VN - Ren'Py - Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.4] [Lesson in Loyalty]

Small initial version of the game, with not much content but has potential.

Models are very nice and realistic albeit "too pretty" but being a game and fantasy that is not really an issue.

The dialogue is not as good as it could be, there is some work needed to proof read and structure sentences better.

Characters that know the MC need more introduction, the one scene felt disconnected and a bit too forced to be a random coincidence.

The MC is a beta male that is as they always are to me, highly annoying to play as, but I suspect that the developer purposefully made the MC this way to suggest and start on a low confidence character that gradually gains more confidence to become an alpha. I hope!

As said, early days, but good start, can go a few places or absolutely nowhere, lets see what happens in a few updates. Hopefully they wont be too small and occur in reasonable time-frames.

This is a nice start, and it's going to be a real treat for those who love milfs and women of the married variety.

The MC is almost so down on his luck, i started wondering if he pissed off a witch. This cat is cursed! The cool thing about it, however, is that he not only hangs onto hope but remains a good man despite his obvious troubles and despair.

If I had one complaint with this game, it is so sickening and difficult to watch a man continuously punked. And not just by men, but f-ing schoolgirls too. I hope this guy's character arc from "zero to hero" starts soon, because this sh*t is hard to watch.

That said, I look forward to seeing where this magic carpet takes us -- just so long as homeboy grows a pair.