There's not much to say about it, it could be very good, or very bad
Let's be honest, the only thing that really stands out is the art, the art is really good, damn, the main screen made me hard! But to finish here, the story is clichéd, the characters are that stereotype we know, with the right to make some changes to the personalities of some well-known characters and to the story itself. Is that a bad thing? No, not at all, the creators have every right to change the story and the characters as they please, in fact, I'd say it's almost an obligation, the problem here is that it's not done well, I won't say that the characters are bad yet, we're at the beginning, they haven't even had 10 minutes of screen time, but they're certainly not good
The creator knew that it would attract attention, he knew that his art would end up drawing attention to Patreon despite so little content, and it worked, but as I said, it can be bad, version 0. 2 is due to be released in 30 days
That's all there is to it, there's not much to say, I just hope that the creator doesn't start sending updates every month and then not post for a year, it has potential, it just needs some work