VN - Others - Long Story Short [v0.10a1] [TTrickGames]

PROS
+ Not all, but some sex scenes have animations with decent physics.
+ Some character models look good.

CONS
-The whole story getting told by the MC to someone trope is just straight-up immersive breaking and makes things boring. And along with these the story we have is pretty much empty, and boring as well.
- Corruption & Love routes don't have a fair amount of content.
- Even tho certain stuff makes you feel like your choices matter in most stuff it actually doesn't, especially on anything connected to Vanessa, like getting forced to act like her boyfriend in front of her family or that whole nonsense ''I will become your male version'' or ''You will become my female version'' thing, your choices meaning nothing is already big con, but you are getting forced to spend time with an annoying character like Vanessa is even worse...
- The dialogue screen looks bad, especially the green textbox choices at the bottom right, it makes no sense why they are even there in the first place...
- The game is not fully controllable with a keyboard, especially if you are forced to use the mouse while making choices.
- Some sex scenes are not animated despite being quite important like the one where Ann loses her virginity, seriously? The worst part is there are some animations before the sex scene itself, but the sex part is not animated...
- Nearly every girl's path is poorly written, like Vanessa being an annoying b*tch, or Alex's job, and her addiction to it, or when Ann's path feels like getting some progress she is leaving for faraway college, and her & MC's relationship becoming long-distance relationship after just small progress they made.
- Certain character models feel wasted on some characters, like Vanessa, and Alex, and some character models feel like could have been better like Ann's model.
- It's not bug-free, sometimes characters say things like ''Remember the talk we had'' or ''Remember the dress you wear'' but you don't see either the talk or dress scene, yet the game acts like it's happened.
- This game is 6 years old, yet some characters have no real progress at all, like Jenny, or Emily, and it doesn't feel like this game is going anywhere at this point...

VERDICT
In the end, this is a game with good potential, but with poor execution for that potential. I guess it's still good to let out some steam, but wouldn't suggest investing time to read dialogues or the story, etc, since they are pretty much poorly written.

Hope the game see more updates, the best VN I played. A lot of different routes, all the girls are really hot and Ann is perfect! Love route, NTR route, cheating route, Vanessa the slut. Yeah you choose it

There is not and there can hardly be any new things in narrating a story but "Long Story Short", a graphic novel, makes a smooth enough story like the ones in the real time. The graphics are average per platform so that readers take in an integrated visual experience. What stands out here, though, is the gameplay. This as a graphic novel puts with itself lots of simplified and even easier controls to a player's experience. The background music is a match for the story but nothing big, pleasant enough to listen to quietly.

The strength of this game lies in its design of the settings and characters where it has a very good level of detail and coherence. In terms of innovation: it may not be something that alters the landscape but it has that unique touch that gives it a cool interesting factor. It is easy, making it very approachable, although not at all challenging. However, replayability is rather present owing to the different parts the player could choose.

Technically, it runs without issues as well, and that's a great point in its favor. As such, it comes highly recommended for those looking for a bright future with updates that would just enhance the player's experience. "Long Story Short" is a good option for anyone interested in graphic novels with properly narrated stories in all beauty and flying colors. It's not perfect, but at least it is stable and within the purview of being made available for updates in the future.

Excellent. Usually i have some massive quirks to think of but not here.

Writing a review to make it all Justice would take me far to long. To many good things about it to cover.

Probably a top 3 in recent year, definitely top 5. Keenly want more now.

Finally I found a game where the models looks "normal and hot" not like 90% of these other games were the boobs usually bigger than the body lol
These girls in this game are just perfect, especially Alex *-*

Anyways, story is good, blackmailing, cheating, NTR, everything seems alright. I am missing a bit the sound on animation scenes and more tips when you choose things. You play like hours and then it says "the game ends here because of the decisions you made" Yeah right, which ones? lol And then you have to start from 0 again lmao.

Review of [v0.9 final]

AMAZING GAME, with Corrputation, Blackmail, Cheating, NTR.

You're a guy who spends his life in front of the computer, and suddenly your best friend: a fat guy.
He changes his life drastically, and visits you 30kg lighter and with a hot girlfriend.


From there everything changes in your life since the famous Vanessa introduces you to Ann, a girl who spends all her time in the Library and is single.

From there you have the decisions at all times,
Go with Vanessa, Go with Ann, try your luck with another girl, cheat on Ann with Vanessa, etc etc...

That's what's cool about this game, all the paths there are and you can choose between being a good friend of Joe and discovering Vanessa's infidelities and what a whore she is or the opposite.

The game has a lot of corruption, and the NTR is also very present although it can be deactivated.

You have to be careful because at the beginning they ask you if you want to control the situation, and if you say no you can get unpleasant surprises.

For me, the girl with the most character and charisma is Vanessa. Yes, she is a whore, but she always goes against Ann, who is corrupted because of you. If you decide to do it.

PROS

• Excellent Renders with high quality
• Very interesting story about corruption and blackmail
• Your decisions clearly affect character progress and the game
• The animations are well done and detailed with good movement
• Quite a few female characters that you meet throughout the game and can have
• Good atmosphere and music

CONS

• Sex Animation has no sound...

RATING :

Content: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Sound: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Renders: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Characters: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Animations: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Final conclusion: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ EXCELLENT CORRUPTION AND BLACKMAIL GAME HIGHLY RECOMMENDED

I normally stay away from porny games, but there's something about the corruption genre...

What content there is here is pretty good. The renders and animations are slightly below average, and Ann's lolipop head is a bit too pedo-baiting for me - but the scenarios are pretty hot.

Obviously, for this type of game, the characters are cookie-cutter and without originality, but if you don't know that going in, the shame is completely on you.

What I don't like is the amount of content. This is five and a half years into development, and it has the amount of content I would expect from a title that had been going for two. I thought I would be getting way more when I downloaded based on the June 2019 first release.

Another negative is that the developer hasn't improved renders AT ALL in all that time. They are of the same middling quality they were after five years of practice. I don't understand how that's possible. The same is true of animations.

Alex and Emily are the best, but have the least content - that's another black mark as far as I am concerned.

Just Played this game And already in love with it... Seriously superb game.
Specially all of Ann's NTR paths. Wish there were more Insta. Pictures of Ann in NTR path. Ven. is also very hot. not just her all the models are super good..... Dev has worked very hard. I hope he can add more content with Joi, he is a very good friend did not want to betray him. Ann and Chris chemistry is best love all the paths that included Chris in in. If you are NTR lover you should definitely play this game. keep that in mind it has several path.

Simply excellent. I tend to dislike visual novels altogether because of mediocre use of DAZ, but the artist working on this project is simply another level. Not only characters look good, but they are unique and covered in VERY detailed textures. Take this with good use of lighting and bam, we have a visual fest.

Another reason I dislike visual novels is because of RenPY. It is more difficult to come up with something complex using RenPy and it usually ends up being a laggy mess. But this game feels like AAA when interacting with the interface. It is as snappy as it can be. And almost all features of RenPy are implemented as well. Maybe they will make it into sub-engine of some sort so that people can migrate to whatever they use instead of RenPy.

At first, story doesn't seem very special but it quickly grows on you. I have chosen the NTR option with no option to prevent it directly, and I found it to be very immersive. The games goes out of its way to create the sensation of game world going on without you. Main example of that is the Insta stuff that you can check on the computer. The users (currently only two of the characters) continuously post new content to Insta and we can like and comment on it (like has one consequence I saw, comment is just for fun since it's literally a text input, but I'm sure they will add some easter eggs there haha). I really hope they add all of the character to Insta stuff in the future. Apart from the Insta, characters do meet each other as part of story lines and there is always something going on in their lives (they have their own story arcs, you are simply joining them). So many VNs fail to deliver this. Apart from a couple of characters that are not fleshed out, this applies to all major characters we see more than 3 times or so. There is lack of story arc for the MC, but I think it is better this way since I can just focus on what other people are living through and I don't have to second guess my choices because of some cringy sinister MC story arc.

Last thing and maybe the most important thing for VNs is that this game really do branch out depending on your choices. It is snappy to rollback, as I have never experienced the fricking rollback error that I get on RenPy games.

I would tend to give a 4.5/5 note but that's just not possible.
Anyway... very good game.
Good story. The girls are hot... and the animations are pretty good.
The sexiest one for me is Emily and I like that the story with her is slow and takes its time... it makes it even more exciting.

Good work ! I really hope to see the end of it.

I always wondered how AVN girls would really behave if you weren't the only viable male LI in the game, and this game does it perfectly.

As someone not too familiar with NTR this was an interesting experience and I didn't hate it as much as I thought I would. I chose to enable NTR and to not be in control all the time (since apparently you miss out on A LOT if you turn off NTR). Highly recommend and it not being RenPy didn't bother me either.

I can see why some might not like seeing their LIs getting pipe from other dudes but it isn't very realistic if you're into a slut and she isn't constantly fucking other guys without you seeing/knowing. That's what I appreciate I guess.

You're also in control most of the time if you make the right choices with the right girls. Really like the breath of fresh air this game gives!

I'll be honest I was pretty sceptical at first, I didn't like Ann and Vanessa renders in the first chapter or so, and I wasn't sure about neither the story nor the characters. I actually almost uninstalled the game after some 30 minutes or so but than the whole NTR/Corruption started to show and it intrigued me. I'm not super into NTR but it's fun to explore different things and I must say I found an amazing middle ground where I corrupt Ann for myself but absolutely hoe around with Vanessa. I also really like the side girls, I'm usually not a fan of the "childhood friend" archetype, in fact I hate it in Eternum, I hate it in Summer's Heat. But here it's just so well done and the girl in question is slowly becoming one of my favorites.

The renders and animations get a lot better the farther you are, it went from 5/10 to 8/10 with an occasional 9/10. I like the soundtrack, it's pretty solid most of the time.

The best thing however is the way this game branches out. You can go the vanilla route with some girls, you can corrupt them, you can ignore them, you can make them sleep with other dudes if that's your thing and it just feels natural. One decision doesn't mean you're now going to always have to do it that way (or at least that's how it feels).

Honestly this went from something I almost deleted to something I'm recommending. Give it a try and push past the beginning if it doesn't immediately catch your attention.

A gem of a game. Beautiful renders, several routes, hot NTR story and that's is too optional and a good enough story. What else can you expect for a good game. Only problem with this game is slow updates but it's totally worth it to wait for such an awesome game.

Very good game. Lots of hot, naughty girls, who are eager to ride the salami.
I really loved Vanessa's character. She was unique and very well done, plus she is gorgeous. Ann is also cute, but her head was a little too big. I guess that made it easier for her to give head.. ;-)

Highly recommend.

Really excellent AVN, the dynamic between Ann, Vanessa and the is great MC - having a naive and shy LI open up sexually and sexually by her more experienced and promiscuous friend is just wonderful.

I do think Ann could have developed more slowly, but that is possibly due to the choices I made in my first and only play through. Not sure how much it changes with more possessive/jealous choices.

The render and animations are detailed and smooth, the text has no obvious errors and the writing is good.

This is a really good game with very good animations and scenes ,there is all, you can do an harem of girls around you but you can even corrupt your girlfriend and let her go with other men ,really really good and exciting.

This one is a gem, Ann has one of the best character development i've seen in an AVN, wont spoil but that are 3 routes u can go with her, the good girl, the corruption NTR, and the corruption no-NTR (the best one in my opinion), and this is just one of the girls, u can explore other routes with other girls, this game is very heavy on NTR content, and i dont know why there is no NTR tag on it, but dont worry, all of it is optional, but i gotta say, be careful because even if is kinda obvious the NTR choices, u could still make some "mistake" and go down the road. The animation transitions are the best ive seen in an AVN, i was speechless when i saw it holy shit, and the girls in this game are truly perfection, i have no word, specially Ann and Alex. Top 10 Best AVN for me, cant wait to see what happens next on future updates

Oh my God -- the scene with our two lovely LI's, Ann and Alex -- the whole story line of possible MC-sharing along with the two most delicious butts in AVNland being very artistically positioned. Thank God for buttlovers!!
An indication of how erotically charged this AVN is. 5 stars. Thanks, dev!!

Even if the girls in this game are too easy and MC has no competition (which never happens with pretty girls), the game is very solid. All is well done. I especially enjoyed the animations. Long story, short - play it, you won't regret.

Visuals and Graphic Quality
Long Story Short immediately impresses with its high-quality renders and animations. The artwork is well-crafted, with attention to detail that enhances the immersion during gameplay. Characters like Ann, Vanessa, and Alex are visually captivating, which helps keep the player engaged.

Impact of Choices
One of the biggest strengths of the game is the real impact your choices have on the unfolding narrative. Every decision you make directly influences relationships and the direction of the story, giving the player a sense of control and customization. The game allows you to disable NTR (Netorare), which might appeal to those who prefer to avoid that content. However, it's important to note that the main focus of the game is around NTR, and turning it off might cause you to miss out on a significant portion of the content and experience the game has to offer.

Storyline and Character Development
The narrative is engaging and makes interesting use of flashbacks, with the protagonist reflecting on his past. This creates an emotional connection with the player while providing deeper insight into the decisions and situations that shape the current story. To keep the game's pace dynamic, Long Story Short opts not to offer a slow "corruption" of the characters, instead speeding up this process. This keeps the story flowing and allows situations to evolve quickly, which is appealing to players who prefer more direct progression.

Variety of Decisions and Achievements
One clear indication of the variety and impact of choices in Long Story Short is the presence of 98 achievements, which can only be unlocked by exploring all available paths. This proves the game rewards full exploration of options and decisions, allowing for different approaches to each scenario. To unlock all achievements, the player must be dedicated to experiencing all possible routes, highlighting the depth and replayability of the game.

Ambient Sound
The game features a great ambient soundtrack that plays while you're gaming, helping to create an enjoyable and immersive atmosphere. However, Long Story Short lacks ambient audio or voice acting for the scenes, which might be noticeable for players who value even more auditory immersion. Despite this, the background music is well applied and contributes to the overall mood.

Pacing and Replayability
The pacing of Long Story Short is another strong point. Unlike other games in the genre, it avoids repetitive gameplay loops, keeping the experience dynamic and smooth. The different routes and paths offered by the game ensure good replayability, encouraging the player to explore the various options available.

Conclusion
Long Story Short is an excellent example of how a visual novel can combine meaningful choices, impressive visuals, and an engaging narrative. The varied routes, the freedom to shape the game to your liking, and the attention to detail make it a rewarding experience. However, if you decide to disable NTR, be aware that you will miss out on a large portion of the game's content, as this element is central to the experience. Additionally, the flashbacks, where the protagonist recalls his past, add an extra layer of depth to the story, while the accelerated character corruption keeps the game's pace fluid and interesting. The ambient soundtrack is a great complement, even without ambient audio or voice acting.

For those who don't mind the focus on NTR and enjoy this style of game, Long Story Short deserves a solid 9/10.