VN - Others - Long Story Short [v0.10a1] [TTrickGames]

Review of [v0.9 final]

AMAZING GAME, with Corrputation, Blackmail, Cheating, NTR.

You're a guy who spends his life in front of the computer, and suddenly your best friend: a fat guy.
He changes his life drastically, and visits you 30kg lighter and with a hot girlfriend.


From there everything changes in your life since the famous Vanessa introduces you to Ann, a girl who spends all her time in the Library and is single.

From there you have the decisions at all times,
Go with Vanessa, Go with Ann, try your luck with another girl, cheat on Ann with Vanessa, etc etc...

That's what's cool about this game, all the paths there are and you can choose between being a good friend of Joe and discovering Vanessa's infidelities and what a whore she is or the opposite.

The game has a lot of corruption, and the NTR is also very present although it can be deactivated.

You have to be careful because at the beginning they ask you if you want to control the situation, and if you say no you can get unpleasant surprises.

For me, the girl with the most character and charisma is Vanessa. Yes, she is a whore, but she always goes against Ann, who is corrupted because of you. If you decide to do it.


PROS

• Excellent Renders with high quality
• Very interesting story about corruption and blackmail

• Your decisions clearly affect character progress and the game

• The animations are well done and detailed with good movement

• Quite a few female characters that you meet throughout the game and can have

• Good atmosphere and music

CONS

• Sex Animation has no sound...

RATING :

Content: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Sound: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Renders: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Characters: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Animations: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Final conclusion: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ EXCELLENT CORRUPTION AND BLACKMAIL GAME HIGHLY RECOMMENDED

I normally stay away from porny games, but there's something about the corruption genre...

What content there is here is pretty good. The renders and animations are slightly below average, and Ann's lolipop head is a bit too pedo-baiting for me - but the scenarios are pretty hot.

Obviously, for this type of game, the characters are cookie-cutter and without originality, but if you don't know that going in, the shame is completely on you.

What I don't like is the amount of content. This is five and a half years into development, and it has the amount of content I would expect from a title that had been going for two. I thought I would be getting way more when I downloaded based on the June 2019 first release.

Another negative is that the developer hasn't improved renders AT ALL in all that time. They are of the same middling quality they were after five years of practice. I don't understand how that's possible. The same is true of animations.

Alex and Emily are the best, but have the least content - that's another black mark as far as I am concerned.

Just Played this game And already in love with it... Seriously superb game.
Specially all of Ann's NTR paths. Wish there were more Insta. Pictures of Ann in NTR path. Ven. is also very hot. not just her all the models are super good..... Dev has worked very hard. I hope he can add more content with Joi, he is a very good friend did not want to betray him. Ann and Chris chemistry is best love all the paths that included Chris in in. If you are NTR lover you should definitely play this game. keep that in mind it has several path.

Simply excellent. I tend to dislike visual novels altogether because of mediocre use of DAZ, but the artist working on this project is simply another level. Not only characters look good, but they are unique and covered in VERY detailed textures. Take this with good use of lighting and bam, we have a visual fest.

Another reason I dislike visual novels is because of RenPY. It is more difficult to come up with something complex using RenPy and it usually ends up being a laggy mess. But this game feels like AAA when interacting with the interface. It is as snappy as it can be. And almost all features of RenPy are implemented as well. Maybe they will make it into sub-engine of some sort so that people can migrate to whatever they use instead of RenPy.

At first, story doesn't seem very special but it quickly grows on you. I have chosen the NTR option with no option to prevent it directly, and I found it to be very immersive. The games goes out of its way to create the sensation of game world going on without you. Main example of that is the Insta stuff that you can check on the computer. The users (currently only two of the characters) continuously post new content to Insta and we can like and comment on it (like has one consequence I saw, comment is just for fun since it's literally a text input, but I'm sure they will add some easter eggs there haha). I really hope they add all of the character to Insta stuff in the future. Apart from the Insta, characters do meet each other as part of story lines and there is always something going on in their lives (they have their own story arcs, you are simply joining them). So many VNs fail to deliver this. Apart from a couple of characters that are not fleshed out, this applies to all major characters we see more than 3 times or so. There is lack of story arc for the MC, but I think it is better this way since I can just focus on what other people are living through and I don't have to second guess my choices because of some cringy sinister MC story arc.

Last thing and maybe the most important thing for VNs is that this game really do branch out depending on your choices. It is snappy to rollback, as I have never experienced the fricking rollback error that I get on RenPy games.

I would tend to give a 4.5/5 note but that's just not possible.
Anyway... very good game.
Good story. The girls are hot... and the animations are pretty good.
The sexiest one for me is Emily and I like that the story with her is slow and takes its time... it makes it even more exciting.

Good work ! I really hope to see the end of it.

I always wondered how AVN girls would really behave if you weren't the only viable male LI in the game, and this game does it perfectly.

As someone not too familiar with NTR this was an interesting experience and I didn't hate it as much as I thought I would. I chose to enable NTR and to not be in control all the time (since apparently you miss out on A LOT if you turn off NTR). Highly recommend and it not being RenPy didn't bother me either.

I can see why some might not like seeing their LIs getting pipe from other dudes but it isn't very realistic if you're into a slut and she isn't constantly fucking other guys without you seeing/knowing. That's what I appreciate I guess.

You're also in control most of the time if you make the right choices with the right girls. Really like the breath of fresh air this game gives!

I'll be honest I was pretty sceptical at first, I didn't like Ann and Vanessa renders in the first chapter or so, and I wasn't sure about neither the story nor the characters. I actually almost uninstalled the game after some 30 minutes or so but than the whole NTR/Corruption started to show and it intrigued me. I'm not super into NTR but it's fun to explore different things and I must say I found an amazing middle ground where I corrupt Ann for myself but absolutely hoe around with Vanessa. I also really like the side girls, I'm usually not a fan of the "childhood friend" archetype, in fact I hate it in Eternum, I hate it in Summer's Heat. But here it's just so well done and the girl in question is slowly becoming one of my favorites.

The renders and animations get a lot better the farther you are, it went from 5/10 to 8/10 with an occasional 9/10. I like the soundtrack, it's pretty solid most of the time.

The best thing however is the way this game branches out. You can go the vanilla route with some girls, you can corrupt them, you can ignore them, you can make them sleep with other dudes if that's your thing and it just feels natural. One decision doesn't mean you're now going to always have to do it that way (or at least that's how it feels).

Honestly this went from something I almost deleted to something I'm recommending. Give it a try and push past the beginning if it doesn't immediately catch your attention.

A gem of a game. Beautiful renders, several routes, hot NTR story and that's is too optional and a good enough story. What else can you expect for a good game. Only problem with this game is slow updates but it's totally worth it to wait for such an awesome game.

Very good game. Lots of hot, naughty girls, who are eager to ride the salami.
I really loved Vanessa's character. She was unique and very well done, plus she is gorgeous. Ann is also cute, but her head was a little too big. I guess that made it easier for her to give head.. ;-)

Highly recommend.

Really excellent AVN, the dynamic between Ann, Vanessa and the is great MC - having a naive and shy LI open up sexually and sexually by her more experienced and promiscuous friend is just wonderful.

I do think Ann could have developed more slowly, but that is possibly due to the choices I made in my first and only play through. Not sure how much it changes with more possessive/jealous choices.

The render and animations are detailed and smooth, the text has no obvious errors and the writing is good.

This is a really good game with very good animations and scenes ,there is all, you can do an harem of girls around you but you can even corrupt your girlfriend and let her go with other men ,really really good and exciting.

This one is a gem, Ann has one of the best character development i've seen in an AVN, wont spoil but that are 3 routes u can go with her, the good girl, the corruption NTR, and the corruption no-NTR (the best one in my opinion), and this is just one of the girls, u can explore other routes with other girls, this game is very heavy on NTR content, and i dont know why there is no NTR tag on it, but dont worry, all of it is optional, but i gotta say, be careful because even if is kinda obvious the NTR choices, u could still make some "mistake" and go down the road. The animation transitions are the best ive seen in an AVN, i was speechless when i saw it holy shit, and the girls in this game are truly perfection, i have no word, specially Ann and Alex. Top 10 Best AVN for me, cant wait to see what happens next on future updates

Oh my God -- the scene with our two lovely LI's, Ann and Alex -- the whole story line of possible MC-sharing along with the two most delicious butts in AVNland being very artistically positioned. Thank God for buttlovers!!
An indication of how erotically charged this AVN is. 5 stars. Thanks, dev!!

Even if the girls in this game are too easy and MC has no competition (which never happens with pretty girls), the game is very solid. All is well done. I especially enjoyed the animations. Long story, short - play it, you won't regret.

Visuals and Graphic Quality
Long Story Short immediately impresses with its high-quality renders and animations. The artwork is well-crafted, with attention to detail that enhances the immersion during gameplay. Characters like Ann, Vanessa, and Alex are visually captivating, which helps keep the player engaged.

Impact of Choices
One of the biggest strengths of the game is the real impact your choices have on the unfolding narrative. Every decision you make directly influences relationships and the direction of the story, giving the player a sense of control and customization. The game allows you to disable NTR (Netorare), which might appeal to those who prefer to avoid that content. However, it's important to note that the main focus of the game is around NTR, and turning it off might cause you to miss out on a significant portion of the content and experience the game has to offer.

Storyline and Character Development
The narrative is engaging and makes interesting use of flashbacks, with the protagonist reflecting on his past. This creates an emotional connection with the player while providing deeper insight into the decisions and situations that shape the current story. To keep the game's pace dynamic, Long Story Short opts not to offer a slow "corruption" of the characters, instead speeding up this process. This keeps the story flowing and allows situations to evolve quickly, which is appealing to players who prefer more direct progression.

Variety of Decisions and Achievements
One clear indication of the variety and impact of choices in Long Story Short is the presence of 98 achievements, which can only be unlocked by exploring all available paths. This proves the game rewards full exploration of options and decisions, allowing for different approaches to each scenario. To unlock all achievements, the player must be dedicated to experiencing all possible routes, highlighting the depth and replayability of the game.

Ambient Sound
The game features a great ambient soundtrack that plays while you're gaming, helping to create an enjoyable and immersive atmosphere. However, Long Story Short lacks ambient audio or voice acting for the scenes, which might be noticeable for players who value even more auditory immersion. Despite this, the background music is well applied and contributes to the overall mood.

Pacing and Replayability
The pacing of Long Story Short is another strong point. Unlike other games in the genre, it avoids repetitive gameplay loops, keeping the experience dynamic and smooth. The different routes and paths offered by the game ensure good replayability, encouraging the player to explore the various options available.

Conclusion
Long Story Short is an excellent example of how a visual novel can combine meaningful choices, impressive visuals, and an engaging narrative. The varied routes, the freedom to shape the game to your liking, and the attention to detail make it a rewarding experience. However, if you decide to disable NTR, be aware that you will miss out on a large portion of the game's content, as this element is central to the experience. Additionally, the flashbacks, where the protagonist recalls his past, add an extra layer of depth to the story, while the accelerated character corruption keeps the game's pace fluid and interesting. The ambient soundtrack is a great complement, even without ambient audio or voice acting.

For those who don't mind the focus on NTR and enjoy this style of game, Long Story Short deserves a solid 9/10.

I initially thought this game would be perfect for me. As a fan of NTR, corruption, and a former WoW addict, the setup with a guy addicted to WoW just about to turn his life around felt like a relatable, almost self-insert experience. However, I just couldn’t get into it.

The only character I cared about was Vanessa, who I found very attractive and was the reason I downloaded the game, expecting her to be the focus of the NTR element. Unfortunately, her personality was a letdown from the start. She’s already cheating on Joe, which kills the potential for a slow corruption arc. For me, corruption is most effective when it starts with a good girl in a precious relationship, like Asuna and Kirito in NTR Online. Here, the relationship feels borderline open, so the NTR aspect was underwhelming.

While there are multiple routes and scenes with other characters, I was only interested in Vanessa’s corruption, making the rest tedious. The lack of sound, especially during scenes, was a big miss. The animations were well-done but short, and getting to them felt like a grind. The story wasn’t bad but also wasn’t anything special. The game's development has been extremely slow, which is why I put it off until now.

If Vanessa had a better personality and the game focused more on her gradual corruption, I would have enjoyed it more. But with her already cheating and giving in to blackmail without resistance, it felt hollow. Joe is also somewhat aware of her actions, making the whole thing feel like an open relationship.

Ultimately, the game’s biggest draw for me is that Vanessa is hot, and the animations are good. Everything else, including the characters, story, and overall experience, just didn’t work for me.

I think it's one of the hottest VNs, the renderings are beautiful, the characters well written, perhaps a little longer sex scenes would be a plus.
I highly recommend it for those who haven't done it yet.

I loved this game. I think swinging might be my new favorite genre, not sure yet. The renders and animations weren’t the best, but the game entertained me a lot. If I hadn’t had this much fun, I would’ve given it 4 stars, but I give 5 stars to any game that gives me a good time. I was just disappointed that there was no animation in the final scene. (I played the Ren'Py version, maybe the original version has animation in that part, I don’t know.)

This game is truly a work of art! From the stunning graphics to the immersive storyline, every aspect is finely crafted. The gameplay is smooth, intuitive, and keeps you engaged for hours on end. The world-building is second to none, with every detail meticulously designed to create a rich and immersive experience.

So far it's a very good AVN. Here are some of my thoughts:

1. Story: Plot is quite simple, yet effective, very engaging. This is an AVN where your choices actually matter and you can see different outcomes, in fact, I beat the game twice, making different choices the second time and It felt, at times, like a completely different game which was great, the "branching" here is great (definitely a +). Also the story is a very kinky one with lots of optional sharing.

2. Characters: Girls are well written with a well defined behaviour, except for one who changes according to your choices (which was interesting).

3. Music: No music/sound at all.

4. Animations: Basic animations (kinda mehh, sometimes there were none).

5. Renders: Good enough.

Overall, I'd give it a 7.5/10. The game is more on the short side. I loved that it was very kinky and its "branching", sadly, as I said having no music and mehh animations were a bit of a letdown. It's worth checking out.