HTML - Completed - Locked Down [Afterstory] [AnonDux]

I feel like when writing reviews for the games of this genre, and in this general medium, it's important to consider the broader state of affairs.

On initial release, this game has good pacing and degenerate (and good) enough writing without coming off as a parody of itself or devolving into a grammatical mess.
The aforementioned good pacing is also doing a wonderful job from turning it into a chore of just clicking and hoping to get to the next interesting scene.
Really looking forward to updates as-is. It will be the updates and the scope of the content within them that will make or break this game. The author promises a pivot away from the kinetic novel structure of the 1st chapter, and I really hope the game doesn't become drastically worse because of it.


Some nitpicks:

1. Gf's family writing is a bit too weaboo cutesy. It is obviously intentional by the author, but it's still annoying (to me).
2. Media has audio AND there is no volume slider AND some scenes just have 3-4 clips playing at the same time with volume on. It's a bit absurd.
3. There is one particular AI-generated jpeg of the antagonist that is reused a few times, and it's got horribly fucked up anatomy.

I find kinetic novels pretty dull since it's just a bunch of clicking for porn (let's face it, the plot is rarely bestseller author quality) and I can do that on redtube if I wanted.

The game for what it is, is fine. Nothing special at the moment (it's a first upload, so..). I found the constant scrolling and clicking to get through the story dull and uninspiring, but the actual content itself was okay.

Specifically a game for people who enjoy/don't mind NTR. If you dislike NTR, you should 100% give this game a miss, you're not going to like it.

Pretty fine start for a good VN, but not really good for a GAME

NTR IS NOT AVOIDABLE! But if you like it and, well, BLACKED theme, its fine. Of course for the game i personally want some more choices, but its a fine start