VN - Ren'Py - Life With Chloe [Alpha v0.8] [AlterXArt]

really great game, hopefully we can see what mind control or corruption that this game offer to us in the full release (full demo). hopefully mind control since I love mind control but anyway thanks for making this game

As of: Alpha v0.8
Very promising, looks good, nice theme.
Game is super short currently, but still shows promise.

The day system is kinda a forced chain of stuff for demo purposes, which sucks. Will be better when there's more stuff.

Also, highly recommend including in dev focus repeatable events and gallery. At least, if you have some idea of the groundwork needed, it won't be as annoying to add later?

I'm genuinely enjoying the game! I really like the way Chloe is getting corrupted and her gothic style!. The renders look absolutely fantastic, If the project maintains this direction, I believe it has the potential to become something truly big. I am very much looking forward to the next versions and seeing where you take this excellent work. Keep it up!

A Good Start
Now the game is still in alpha so not many are available. It takes about 5 minutes to finish.
However, it is a promising start considering that the developer also said that it is a light project with a funny touch.
As positive aspects we have:
-choices ( dual, but still better than nothing )
-stats (4 in total, one is not showed so far)
-FMC looks good ( soft goth girl ,a niche that is used usually for secondary characters , now we have it on main screen)
As negative:
-characters appearance needs a bit polish ( saw some patreon pics look much better , but maybe its just my potato pc)
-direct approach ( game just throw you in some situations, some people like build up/reasons for things to happen)

In conclusion, I think it's a good start, I hope that the creator will stick to the project in his personal note (and not become an amalgam of ideas) and add quality and good things
good luck!