[R>Writer] Share looking for a writer

[lightwan]

Project:
project name : West
the game


renpy game

for now just an open ended vn porn game, branches stories,
with different mc with, different background
casual, no weird shit, proper vanilla
just high schooler trying to get laid on their last year


i got a writer 2 weeks ago, but hes unresponsive so yea, I need another


Developer:
me coding, and 2d art

Looking for:
Writer
i suck at writing, i tried.. but it suck so bad


Employment Type:
Revenue Share 50/50 with cristobal

Work commitment:
Long term, Part time
at least could work 10 hours per week

Preferred method of contact:
this sites at first
discord

Job Description:
Writer
write the story, with predefined character ive made,
I alrready have a genereal idea on what the story is
i need you to write the detailed stories, dialogue , develop existing character, writing scene
proficient in english
if ure American ++




Additional comments:
open to writer input, as long it doesnt change the general stories much
send me your work
read

 

[WritingBear]

I'm a writer and I could help. I might not be able to do 10 hours a week because I'm working on other games for my day job.

 

[yihman1]

I think you should be a bit more specific on what it is exactly that you want from a writer.

You list a lot of things that you do not want. Including Incest, NTR, Harem and no "weird shit". I'm assuming that is like no scat, or watersports, or trans, or gay stuff, rape, bestiality ect. You put a lot more focus on what it is you do not want than what it is that you do want which is bad.

Then you say "I want it to be like Summertime Saga"... Umm... You know that game has NTR, and Harem, and "weird shit" like trans, and Incest too. The game that you gave as a reccomendation to attempt to imitate is a game that offers much of the things that you want not included.

I checked out the game what you have so far. When you say that you want it like "Summertime Saga" do you mean that you want it to be a "Sandbox" type game? Because in it's current form your game looks like the start of a "Visual Novel" type game. As a sandbox needs to be written in a different way than a visual novel does.

Next up you don't say anything about the length you wish for the project to be. Are you looking for the game to be an hour long upon completeion? 10 hours long? Longer somewhere in the middle? How big of a project do you want to make this? Because it must be written very differently depending on planned length.

Next up is the 3 possible protagonists. You say "Only one protagonist available for now" in the changelog. I'm assuming you plan on having the Indian and Asian guys to also be choosable protagonists at the start... That more than triples the workload you do realize this yes? That is 3 completely different stories that must be told in writing this, not just 1.

I noticed some possible inconsistencies with what you are asking for and what I have seen thus far. Namely 4 things.
1) You say you don't want incest. Why on earth would the first scene be of mom waking you up then? If mom is waking you up in the morning then you should be fucking her at some point in the game. That's a gimme. People will be pissed if they can NEVER fuck the mom that is the first female character they see.
2) You say no loli... but it's set at a high school. At a high school at least 3/4 of the girls are under 18.
3) You say no trans stuff... but why is there pictures of the asian dude with girls hair feminized in the images?
4) You say "predefined characters", but they are no characters are defined or devoloped at all yet.

 

[lightwan]

I think you should be a bit more specific on what it is exactly that you want from a writer.

You list a lot of things that you do not want. Including Incest, NTR, Harem and no "weird shit". I'm assuming that is like no scat, or watersports, or trans, or gay stuff, rape, bestiality ect. You put a lot more focus on what it is you do not want than what it is that you do want which is bad.

Then you say "I want it to be like Summertime Saga"... Umm... You know that game has NTR, and Harem, and "weird shit" like trans, and Incest too. The game that you gave as a reccomendation to attempt to imitate is a game that offers much of the things that you want not included.

I checked out the game what you have so far. When you say that you want it like "Summertime Saga" do you mean that you want it to be a "Sandbox" type game? Because in it's current form your game looks like the start of a "Visual Novel" type game. As a sandbox needs to be written in a different way than a visual novel does.

Next up you don't say anything about the length you wish for the project to be. Are you looking for the game to be an hour long upon completeion? 10 hours long? Longer somewhere in the middle? How big of a project do you want to make this? Because it must be written very differently depending on planned length.

Next up is the 3 possible protagonists. You say "Only one protagonist available for now" in the changelog. I'm assuming you plan on having the Indian and Asian guys to also be choosable protagonists at the start... That more than triples the workload you do realize this yes? That is 3 completely different stories that must be told in writing this, not just 1.

I noticed some possible inconsistencies with what you are asking for and what I have seen thus far. Namely 4 things.
1) You say you don't want incest. Why on earth would the first scene be of mom waking you up then? If mom is waking you up in the morning then you should be fucking her at some point in the game. That's a gimme. People will be pissed if they can NEVER fuck the mom that is the first female character they see.
2) You say no loli... but it's set at a high school. At a high school at least 3/4 of the girls are under 18.
3) You say no trans stuff... but why is there pictures of the asian dude with girls hair feminized in the images?
4) You say "predefined characters", but they are no characters are defined or devoloped at all yet.

oh shit, ntr is there actually.. my bad. (bestiality not so bad i think.. maybe il do it later)
but the others is a no. well its bad for you maybe.. or other people. this game actually for people who like vanilla like me lol, bcause i think like theres very few vanilla shits going on here, thats why i made this.

oh btw i copypasta my own post 3 weeks ago, before i read the code for summertime saga, its fukin complicated so no
i dont think it will be like summertime saga, MAYBE later, maybe.. not for now, not if i work alone.

the game will be short bcause we have 3 playable chars..
around 3 hours long per char, per girl or even shorter

yea 3 playable chars, yes thats why like i said before, its going to be only short game, bcause multiple chars.


1.) bcause you can fuck her, just not using the son character, use his friend character, its a three origins stsory
2.) lol, what i meant was, a girl look like a fvking kids thats a no..
3.) looool did you just look at the img files?? bcause if you play the game, you know hes just using a wig
4.) they're defined, but maybe not developed enough? thats basically the first thing i did before i wrote the story
i got my char detail files if you want?

 

[Deleted member 15555]

bcause you can fuck her, just not using the son character, use his friend character, its a three origins stsory

so you auto cuck yourself (player)....1st time ive see it in a game lol (that certainly is not vanilla, what you want to do)

 

[necessaryevils]

I'm a writer, American, and have plenty of time to write. Hit me up!