VN - Ren'Py - Light and Dark [P1 v0.3.1] [Neko-Hime]

Lots of long and repetitive dialogue. No sexual content without the patch - which is password protected and apparently only available for patrons. So the free version is utterly worthless. Paywalled games deserve 0 stars.

idk.. felt off, cba non sence kinda game, like my iq was falling while playing, plot and conversations are pretty meh.. yh its for the faps but if i dont want story id rather go and watch porn, even those 'storys' has more sence

This game is obviously made just for faps. It's not bad per se but it's clear that the Dev don't care much about the graphics, plot or the characters.

Everything in this game is average, the models are the standard Daz models, not very much altered. They are vary in size too much sometimes which doesn't reflect age difference. A loli is made as a hebe or an adult but two times smaller in height. Fuck the body proportions which are normally different IRL. The most that you can expect is the different tits size.

The story is also very generic. The female family members of all ages and generations don't have much remorse to immediately fuck the MC who is said to be six years old but speaks not like a child but like an illiterate immigrant and has a body of a teenager.

The animations are mostly jerky. The characters' interactions are usually along the lines "well, what you say is interesting, but lets just fuck" .

All in all, this game isn't bad for faps, it goes straight to the business. Just don't expect anything deeper like a coherent story or interesting characters from it.

VERSION: Part 1 - 0.3.1
SUMMARY: Decent renders and has some kinks, but written poorly.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context.

1. Model Visuals............................................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals.......................................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality....................................... : ⭐⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona).................................... : ⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing................................. : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........................... : ⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics........................... : ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality........................... : ⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music.......................................... : ⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes................................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Average: 31 of 50 possible points giving a 62% rating i.e. 3 stars.

PROS:

1. LIs and models generally look pretty good.
2. Animations are not bad actually, they could be a bit more dynamic with "spray" moving and dropping not just hanging in the air (you will see what I mean)
3. Writing structure is not bad and reads fine and well.
4. Built in walkthrough is nice and some extra features in UI like opacity are availabe, whish is good since many devs don't bother with these even.

CONS:

1. Story is very confusing and actually doesn't seem to have any real baring on the actual going on of the game. The MC and rest of the LIs are blissfully unaware of any relating to his missing dad, rendering that part of the story at least till thus far irrelevant and I don't see how it will change in the future either.
2. The standalone (original) game without the uncensored patch (loli & shota) is really not a game worth even attempting. There is almost no lewd content and its all pretty slow and boring. Its probably more realistic though and "wholesome" but there is almost no content to speak of.
3. No lewd scene sounds, ambient or environmental. There is the odd scream I heard, but overall there are no sounds and the intro song could cause some license issues for the dev (loli version of game)
4. The biggest gripe I have is the gameplay mechanics and the way the game plays out, having the player jump to the same scenario but in a "what if" kind of way e.g., going to beach today with LI A then once thats done a menu appears and now you can do the same day at beach with LI B then C etc etc. Its just a crappy way of playing the game.
5. Second gripe thats is close as bad as the one above is the bad dialogue and completely illogical motives and reasoning that "grown ups" have especially towards their child (patch enabled). That and other general conversations and how every female character wants to bone the MC...just bad writing.
6. Added to above, characters are simply underdeveloped, shallow, pretty much stupid and derange in their sexual need to screw the MC, if not the MC then screw anything. Especially for the "loli" *cough bullshit, girls who are acting like skanks in college except they "lolis" and apparently 18...
7. Ages of characters do not make sense really, the models do not fit the look e.g., the mother of the MC looks like older sister and the MC grandmother looks more like a MILF and mother and less like a grandmother.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context which could be useful to the developer.

• Loli & Shota content, the whole underage sex can be something that people will frown upon and if you say the MC and most of the LIs in his SCHOOL are 18...you talking shit, they are 16 at best and most likely between 12 and 14. Stating this is loli...right...not that I mind though, Im a huge pervert as Im sure everyone on this site is, just saying, calling a spade a spade
• Regarding the playstyle and the gameplay mechanics, which is just bad, why not set the game up like most normal VNs and have the game play out in a semi-linear way where the player can experience most if not all of the LIs over various days and at various places which would seem more natural and structured. It also flows and does not interrupt the game play with going back and redoing areas but just with a different LI...
• Big age disparities and illogical look of characters annoy me somewhat as I believe the best VN with good kinks are only great when you have as much realism or realisitc aspects as possible in them, even while the plot/story or dialogue is bullshit. You make the mother look more like the grandmother and the grandmother more like a granmother (and yes you can get some sexy 58yo GILFs)
• Per above comment, as far as I know, lolis are suppose to be 18yo or more, no? Yet, the mother is not a loli mom so why does she look so young? Same with gran? So if you want to make your game cohesive and "work" i.e. less bullshit despite the bullshit story, then bring it in line with realistic elements because (at least for me) thats what makes it sexy and kinky.
• The game/VN lacks decent story, plot and dialogue. Its straight up text book porn logic and thats bad. There is no breaking down of social norms and barriers, no dropping of inhibitions, hell the MC doesn't even drug, use hypnotic suggestions during sleep or any other form of manipulation to get family to cross the line into incest. Its too desperate and simply poor story driving, which is sad simply because the game could be pretty kinky and models look good (not really into loli shit, but the mother, gran, sister and god mother, oh and the teacher, are yummy)

TLDR:

The game/VN was clearly made to be played with the Loli/Shota patch enabled/installed. It has much more content and at least makes the game more sexually gratifying even if the story is total horseshit and makes zero sense nor the motivations of the brainwashed people who want to bone the MC (child/not child). Visually the game looks pretty good and its got some decent kinks/fetishes (loli patch enabled). The gameplay is bad though in how the VN is told and this just seems because there was no clear plot and planned progression worked out to create a better experience for the player. Sad but hey. I will still check the game more because of its kinkiness, but thats about it.

Looking promising but so far only one nude scene. Girls are avarage but since it is a harem game I guess it is something for everyone.
The MCs peronality is a bit lite and so are the conversations.
I like the context but the repetable scenes makes the story limping. Next update needs some action or else Ian afraid I will lose my interest.

Fun premise, good start. Still early and will need more content to make it a more well rounded game but the renders are good. Also gets into the scenes early enough that you aren't waiting for a book full of plot. Def looking forward to seeing how this one develops. One star off just because it doesn't have enough content yet but worth the download