VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lewd Love Stories [v0.1] [Stone Eyes]

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Stone Eyes

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The worst part of visual novels is waiting weeks for an update that is 99% text and sex scenes that made it not worth the wait. That's why I've created Lewd Love Stories. Every week there will be a new story or a new chapter to an ongoing story. Some stories will be short and sweet, and others will be played over multiple chapters. Each chapter will provide enough story to get you invested and enough sex scenes to keep you satisfied. The first story is Girl Next Door, containing three parts, will show childhood friends Ellie and David become closer than ever. The stories will be released weekly allowing the community to suggest possible stories.
Part one is available below, Enjoy!
-Stone Eyes​

Thread Updated: 2020-01-02
Release Date: 2020-01-02
Developer: Stone Eyes
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Version: 0.1
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Really liked the preview images, so I instantly downloaded it. Here's my brief review:

+ Ellie looks hot
+ Nice render quality
+ Stacey looks fine too

+- David looks like a fresh, new male DAZ model
+- I know it's just a subtle thing but thanks for changing the characters' clothes for each day
+- Liked the choice of clothes

- Definitely needs a proofreader, the Engrish is confusing at times
- Sex scenes are kinda uninspired, it's just like watching Brazzers porn
- Very light on content and forgive me, dear dev, but I highly doubt you'll be able to drop one of these every week. If you do, however, you got my support!

Just another bit from me, not to hate on this project, but when the first sentence of the game description talks about how most games don't deliver good updates, you sure do put a lot of extra pressure on your shoulders. There ARE plenty of games that drop extensive, crazy bit high quality updates monthly or every two months. I think you should just do the best job you can do. You certainly have the skills, the renders are fantastic and I liked the models / clothes. I do think a proofreader / writing assistant who could extend the "foreplay" for sex scenes would really help this game.

If anything, I'll remember this game by the goofy but sweet big smile Ellie's showing off.
 
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batman666 said:
Really liked the preview images, so I instantly downloaded it. Here's my brief review:

+ Ellie looks hot
+ Nice render quality
+ Stacey looks fine too

+- David looks like a fresh, new male DAZ model
+- I know it's just a subtle thing but thanks for changing the characters' clothes for each day
+- Liked the choice of clothes

- Definitely needs a proofreader, the Engrish is confusing at times
- Sex scenes are kinda uninspired, it's just like watching Brazzers porn
- Very light on content and forgive me, dear dev, but I highly doubt you'll be able to drop one of these every week. If you do, however, you got my support!

Just another bit from me, not to hate on this project, but when the first sentence of the game description talks about how most games don't deliver good updates, you sure do put a lot of extra pressure on your shoulders. There ARE plenty of games that drop extensive, crazy bit high quality updates monthly or every two months. I think you should just do the best job you can do. You certainly have the skills, the renders are fantastic and I liked the models / clothes. I do think a proofreader / writing assistant who could extend the "foreplay" for sex scenes would really help this game.

If anything, I'll remember this game by the goofy but sweet big smile Ellie's showing off.
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batman666 Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate you taking the time to point out a few I can work on:)(y)
 
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Unfortunately no own decisions you have to accept what happens. "A book where you just have to turn the page ..." Of course there is still a lot of work in there. Maybe we better it ..
 
BaasB

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only girl on girl, no thanks will skip this one, David looks like a wimp

Good luck with this game
 
☆Jonathan Wick♤

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Stone Eyes said:
That’s just one scene BaasB
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This has definitely caught my attention and I look forward to the next update to see how this story progresses.

My only advice for future updates or future stories would be to give the player some degree of control over what content or fetish they want to see which they want to avoid. Taking as an example this first installment there are surely several who do not like the scene of girl on girl even more knowing that our protagonist is sent to the frienzone.

Anyway that would be all. Good luck with this project and I look forward to the next update.
 
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Akira K. said:
This has definitely caught my attention and I look forward to the next update to see how this story progresses.

My only advice for future updates or future stories would be to give the player some degree of control over what content or fetish they want to see which they want to avoid. Taking as an example this first installment there are surely several who do not like the scene of girl on girl even more knowing that our protagonist is sent to the frienzone.

Anyway that would be all. Good luck with this project and I look forward to the next update.
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Thanks Akira K. :)
 
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