, something clearly missing? I do get that the writer wanted to keep this a standard 4 "lending" sessions that the classics had but here is in my opinion the only real flaw of a otherwise really great game. I would much rather the author cut out / lower a couple of sex scenes and put more plot in between the 3rd and the 4th lending cause there's a clear plot hole here ...
