The only good thing about this VN is the quality of the renders and the LIs, which are not the orverused and recycled ones you see in every VN.
The MC is an NPC, I swear. What a basic and insecure mf! A 25 yo good looking pervert with the personality and libido of an adolescent going through puberty. Can't see one good looking woman without having dirty thoughts and wondering if they have a boyfriend. He is an asbolute looser the 90% of the game and then suddenly, without a reason, he becomes a bold macho who fucks everything that moves because all women want him. He stars being all flirty (using the most cringy and cheesy comments) all out of the sudden. All kids magically love him (just because) and he is a shitty gym instructor who doesn't use any of the gym machines cause all he do is make the girls stretch their muscles.
The first sex scenes in the VN are of other people having sex. Like the husband of one of the mothers cheating on her. What the hell? Why would I want to see that? Haha. There is also an issue with a lack of transitions and continuity that causes a lot of confusion, imo. Events are sometimes not told in a linear fashion but something happens, then you go a bit to the future, then back to the past for a moment, then again to the future.
It's kinda funny that the only black woman in the game is a maid haha. And there's supposed to be a 'fat' girl that imo is just deliciously thick. And when she asks you if she's fat, the MC tells her "yes, you are but dont worry about that" hahah what a lack of empathy and touch, brother.
The thoughts and conversations the MC has with himself sometimes dont make much sense. It's literally the type of thoughts an NPC would have. "Wow, today was a good day" right after he had sex with someone. As other people have said, there is no story. Also, someone said in their review the MC is not a loser but just professional and that is just pure BS.
The LIs are all the typical (of adult VNs) lonely super sexy mother who is horny and misses being touched by a man cause her husband works all the time. So cliche. I think the dev could still save this VN, just gotta give the MC some personality and character, and justify things. Why is he changing? What specific event made him realise he was a stupid soab and is pushing him towards being bolder and whatever.
The MC is an NPC, I swear. What a basic and insecure mf! A 25 yo good looking pervert with the personality and libido of an adolescent going through puberty. Can't see one good looking woman without having dirty thoughts and wondering if they have a boyfriend. He is an asbolute looser the 90% of the game and then suddenly, without a reason, he becomes a bold macho who fucks everything that moves because all women want him. He stars being all flirty (using the most cringy and cheesy comments) all out of the sudden. All kids magically love him (just because) and he is a shitty gym instructor who doesn't use any of the gym machines cause all he do is make the girls stretch their muscles.
The first sex scenes in the VN are of other people having sex. Like the husband of one of the mothers cheating on her. What the hell? Why would I want to see that? Haha. There is also an issue with a lack of transitions and continuity that causes a lot of confusion, imo. Events are sometimes not told in a linear fashion but something happens, then you go a bit to the future, then back to the past for a moment, then again to the future.
It's kinda funny that the only black woman in the game is a maid haha. And there's supposed to be a 'fat' girl that imo is just deliciously thick. And when she asks you if she's fat, the MC tells her "yes, you are but dont worry about that" hahah what a lack of empathy and touch, brother.
The thoughts and conversations the MC has with himself sometimes dont make much sense. It's literally the type of thoughts an NPC would have. "Wow, today was a good day" right after he had sex with someone. As other people have said, there is no story. Also, someone said in their review the MC is not a loser but just professional and that is just pure BS.
The LIs are all the typical (of adult VNs) lonely super sexy mother who is horny and misses being touched by a man cause her husband works all the time. So cliche. I think the dev could still save this VN, just gotta give the MC some personality and character, and justify things. Why is he changing? What specific event made him realise he was a stupid soab and is pushing him towards being bolder and whatever.