The game starts with a promising premise, but unfortunately, it quickly falters due to an uninspired and weak protagonist, who seems more like a passive observer than an active participant in his own story. While he is supposedly intelligent, the MC often finds himself making poor decisions, which detracts from any potential growth or intrigue in his character. Instead of progressing or taking charge, the narrative often feels stagnant, relying heavily on repetitive scenes of spouses engaging in sexual activities with one another.
It’s frustrating to see the focus shift to these scenes that, in essence, don’t add value to the plot. The constant display of married couples having sex becomes redundant and feels like an unnecessary diversion from the main narrative. In the first three chapters, the MC doesn't take much action himself; instead, we’re given glimpses of his wife and other LIs in sexual situations, reinforcing the idea that the story revolves around the act of sex rather than character development or a compelling plot.
Moreover, the game makes an odd narrative decision by periodically switching perspectives, suddenly placing the player in the shoes of one of the LIs (wives). This shift often leads to confusing, inconsistent moments where the MC's choices—such as answering the phone or not—result in whether or not the player gets to experience a sexual encounter. These abrupt transitions from the MC to the wives’ perspectives only disrupt the flow and fail to contribute meaningfully to the storyline.
There is a lack of clarity regarding what the game’s central focus is. Is it meant to explore the MC's potential to get involved with the wives, or is it about the tension between the spouses? There is no clear indication of where the story is headed or what the player should expect next. The lack of direction makes it difficult to engage with the game on a deeper level, and it leaves the player questioning whether there is more to the story than the repetitive cycle of voyeurism and indecision.
If the developer wants to salvage this game, a significant rewrite is needed. Moving to a third-person or omniscient perspective could provide a much-needed sense of clarity and engagement. This would allow for more dynamic storytelling and enable the player to witness the events unfolding from multiple angles, without being constantly tied to the weak, passive perspective of the MC.
Furthermore, time and resources could be better spent focusing on advancing the plot, especially by allowing the MC to take more action and interact with the wives more directly. Rather than dwelling on the obvious (that husbands and wives have sex), the game should aim to develop the characters and their relationships, giving the player a stronger connection to the narrative.
Additionally, improving the overall game structure with clearer tags and a more concise overview would certainly help. It’s disappointing to feel like so much potential has been wasted on scenes that don’t push the story forward. However, I will give credit where it’s due—the renders and the quality of the girls are certainly impressive, and it’s evident that some effort went into creating visually appealing content. Unfortunately, this is not enough to save a story that feels stagnant, unstructured, and lacking in meaningful direction.
Ultimately, this game could have been so much more, but as it stands, it falls short of delivering a compelling experience. If the issues mentioned above are addressed, there may still be hope for improvement, but for now, I’m choosing to drop it.
It’s frustrating to see the focus shift to these scenes that, in essence, don’t add value to the plot. The constant display of married couples having sex becomes redundant and feels like an unnecessary diversion from the main narrative. In the first three chapters, the MC doesn't take much action himself; instead, we’re given glimpses of his wife and other LIs in sexual situations, reinforcing the idea that the story revolves around the act of sex rather than character development or a compelling plot.
Moreover, the game makes an odd narrative decision by periodically switching perspectives, suddenly placing the player in the shoes of one of the LIs (wives). This shift often leads to confusing, inconsistent moments where the MC's choices—such as answering the phone or not—result in whether or not the player gets to experience a sexual encounter. These abrupt transitions from the MC to the wives’ perspectives only disrupt the flow and fail to contribute meaningfully to the storyline.
There is a lack of clarity regarding what the game’s central focus is. Is it meant to explore the MC's potential to get involved with the wives, or is it about the tension between the spouses? There is no clear indication of where the story is headed or what the player should expect next. The lack of direction makes it difficult to engage with the game on a deeper level, and it leaves the player questioning whether there is more to the story than the repetitive cycle of voyeurism and indecision.
If the developer wants to salvage this game, a significant rewrite is needed. Moving to a third-person or omniscient perspective could provide a much-needed sense of clarity and engagement. This would allow for more dynamic storytelling and enable the player to witness the events unfolding from multiple angles, without being constantly tied to the weak, passive perspective of the MC.
Furthermore, time and resources could be better spent focusing on advancing the plot, especially by allowing the MC to take more action and interact with the wives more directly. Rather than dwelling on the obvious (that husbands and wives have sex), the game should aim to develop the characters and their relationships, giving the player a stronger connection to the narrative.
Additionally, improving the overall game structure with clearer tags and a more concise overview would certainly help. It’s disappointing to feel like so much potential has been wasted on scenes that don’t push the story forward. However, I will give credit where it’s due—the renders and the quality of the girls are certainly impressive, and it’s evident that some effort went into creating visually appealing content. Unfortunately, this is not enough to save a story that feels stagnant, unstructured, and lacking in meaningful direction.
Ultimately, this game could have been so much more, but as it stands, it falls short of delivering a compelling experience. If the issues mentioned above are addressed, there may still be hope for improvement, but for now, I’m choosing to drop it.
