Review for v0.1
Honestly not a lot to go on, my first piece of advice would definitely be to wait for more content.
But, this first version is enough to catch my interest. I think it might go over some people's heads, but this is taking at least a little influence from Aztec mythology which I think is pretty cool. There's no sexual content yet, but this does seem like it will be telling a story more than being akin to a scene collector. Bonus points for having sound effects and music, always a plus when done right.
The biggest problem is the translation. It's not awful, but enough to be more than noticeable. A lot of characters using the wrong pronouns (such as referring to the male MC as "she") and some general translation errors. If that gets improved, I have no other complaints so far. Though it would be nice to be able to rename the MC.
Seems unique so far, but it's hard to be sure of anything given how short and early it is.
Honestly not a lot to go on, my first piece of advice would definitely be to wait for more content.
But, this first version is enough to catch my interest. I think it might go over some people's heads, but this is taking at least a little influence from Aztec mythology which I think is pretty cool. There's no sexual content yet, but this does seem like it will be telling a story more than being akin to a scene collector. Bonus points for having sound effects and music, always a plus when done right.
The biggest problem is the translation. It's not awful, but enough to be more than noticeable. A lot of characters using the wrong pronouns (such as referring to the male MC as "she") and some general translation errors. If that gets improved, I have no other complaints so far. Though it would be nice to be able to rename the MC.
Seems unique so far, but it's hard to be sure of anything given how short and early it is.