For a first version, it shows promise. The writing isn't horrible; there weren't any glaring grammatical issues that I saw; the GIFs used are good; there's okay variety; and, since there are no grind events for the final rank, being able to repeat the final event for both girls is a nice stand-in for now.
However, the grind is a bit too bland. I think either the points needed to rank up need to be reduced (not by much, maybe only by like five or so points each level), there needs needs to be more variety in the grind events (right now each girl only has one two locations per time slot), or both.
Still, that's a fairly common problem for a first demo to have, and will probably be fixed as development continues.
However, the grind is a bit too bland. I think either the points needed to rank up need to be reduced (not by much, maybe only by like five or so points each level), there needs needs to be more variety in the grind events (right now each girl only has one two locations per time slot), or both.
Still, that's a fairly common problem for a first demo to have, and will probably be fixed as development continues.