VN - Ren'Py - Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.6] [RWA Studios]

great art mid story, hot scenes and emo protag, for whom making moves feel unnatural , but moves and writing goddam they are gr8

especially the art ..... chef's kiss at once I could only play till ch 4

So, Lesson in Loyalty now holds the dubious title of "The worst AVN Zorro didn't drop".

Pros:
1) Good visuals.
2) It starts a little slow, but by mid-game it presents a nice array of lewds.
3) Really good if you're in a mood for some netori.
4) MC has a good non-standard model.

Cons:
1) Below average writing, and curiously, in two different ways. Early on, it's just too simple; later, its gets a standard structure of two phrases per line. Maybe it's me not being a native speaker, but I ended up feeling like I was reading some non-rhyming poetry.
2) The story is barely there. A pure slice-of-life.
3) Lack of romance. There are just a couple of 'romantic' options, they're still married and have limited presence.
4) The font is too small.
5) MC's personality changes as the plot demands. A hero today, he may easily become a coward tomorrow.

2 stars. Pretty good if you want some netori, rather useless otherwise. I wonder why I didn't drop it; maybe I just enjoy the kink of a tutor seducing moms?

This game received too many undeservingly low ratings. It seems that a lot of folks were put off by one or two details that they didn't like, and then degraded the whole game.

I find the story engaging and believable within the context of adult games.
The models are excellent and the animations are top notch. Of course, all DEVs have their taste of ideal female bodies but that is to be expected. This creator likes pronounced curves so if you are not into that, you should probably skip this game.

The pace is a bit slower but that feeds a positive anticipation and avoids the "all the women instantly climbing on MC's dick" syndrome that a lot of games here suffer from, a good example being Milfylicious.

Keep up the good work, dude!

Really love how this game is published, the level of skill in rendering the characters are top notch plus I love how the game's user interface relates on it's design overall. Simple but effective. I wish you all the best for this project and your future projects. Keep up the good working and do know people appreciate your talent and hard work.

So many beautiful characters.
So many hooks for stories.
So much potential.
...
So little content.

This games is scattered across it's characters so much that it gets comical. Instead of steady progress with a character we get constantly switched around between them. And then devs remember that it's a porn game and throw in a sudden and unprovoked sex scene. And follow it up with a chain of twists, and each twist interrupts previous one. As a result - no story actually progresses all that much, no romance evolves, overall narration feels jerky.

But i must be fair - models are hot, sex scenes are beautiful. I'm throwing this game into "check again in a year" pile, even if just to check out new scenes.

Oh, and there is exactly 0 sex content with the character on the main banner. And only lessons so far were math lessons to MILF's kids, so 0 lessons in loyalty so far as well. Complete bamboozle.

Heya there, if you're looking for a game to avoid because is getting killed by it's own dev, look no further.

Chapter 1-4 were fine, good even, mc was *real* renders were great.

Then they somehow decided to change the story/models to new ones from chapter 5+ (they're trash compared to earlier chapters). To top it off, they will remake the earlier chapters... so play chapters 1-4 if you can while it's still good, but don't get too attached, it will die soon. You'll probably laugh and be like *wtf* once you reach chapter 5

Game's as good as dead, sad...

P-S : My english is bad, not my first language, sorry not sorry.

This is an incredibly well-made game that stands out for its stunning visuals and overall presentation. The renders are absolutely top-notch, with every scene and character design looking polished and visually captivating. While the game may be somewhat shorter in length than some might hope for, it more than compensates for this with its high-quality content and attention to detail. Each interaction feels thoughtfully crafted, and the storyline, though concise, manages to be engaging and immersive. It's clear that a lot of care and effort went into creating an experience that balances aesthetic appeal with meaningful content, making this a standout title worth exploring.

It's starts off as "everybody is having sex but MC simulator" which I understand why that would make people quit pretty early on.
I will say that it's strange that the MC goes from a cross fit chiseled twig to a pretty muscular guy in one update. He also goes from shy and quiet to can't stop talking.
There is a scene between MC and Lillie where the same thing is said over and over but different, that was annoying.
Overall I really like the story even though there are some things that throw me for a loop but I get what the dev is trying to do. Renders and animations are top tier.

Ch.6

I don´t think this game has any main story. The game is more about the stories of its female characters and the reasons each one needs a dick because of her life situation.
Sometimes, you are happy to see how the MC handles the situation, but too often he does say something awkward or inappropriate. The sad thing is that the game almost succeeds in making you care about its characters. But later in the game, the writing gets so bad that you need to skip some parts, if you want to keep even a tiny spark of interest in the story and its characters.

Visually game is perfect. Sure you can always nitpick about something, but overall women are perfect combination of sexiness and beauty. Also bonus for having women with different sizes.
Sex scenes are imaginative, last long enough and have good animations.
Regular conversations are more enjoyable because women look good, have sexy clothing and camera angles use this. So almost always some eye candy to enjoy.

I think there has been changes for better in the writing, but it is still dragging these great visuals down.

Couldn't play longer than 5 minutes before deleting . With the limited usable settings, it was more that a headache that for whats its worth. Its all about the first impression with people when bring something to market . Bare minimum shies people away for future investments.

Wow what a surprise, RWA Studios. They did the same thing with the female models in the game World of Secrets, giving all the girls the same nose , eliminating the personality each one had, which was loocking very good before.
And now they've also given the same nose in this game, making them all look alike and eliminating their own personalities again. Why? What an absurd way to ruin the models without asking anyone.

Was liking this game from the get go. Great renders, each LI and the MC were decently engaging. Then Chapter 5 dropped and they changed "game designer" to "RWA Studios". Promising better Renders, story, and what not. And, completely from the get go went F#ck that sh!t. Changed the character design of a character you just barely met with out going back to the last chapter and redoing the render. And, threw out the f#cking decisions that you made in the last 2 chapters. Any AVN, no matter the Render Quality, Animation Quality, and/or even the Story, never gets above 2 if the Creator completely disregards any of the decisions that the player makes. If the decision doesn't matter don't f#cking give to us, and make a linear story and nothing else.

One of the best storylines and animations. I like how the creator concentrates majorly on married women with little children, unlike most creators who prefer older women; his choice of younger moms is perfect.

I very much enjoyed my time with this game rn. The premise is intruiging and the renders are top notch. way above the standart o this website. The characzer model of "Olivia" itself is absolutly stunning and by far the hottest of this game. I am still unsure about the changes in chapter 5, some character models lokk better, some worse (mc f.ex,. was flawless, now he looks a bit weird) - I just hope Olivia will still look the same.

Renders. No objection. It is up to date to the standard of review date.

Story. A bit refreshing when MC is the tuition teacher and gym instructor, but again lack of a coherent main plot. This is common in AVN with common theme. But there are moments there that shine.

Characters. Probably the weakest part of the entire game. There is no much motivation or goal out of each LI or MC. But then, probably it also easy to read without delve too much each character. not every AVN must be a masterpiece.

Dialogue. Actually so far, it dont find much issue with it. Even the inner dialogue wasnt that bad. In fact, having LI inner dialogue read it is crucial to understand the LI thats is very bare in their backstory.

I like the premise of this game, it is intriguing, a tutor-instructor, it is interesting of how the story of being a tutor-instructor will get his life change by the characters that will introduce later in the game.

Pros: Interesting concept. Models on this game is top notch especially if you like thicc LI's.

Cons: Dev should do is better writing of the MC. No need to change the old models and don't rush the story so we could have a sex scene. Animation is mediocre at best, and midway of the story is a bit of headscratcher. I don't know what's up with the dev but I genuinely think that they ran into the wall and don't know what to do with their characters, because the studio is different than the last time so there is a big change on the game. Anyway, goodluck to the devs, I will still play this game and hopefully it will better in the next update.

Well... another update from this dev where everything is different in a bad way.

First of all the first chapters have the wonderful renders we all liked and played this game. From chapter four everything is different. For example the mc is like a muscled buffoon with a cocky attitude, nothing like the first chapters where he was more of a human. Second most of the female models are busty and sexy but ugly. So ugly that a plastic bag is needed for sure. Large heads, larger forehead,s small noses, no lips, disfigured faces like from a failed plastic surgery

Take Rose for example, the first lady you visit to provide lessons to her son. She was realy beautiful and now is probably the ugliest model in any VN, excluding the Monica and Anna from this dev other game.

I hope the best for the dev, but I will no longer play these games. A friendly advice, if you change something so much, why dont you start a new game. Trying to continue something which is so different that will provide disappointment, bad reviews etc is probably not the way to go

Wow, the reviews seem to underscore some sort of VN gang war here -- from 1-star to 5-star and back again... I really think neither camp is valid.
A one-star is just stupid, considering the rendering, writing and such. Just silly, stop it.
And 5-star, come on... that's for masterpieces, IMO, which this, however nicely wrought, is not.
So. Netorare? Netorase? Netori? My personal preference, if such infidelity must be done, is Netori, since I'm selfish, and I'm a girl that likes to see my MC "avatar" get his (or hers). But whoa nellie, it seems that I have dipped my foot into the wacky river of NTR, wherein ALL emotional bets are off. So, yeah.
The basic trope of "stumbling upon" sex opportunities while supposedly tutoring pre-teen boys is pretty eeky, and the bonus of "maid-sex" was blaaah --but hey, this is PORN, and some cultures ADORE maid-sex so shuttup!! Where there's a willy there's a way, wight?
And I did like the Accidental-touristy nature of the MC, and the yearnings of the LI/married babygirls, with or without youngun's. Peace-out.

In short, this game is a great masterpiece. It is worth playing for everyone.
I played the sandbox game of this author before and felt it was just average, but this VN game amazed me.
I can't find fault with every aspect. It's very comfortable to play.
Big perfect breasts. Exquisite expression.
Ordinary background. Wonderful story.
This game makes me feel very comfortable playing it. That's enough. The author is a genius.
This game is now of particular interest to me.
I recommend everyone who hasn't played this game to give it a try. You won't be disappointed.

In my opinion, this creator is greatly underrated, and their works receive far less attention than they deserve. I don’t mean to say that their works are flawless—there are clearly some issues with the plot and character development. However, compared to some other projects that, for reasons I fail to understand, gain unusual acclaim, their work is arguably even better.

The creator’s art style and visual effects are outstanding. The graphics have a truly cinematic quality, and the developer has created an impressive array of renders. all models are beautiful and unique. The music collection is relatively good and fits well with the story's atmosphere.

My suggestion for this creator is to stop leaving their works unfinished and to show greater perseverance in continuing and completing them.