It's a "short" VN with average graphics.
I like the female model in general but some of the renders of her look strange.
The story starts like a cliché porn movie. Delivery boy arrives to a flat, hot model opens the door and asks him to help with the faucet. After some wet clothing lewdness sex ensues.
Then for "reasons" the hot model becomes interested in the boring average guy and a LOT of boring dialogues and some more sex later they decide to try a real relationship.
Girl is a famous model, who seems to be quite easy as she seduces a random delivery boy and her previous relationship was also a casual one where she started to sleep with a photographer after she noticed he got hard because of her. You would think she has enough chances to get a guy for casual sex in her job and wouldn't need to seduce delivery guys. And after some small talk about each other's families and she suddenly wants to try a relationship? It just doesn't really fit together. Again, it could have been a great VN story if this change of mind was stretched out over a longer time or there was some explanation why she wanted to change her relationships.
MC is a total average guy. Almost a loser (with a huge dick though). Their meeting is not relevant or interesting enough to trigger the start something between them if not for the girl wanting to have sex with a random guy.
The story somewhat reminds me of the movie
She's Out of My League , except for the girls personality.
As I said there is a ton of dialogue, internal monologue and narration so in the end I just scanned through each line to see if there is anything interesting there. There wasn't.
In a longer game, spaced out over a longer time these dialogues could have been a good build up for a relationship. Here it starts with sex and then you have to suffer through the lot of text, that You already know wont matter. Why? Because You already know this is a short game. There won't be any future development where all those details about family and cute stories from the past will matter. It's not like you will meet those characters. These kind of details don't fit a short story in my opinion.
It took me 2 tries to finish the game as I was bored in the middle of it. In the end I didn't even care for the sex scenes, because it's just a short game and they are too close together and they are similar vanilla scenes. Nothing new to become excited about again after the previous one.
If possible, I'd like to give it 2.5 stars. I hesitated to give it 3 stars because the graphics are ok and the story is not a horrible mess but decided to give it a 2 because I felt too bored and even as a short VN I just wanted it to end.
It was a nice try as a short VN, but I think this format needs be more focused and every scene should be something important for the story and this game is not like that.
