overall, i'd say it's 8.5/10 but i'm giving it 5 stars because it offers something distinct and is well worth the play. my main criticism is pacing.
visual quality 9/10 - especially a lot of the materials and "bells and whistles" are some of the best i've seen in an erotic game, especially the fluids and cum appearance. i'd say the thing that sticks out the most is that the tongues look like they don't match up with the pretty much superb quality of everything else. like they look unnatural and sharp sometimes and like dry or fake.
designs, 9.5/10 - i'd say near perfect. the characters feel distinct both in appearance and personality, and the models really match their personalities. i really love the main character, she has a unique aesthetic with her having a sort of "babe body" with sorta a cute/shy face. i don't know if she's asian because she has blue eyes but she kinda looks asian and i have to say she's probably the first asian character i've seen in an erotic game that actually looks attractive and not like a stereotype-cartoon of an asian female. the only criticism i have, especially since she is the main character, is sometimes her lips look kinda sharp and unnaturally thin. it's only in some scenes. and also in some still where she smiles/laughs aggressively, her face doesn't look quite right.
pacing 6/10 - it's not horrible but it does feel like there's a lot of downtime imo between content especially between the sort of inherent slowness of rpgm (like sprites walking in sprite cutscenes) and the dialogue (which sometimes feels like filler or bloated). currently, i almost feel like there's too many tease scenes where nothing ultimately happens (especially for the sparseness of actual content scenes). i really hope something comes of her tutoring outfit and it's not just a dead end blue ball arc. i think if either there were more actual content scenes or some of the tease scenes were a little more sexual (while still being tease scenes) or if some of the filler/fat inbetween was cut would help the pacing.
story ideas 8.5/10 - the overall premise is pretty fantastic and i really like a lot of what's going on. i think the decision to have a 3some so early in the cuckold arc seems rushed tho. i think some really good scenes (like first maybe a scene where she confesses to her boyfriend and they have somekind of semi-humiliating/mildly-degrading sex, then having like some scene where she blows the other guy infront of her boyfriend when he doesn't want to have sex or something) could've been fit in between choosing the hotwife option and having a full on 3some and also making the nature of the 3some different.
UPDATE REVIEW
idk, i initially gave this game 5 stars but playing the update i don't know. i was really excited for it but it just seems like more of the same. i really hope the aoife storyline becomes futagirl on girl (lisa) content. i actually really like futagirl on girl stuff. i kinda wish the game would just refer to her as her even if she's trans because idk, i'm not really bisexual and it just kinda takes me out of the moment. she doesnt need to be born as hermaphrodite or futa, especially if it's relevant to her character or story to be trans but like in the dressing room scene, it kinda took me out of the moment for lisa to be like "i forgot he was a boy". i feel like it was a wasted oppurtunity it would've been hotter if she said something like "oh i forgot she has a dick" or even possibly playing into somekind of arc like after being mad at her boyfriend (or even after breaking up with him maybe idk) she's temporarily sick of guys but is addicted to cock and aoife is perfect because she has a cock to fuck her with. the "i forgot she's a boy" thing almost feels political like "yea trans aren't really women!" and it's just a fucking porn game.
i also really liked the sharon+lisa bath tub scene and the whole having paul in the house but i also feel like there's missed oppurtunities or maybe i'm not finding the events (that's another thing that hasn't changed: pacing and difficulty of getting content). i would've thought when she masturbates at night that'd be an ez oppurtunity to have a new scene with paul, or idk, i was hoping maybe in the shower scene, paul would've started masturbating before she noticed and maybe she only notices once he ejaculates on the glass or maybe she notices then he cums on her, idk. i just feel lost. like the journal isn't really helpful. seems like a lot of glitches or bugs or idk abrupt dead ends without knowing the arc is done for now. still really hope the tutoring arc continues and is a hot one too, couldn't find any continuation of that story arc
it's still good. i mean it just seems like it has all the same problems/shortcomings but also all the same strengths of the initial release. i personally would much rather see a sort of "carnival of events" where you're just thinking of pervy places or times of day to go to and there's an event there rather than having branching paths. like content drought i think is the biggest problem with most rpgm games. the rpgm medium i think is at it's best when you're not hunting for that 1 event to progress the story but instead it's like a lewd disney world or something. or at minimum, having a reliable and accurate guide/journal to progress that next event to continue the progress.