VN - Ren'Py - Leviathan [v0.03] [Mr. Ovis]

Cool game incoming watch out!!!!

Premise: essentially a sailor gets entangled with some shady stuff and basically a group of mercenaries trying to do something big.

Disclaimer: if looking for FAP, hold on for now since currently limited lewds as of 0.03. if you are looking for a cool story, definitely consider it. The renders and writing significantly improve as story goes on so don't drop it in first hour or so. Just see it thru.

Pros:

• Story and music are banger.
• My fav part is probably the humor and sci-fi renders.
• Side character are amazing. MCs best friend has such cool abilities, it's fckin badass.
• MC is a lovable perv. Usually AVNs make MC just weird and hormonally deranged, this MC is levelheaded but can be pervy when needed lol.

Cons:

• Something about writing in earlier chapters needs improvement. Whether it be pacing of lore dump or interaction, or adding more humor or something cuz I found myself skipping quite a lot in earlier chapter but it got significantly better later near David's scene. Renders also improver quite a lot.

Verdict: yeppity yep pick-ity-up this cool VN.

my first (mostly)naval themed game, and it was a joy!
the setting feels right, story evolves organic and with nice speed. ovis used some really nice and unique effects to improve the scene atmosphere, that is really refreshing.
also the character development progress feels right, not to fast - to much. the char depth could get improved just a tiny bit.
the soundtrack just hitted exactly my taste, keep it up like that!
the improvment of quality with each release is also nice, thats something really good and keeps my hopes high. theres also alot of potential within the story and im thrilled to see the next update.
current version is about ~5,5h long

simple decision within the review rating 5/5

I've got to say it took me a little while to warm up to this story, but once I got past the beginning, I was drawn in by the interesting character development, attractive and creative use of models, and the quality of the storytelling as it unfolds with unexpected plot developments that nonetheless flow from earlier events, and open up new possibilities for our hero and his teammates. I will continue to follow this one with anticipation of any updates.

I'll give 5/5 even though it does have flaws, but overall has a interesting world, attractive LIs, and potential for greatness.
The latest update is a drastic upscale in visuals compared to the beginning.
However the update ended quite abruptly.
Will definitely be returning for each update.

Well, what can I say? I was actually pleasantly surprised at how good and well executed this was despite the early release. It's been a while since I've seen a game with this much potential. Let’s start with the world and man I’m in love. I really like Kaiju’s/Monsters and the cyberpunk theme just makes it better. Storywise, it’s pretty good, but I will hold back on this because, like I said, it’s still an early release. Now, with the characters, the character models are pretty decent, and the personalities are ok as of now, but once again, I can’t say too much since there is not a lot of content yet. Anyways, I have really high hopes for this one. I’m sure this game will continue growing and getting better with time. Keep up the amazing work dev.