I really really don't get this one. Don't get me wrong its clear there is passion here which I appreciate and I don't even mind it being such a slow burn. Still its just not a very great experience.
The biggest issue I have here is that the actual story and game are probably one of the most boring story's I've seen in a long time on this site. Its just a dad losing his wife and eventually ending up with his daughters but it just feels so so wrong, the older daughter is fine, but the younger one is written like she's a 15 year old but apparently she's 18. Beyond just the story itself though the pacing is atrocious, again I don't mind a slow burn but the way its done here is just constant dialogue like "wow I'm sad" "Hey dad I'm anxious" "Fuck you dad" etc etc etc, the first 4 chapters are basically just entirely this and it just circles around and around in on itself without any real feeling of growth. Even the bar scene barely moves the plot much. In a more competently written game you'd have chapter climaxes, real buildup, etc. but here it just all feels so boring and slow. I just don't really see how people can claim the work is competently written when the pacing, structure, and story are all extremely monotonous, repetitive and shallow.
Beyond story, pacing, and structure, the characters are pretty surface level too. The older daughter I think is ok but she doesn't get a ton of screen time compared to the younger one. The younger one of course is baffling to me, she acts 15 despite being in her last year of high school. Any scene with her and something sexual just feels EXTREMELY predatory. Don't get me wrong this is a game I'm not making a moral judgement here, go for it if you want, but choosing to enable her sexual path in this game just feels like a dad actively taking advantage of his daughter rather than a mutual sexual relationship being formed. It just comes off really gross because of how the game tries to push you to be a "good dad" the rest of the time. I think if the game has a competent story this might not be such an issue but as it stands it just feels like you play the gremlin in the dad's head being like "yeah bro fuck your kid, cmon it'll be fun" but picking that option never feels right.
Some minor gripes now, the visuals aren't great, I don't like the whole having multiple canned renders that change based on the dialogue, I much prefer scene to scene renders. Still this is really minor, and some of the models can be a bit odd looking graphically.
The good here is interesting. I first admire the passion, clearly there's an attempt here which I always appreciate. I'd rather have 1 of these kinda games than 1000 cookie cutter AVNs. I also like the look of women here, the fact they actually look more organic and real is really attractive and even though some like brooke have somewhat crazy features with her gigantic ass its still very endearing seeing characters that don't all look like models or Egirls. The humor here is also quite good, Brookes whole side thing with the copier and the coven is very very cute and well done. Honestly experiencing that bit just made me want to see this dev do a game with a different premise because it was really cute and fun.
In the end I'll say that this certainly tried but the writing here is just pretty bad. Yeah technically the writing is passable but it does a terrible job holding interest, creating stakes, building tension or really anything that a story like this should do. Hopefully the dev's next work is better now that they've gotten more practice but this one just really misses the mark.