Fantabulous

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Feb 13, 2024
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Another one, this is more subtle and bordering nitpicking if you will.

In the picnic area, Angel struggles to tell she loves you. If you follow the romance path, her reaction is to switch to her default evil grin face. I say this is wrong and she should turn to a surprised, much more emotional expression instead, otherwise it looks like she's taking for granted you loved her too. I can't speak for others but this ruined that special moment for me.
 

Juerhullycin

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Feb 4, 2024
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When asked if she had those braids under the hat she literally says "Yes, I've been growing my hair out ever since I was discharged". The "Yes" part should be removed because it's impossible that those long braids fit under the cap, AND the introduction should be amended too to say "Some time later..." to be consistent.
you know she is talking about being discharged from the military? has absolutely nothing to do with how the time flows in those two days but the months/years? since she left the military and/or saw Ryker the last time.

cant/wont argue with your second post tho
 
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