Locked in confusion, I finished this one and heres my initial thoughts:
The story: The story started off well but slowly got more and more confusing with each passing day not only that but its the return of the 'Landlady'
The writing: The writing didn't seem bad and it was easy to understand, no mistypes or translation issues
The renders: the renders seemed really good for the most part
The models: good models with good outfits
To summarise: The story slowly became obsolete when huge parts of days would just not have anything in them except maybe 1 or 2 scenes, story seemed lackluster which made the gameplay feel awful.
The story: The story started off well but slowly got more and more confusing with each passing day not only that but its the return of the 'Landlady'
The writing: The writing didn't seem bad and it was easy to understand, no mistypes or translation issues
The renders: the renders seemed really good for the most part
The models: good models with good outfits
To summarise: The story slowly became obsolete when huge parts of days would just not have anything in them except maybe 1 or 2 scenes, story seemed lackluster which made the gameplay feel awful.