Pretty short (it's v0.1) but some interesting stuff here. Despite the RPGM engine it plays like a point-n-click. There's a surprising amount of texture to how you interact with things, such as having to close the refrigerator door and clicking on the remote in your hand in order to choose what to watch on TV.
The writing isn't terrible to read but there really isn't anything new or different here. At least not yet. There was one conversation that went on for so long I wanted to quit.. v0.1 lasts one (1) day and Kevin gets his Mom to agree to giving him an allowance and he mentions it like 20 times over the course of a couple conversations. Either trim it down a bit or give them more to talk about please.
The art is head and foot above the average 3d VN. Give it some time and it could turn out to be interesting. At current, there isn't much else that makes it stand out. Good luck to the team!
The writing isn't terrible to read but there really isn't anything new or different here. At least not yet. There was one conversation that went on for so long I wanted to quit.. v0.1 lasts one (1) day and Kevin gets his Mom to agree to giving him an allowance and he mentions it like 20 times over the course of a couple conversations. Either trim it down a bit or give them more to talk about please.
The art is head and foot above the average 3d VN. Give it some time and it could turn out to be interesting. At current, there isn't much else that makes it stand out. Good luck to the team!