VN - Ren'Py - Living with Vicky [v0.7] [StannyStanny]

Where to begin...

My first point of contention would be the VN label. So far, as of the end of Chapter 2, there are two choice screens presented and no matter what you choose the game is not significantly influenced by the player's input. The remainder of the 'choice' screens are not really choices as there is only one option available. Why bother? Things may change in the future, but for now this game, for all intents and purposes, is a KN. Label it as such and be done with it.

Secondly, numerous misspellings and grammatical mistakes. Not the worst example, but enough to be distracting.

Thirdly, full of the standard tropes with no knew ground broken.

Fourth, two frame loops are not animations. It's ok to not have animations, but these bounce-backs are distracting and I would recommend not using them.

Fifth, unless there is a monumental change of direction in future releases, there will be forced sex. Another reason to label it as a KN.

If you like this type of story and don't care about agency and/or choice, strap yourselves in and go along for the ride. Otherwise, I would recommend spending your time with something that has more depth.

It's quite refreshing to see a game focusing so far on one love interest, and I quite hope it stays that way. Because that's what can make this game truly stand out from my humble point of view.

Other like: a decent looking "landlady", hits my preference in that she is quite realistic in both her shape and face expressions, and does not have those huge overwhelming surreal boobs like many other DAZ-made MILFs tend to do.

Dislikes\areas for potential improvement:
1) MC a bit too douche and tends to think too much with his cock
2) "Landlady" having too little or uncertain agency.

- I wanna look up your skirt, lemme do it
- I can't do that, it's wrong
- But I have this urges and you are so hot
- Well okay, you make me feel young again

- I wanna make out with you, let's do it
- This is wring for us, we should not do that
- But I know you like it
*ignores her and makes out with her anyway*
*she somehow yields and accepts it*

So it's not about how quick the progression towards sex is, but rather it's about the actions and reactions that look, to my taste, a bit too primitive

Very good, the story progresses too fast to get bored, I wouldn't be surprised if there is sex in the next update
In addition, the MILF is not that slim either, but she has her curves and her very remarkable things.
Although there are only 2 characters, the relationship progresses very quickly for my taste

i was honestly not expecting much, but the writing is really great.
the sexual tension is build up rather quickly, which can be a good thing if the writing is proper, which it is.
I also like how there is no wall of text, while the story does not progress like in other games.
The text messages between the characters is nothing new, but is well executed, and esp. the last ones are very hot.

Wow, this was definitely a great start! I will for sure be watching for more updates! The sexual tension is just the right amount without going too fast or too slow. The texting at the end was super hot. Excellent work!