VN - Ren'Py - Life Together [v0.1] [Mr. BlackEyes]

Really exited for this one, I hope it gets released really really soon. The sister is cute asf, please add the inc patch with a toggle ingame........................................................................

Pros:
- good graphics
- writing
Neutral:
- plot
- navigation
- progression
Bad:
- content is poor, even for v0.1

Overall there is potential, but that's it, the content is average, and even for an early version it's disappointing. The graphics are good, and the game doesn't spend much time on mechanics, so there is potential, at the moment it's not worth the trouble.

Good renders and a decent story... Dialogues are a little immature and rough but still okay... The sandbox elements though are atrocious... This would be a million times better if the sandbox was removed and it would only be a vn, cause the sandbox does not add any value to the game...

Ill be honest, this is basically an empty 1.0.
Its literally a few more renders added to the demo and one lewd scene which was so poorly done.

Renders are nice but translation is super rough and the plot is so poorly established as well. Honestly thought this was going to be a good release but nope.

Review for V0.1
Well as the rating suggests, this wasn't a great experience. What I will say is, that the graphics are quite decent and the girls especially are extremely pretty. That’s basically the only real positive here.

The rest of the game is pretty dissapointing. Literally within the first five minutes of playing this game, all 3 main LI's have already accidentally seen the MC’s p*nis. Like really, that’s the setup? On top of that, there’s this rich neighbor woman who dresses so desperately. She of course sees you delicious p*nis (the mc really has a difficult time of not exposing himself to literally everyone), and just wants to f you because of that. There’s barely any story to speak of, no romantic progression, and the characters feel one-dimensional. It plays out like one big cliché without any of the build-up or character work that could make this game interesting.

Also, the same annoying song just keeps playing lol. There are no sound effects or any different song.

So yeah, unless you’re just looking for eye candy and nothing else, I’d advise skipping this one.

Very nice game at chapter1. sweet girls, ugly Aunt. Simple kinda stupid story as usual cool but poor guy living with ekhmmm "friends". lack of "landlady" but there is ugly Aunt instead of her. animation is nice but laggy, but there is FPS overmade but some of user.

Amazing gorgeous CG, I'm very suprised at how good looking they were and not using old copy-paste versions. Looking forward to next updates. Good job Bob!!! This is what we've been needing for a long time!

VERSION: 0.1
SUMMARY: Good renders, but impossible to call the VN good at all with all the plot and dialogue issues.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context.

1. Model Visuals............................................. : 5
2. General Visuals.......................................... : 4
3. Animation Quality....................................... : 4
4. Character (Persona).................................... : 2
5. Story Quality & Pacing................................. : 1
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........................... : 2
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics.......................... : 3
8. Content Amount & General Quality................ : 3
9. Sounds & Music.......................................... : 3
10. H-Content & Fetishes................................... : 3

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Really good looking models, LIs are beautiful, almost too good looking, but this is a game
2. MC looks decent, well built, but (major but with his look and age, see CONS)
3. Music and sounds are good, ambient sounds are nice and provide a more immersive experience.

CONS:

1. MC and characters in general are not "aged" correctly, making continuity and the story in general work pretty much a shit show.
2. Per above and story, there really isn't much of one and what is there is just thrown together in messy fashion.
3. The plot is not believable due to things like ages for characters are much younger than what we are lead to believe if we simply look the characters. They look too young but we are to believe they are older, where others look too old and are actually suppose to be young. Read more in my comments section.
4. Added to my point above are the character relationships, they don't make much sense at all. This game, is intended to be played as an incest one so using the patch technically is a requirement if the dialogue and story make a bit more sense.
5. The living situation makes ZERO sense, add the age issue and you have an even bigger fuckup trying to make sense of the story and the circumstances. Its just a messy clusterfuck IMO.
6. Added to the generally poorly planned story and plot is the poor dialogue, its not horrible in terms of grammar or structure, its poor in terms of content, the "daughter" speaks about her mothers parents, wouldnt that be her grandparents? Things like that, the dev needs to go recheck the script.
7. Story is pretty much horseshit with all the tits and ass hanging out, no reservations for any of the woman or even MC to walk around in underwear, or flat out showing off there tits, ass, pussy and leaving almost nothing to the imagination, especially the "aunt" which drives a blantent porn logic story and plot, making the game a fail for me. The internet is full of porn...

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context which could be useful to the developer.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

• Per con about ages. First the relationships are shit, like the MCs friend, "hello friend" " I want to live with you friend" "My friends parents are ok with me living with you" This is pretty much what is there now, its a nonessential mess. Now, lets just add the incest patch for some kinks, ok so now the relationships make a little bit more sense...apart from the fact that there is a awful lot of sexual tension between siblings and aunt. Then we meet the "friend" who is now the daughter, which again pushes the age issue for the MC, unless he is 28 and the "daughter" 10 it could have worked, but she looks at least 16 probably 18 which means he would need to be almost 36 to "legally" be the dad. Even if he was 30, he looks easily 21 maybe 24, which causes further mess with that "daughter" character. Ultimately whether you use the incest patch or not, the relationships do not make sense. If the game is, and its possible, intended as an incest game, then the MC is too young to be "Emily's" dad (unless he was married to the her biological mother" and the MC is her adopted or step-father, in which case the dev must make that clear immediately)
• Adding a bit of beard to the MC could also push his age up to make the whole daughter thing more believable.
• Apart from relationships and age issues compounding the issues I have with the dialogue, the game comes accross more as a showcase of models design talent than a VN with decent story. I believe the dev can make fucking good looking models and renders that are great, but they driving a very poor plot and dialogue with blatent promiscuity and sluttiness from the LIs which attempts to "hide" the fact that there is really no story or decent plot to be found anywhere in this game.
• For this story to make a bit more sense, I would age the MC and his older sister a bit more as well as the Aunt a smidge just to make them look more like they in their mid to late 30s, aunt mid to late 50s at least. I would also make the MC look older, give him a beard and let him dress more appropriately like give the guy a shirt, he isn't a young frat boy. Then add to the story, that the "kids" i.e. MC and sisters ended up with the parents debt and fell on hard times or something that justifies and creates a compelling reason for the 2 30 plus year old siblings living together currently. Then carry on for there...

TLDR:

Visually great looking game, built around a lot of eye candy, skanky LIs, but no decent story and poor defining of relationships make this game difficult to like, which is a bummer, because if the dev spent half the time on the dialogue and story they clearly spent on the renders, this could easily have been a very good release....

Really good start, good luck with your game. Models are excellent, language translation (I assume it's translation), could be better. Might want to get that proofed. Otherwise a great start, well done.

The first episode turned out to be really interesting, and I really liked it. The script is good, and
Maybe the current story is nothing special, but at least I like the different environment. I'm looking forward to seeing how this game ends.

The game is very much to my liking, the demo was very nice, in the demo was at once 2 ways showed, if I so understood, it is a storyline pleasant to read, the characters are made beautiful, and the first version, which I passed, very me zaschil, there was only text, but this is only the beginning of the game, the second version of the game will be very big and gorcha, which we will see a little later, and so good luck to the author with the game.

Just WOOW, nice job. The characters are awesome. Maybe a map would be good in next updates to have a sense of freedom in the game. We feel that the developer has put heart into this project. I highly recommend it to all fans of the genre!

Great characters and renders so far this should be a great project if the creator creates consistent updates. One of of female leads looks like the WIAB characters as well. I would play this again anyday.

best start, will be a perfect story within. cheers mate, we'll wait the next update. hope so soon, cause there's no game as good this one at this time. good job dev, like the art, and more so the environment.

A very short introduction to the game. The visuals look great, the models are beautiful and the set-up looks interesting: a protagonist torn between authority and free spirit, with the corresponding LI's to each path. Great start, hope to see more.
My only criticism would be that the protagonist is supposed to be 34 and the older LI is supposed to be 36 but they both look at least a decade younger. I don't really see why not make them in their early to mid twenties, to match their appearance.

Right now there is much content so it's hard to rate this game.
Visually it looks very good, I think the main issue with it right now, is that it has some grammatical errors. But other than that, it looks promising