VN - HTML - Lapis Arcanum [v0.5] [IndomitableAshur]

Writing: 7/10
Imagery: 7/10
Gameplay: 6/10
Kinks: 9/10
Overall: 8/10

Oh mind control, why can't I quit you?

I bet every lawn care company owner has dreams like this while riding around on their lawn mower, gazing at the trophy wife while wearing reflective sunglasses as to not give away their lewd stares. Find a magical artifact, that somehow feels like it came from A Spell for All, and use it inadvertently to smash all those lonely rich housewives, powerful business women, and hey, why not your bitchy step mom while you're at it? Yeah, quite the dream.

And then the Charmed witches show up, and I thought they might try to take it from you, but instead they kind of just all start falling for it too. I mean, they know what it does, what the MC has used it for to date, and yet they still all end up spreading their legs for the guy. What a life, eh?

I do like that the MC can be either a total dick, or put a kinder spin on things. Like how he can deal with his gross ass brother, treatment of his mom-slut, and so on and so forth. Would like to see more choices and maybe a bit less dialogue, especially the exposition. Let me figure out the story as I go, no need to dump the entire history of Salem on me in one conversation.

Overall, nice medium burn corruption-control game, good choices in women, and a fun Paragon/Renegade system.

first, the general issue. creampies are here, true, unlike most games found here, but the internet is full of free porn and better clips can be found with very littlle effort. but with most realgirl porn text games, for some reason, devs think they just HAVE to use the actual actress. you don't. problem is, the actresses chosen, don't do creampies. resulting in crap clips/images. obviously, we can change them ourselves, as it's too jarring/annoying not to, but just as annoying to CONSTANTLY having to. especially since the game is being pushed mainly to patrons in exchange for money.

on to this games particular issues. there is no way to refuse a main story girl. it let's us do this with side girls. so why not them? at some point, interests are going to conflict about what players are into. and developer's plan for them may not be to their liking content wise. already i have dislikes for forced content for mains. next, we can't even interact with any girl outside the linear events. this needs to change, as it is, everything feels lacking and shallow. what also needs to be decided is if this IS a linear progressive game, or a sandbox. and wheather pregnancies can be repeated, which goes without saying, if dev is not letting us talk to them, we can't possibly knock em up again. let alone enjoy the fetish, since there is no way to see them/interact ect. either way, having no way to talk to the girls on our own with meaningful, or even basic dialogue and pick sex acts/ect is definately hurting the game. lastly, we really need a menu here. a stat log of events, and bio's of the girls detailing choices, realations and chosen control paths. also, some explaination of guardian/tyrant because nothing is expalined so far.

all in all, it's not a terrible game even at it's early stages, but it is bare bones. but unlike most shit games seeping from the bj-hj bunghole of patreon, this one mostly has the right attitude at least.
1. a good focus on actual sex, or a least we actally HAVE the choice to pick that,
2. a tough, dominant MC, don't roll over for the girls as a simp trying to please them/do endless favors for them geetting nothing in return,
3. pursues what he wants, ending in seeing what WE want; getting hot sex scenes with too much forced, progressional, softcore trash.
but with the main girls in the early chapters, MC is starting to simp too much. which i don't like. worried about what comes next now in updates. i realize the power differences ATM, but his little puppy attitude with them seems too compliant and eager to please them. makes him seem like a wimp who's scared. this personality clashes with his with non-mains. i hope in the future, a more refined effort will be made to make their interaction as controlled by the player as it is with side girls, as well as provide more impactful control choices.

The good:
- It's a game?
- It has animations.

The Bad:
- There's basically no point to the story.
- Choices are meaningless.

The ugly:
- Kinetic novel of a series of insta-fuck encounters with mostly silicone/botox laden bimbos, half of which have the attractiveness of a groundhog.

The average model here is about 60% silicon by mass, which is not my preference, and when the author is writing a mediocre power fantasy using stolen lines from better writers, it does make for a very unpleasant experience. It once again does the lazy writing thing of instead of trying to make a dom MC pleasant or interesting, they just make every other male character in the world infinitely worse.

I unfortunately have to say this about a lot of real porn games; It reads like the writer has never actually had female friends, which hurts the seduction writing.

Not the deepest..heaviest story around but it is very enjoyable so far and doesn’t take too much time to get through. I'm guessing that the beginning is almost just for fun. Lots of women, having fun with them, and loads of sex. At the end of v0.2 it seems the real 'game-story' began. A purple ‘meteorite’ lands and the MC gets it and the special powers that come along with it. From there he has fun w women and then the ‘evil character’ comes after him toward the end up the update. Not too far fetched of a story but it’s still fun so far.

Gotta feel for Dev's sometimes, folks complain there isn't enough sex....too much sex....too much text...etc...For me the amount of text was spot on. The story so far was enjoyable as well as a bit humorous. I love the beginning of games when the mc is still a bit of a dork. This is one of the very few, though, where the mc isn't a wimp or an idiot. It’s not a comedy, though..just not hyper serious yet.

Quite a few different women. It’s nice to see a few different porn stars used in addition to the regulars. Different stories with most of them as well. You have the option to skip women which is nice because a couple of them are real sluts that there’s NO way I’d touch…

Hints at threesomes so hopefully I’ll get to choose who….like Emma and her nana? (might be wrong name)...and have multiple events.

Would like to have more of a choice on things rather than being so linear. Maybe they’ll add that. It’s still very early. Overall nice interface, nice fonts and colors, good writing as far as keeping it ‘light enough’ and kind of funny. It’s nice that I can skip a girl and not feel bad about it like I just missed a bunch of the story. Don’t think you can go back and visit the girls though.

No idea abt sounds as I always mute those by default.

Unbelievably boring, zero gameplay, irrelevant choices.

This game is literally just a showreel of 3 to 15 seconds porn clips, average is 6 seconds.

Story tl; dr = "you found magic, you can fuck everyone now"

AI background, text looks like it's written by AI as well.

All choices are like "do you want to fuck this girl?" (yes/no)
or, "who do you want to fuck" (A/B)

Nothing else changes if you do or don't.

Zero buildup, zero gameplay. It's really just like browing pornhub's milf section but 99% is cut off and replaced with AI-story and you don't get to choose the videos.

First of I am biased because I actually like those: Simple just to fap no big build up games.
It has good content for this early stage and some descissions to make. Its clearly one of the better Real-Porn HTML games right now.
Will keep an eye out for this one

No one has rated this game yet so I thought I would start. This is a typical real porn HTML game, but what it does it does well. Played for about an hour and ran into no bugs or spelling / grammar errors. Story isn't completely original but again, it's done well. Maybe slightly heavy on the text but the variety and number of vids make up for it, and are necessary for the story. Models are consistent, no switching up between characters, a little heavy on the MILFs (not complaining at all) but there did appear to have some variety. You get plenty of choices who to interact with and a message at the start of the game mentions the ones you don't choose you'll get a second chance with later in the game. Nice design choice! Plenty of content for an 0.2 version, if dev keeps it up could be one of the better, more polished games of this type. Come for the well written story, stay for the fap.