[R>Writer] Unpaid Looking for an extra writer

[Deleted member 1684328]

Hey! I am the PornWriterDuck, and in collaboration with an awesome artist I am developing a Harry Potter parody game. There already are a lot of great HP parody games, with Witch Trainer being the absolute best one. The main thing that sets us apart of the other games is our focus on a realistic, painted art style. Being a coder myself, I spent the last month coding the basic RenPy framework to make it easy to add new events.

The main storyline is quite simple:

You play as Voldemort (because of copyright reasons, you are not named Voldemort in the game) and you are thinking about how you can easily gather more information about your enemy. One day, Peter Pettigrew tells you he found the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher. Voldemort decides to disguise himself as the new teacher, and now the doors of Hogwarts are wide open for him.

Since I am a coder and not a writer, I am looking for someone who can build upon the story foundations I have laid out. There are quite a few events already implemented, but I want to slowly build towards those events. In the current build, the events are nice, but I want to slow it down a little bit.

What we are looking for:

- Someone with an affinity for Harry Potter. Of course there is room to improvise, but the main story should stay true to the Harry Potter universe.
- A good understanding of the English language. It will be a lot easier to discuss things when the writer also talk English very well. I am not a native speaker myself, so Dutch would be okay too (though I wonder how many Dutch people there are on this site)!
- Motivation. This is an ambitious project, and while we aren't asking for all of your time (I have things like a fulltime job and friends/family too), but we are looking for someone who won't abandon this project after two weeks. We are not asking you to write an essay per week, but we are looking for someone who actively wants to pitch ideas that fit the game and can think about new events to write.

So, what I can offer:

- Sadly, no money (yet). The artist I commission costs money too and the project is not profitable (yet). No problem, since I believe the project has a lot of potential. What we do offer is freedom: the main story and some of the events are already set, but outside of that there's a lot room for your creativity. As I said earlier, I am not a writer, so we will lean on your creativity and expertise.
- Exposure. While our game isn't that famous (yet), you will have the chance to show yourself and your amazing writing skills. If you want to link to a portfolio in our game, I will happily do so.

Contact:

PM me on F95zone, but Discord is better, I think. My Discord is:

thepornwriterduck#0681

Thank you so much for reading so much of this text, I really appreciate it

 

[rf96]

Good art

Hopefully, there will be more sex than in Innocent Witches.

 

[Deleted member 1684328]

Good art

Hopefully, there will be more sex than in Innocent Witches.

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Thank you ! Innocent Witches really looks nice, but if I am being honest, even our game has 10 times more sex scenes than Innocent Witches



Look, almost more sex

 

[rf96]

Well, tbh a handjob and you have more sex than IW.

 

[SirSpitz]

I myself have written story lines several years ago and have refound an interest in going back into it, having started a novel I am naming, "The White Witch." and yes its about goblins; its how I stumbled upon the game and other content.

Would you be so kind as to flesh out for us, what it is your story arch to take, some other the particular themes you want to touch on and how closely you want to follow the "Harry Potter" world. Any odd bit of interest you wish to develop would be of interest as well.

You would be welcome to respond both in private e-mail and on the thread you have started to give other potential writers an interest in your project. Just a FYI, if your in the Netherlands, there will be some lag time since I am at the far end of the US time zone, Mountain Standard time

 

[Deleted member 1684328]

Hi Sir Spitz!

Thank you for your reply. I agree I maybe should give more clarification about the story until now. I have a few things already in the game, and other things planned out:

- Player introduction: the main character is introduced.
- The first (few) lessons: the students will get to know their new teacher.
- Meet the students: after a few lessons, students will see you as a great teacher, and you will be able to interact with them.

And from there, each character will have their own path (events). You will slowly corrupt the female students.

Hermione: She finds your new lessons complicated, and you're going to give her low grades on purpose. You offer her private lessons. After a few lessons, she mentions someone told her female students do sexual favours to get higher grades. From there, the player will slowly corrupt her.

Luna: Luna doesn't have a lot of friends, and she very interested in magical creatures. Because of this, you are going to earn her trust and introduce her to different magical creatures.

Ginny: Ginny wants to make the Quidditch team, but she doesn't have a great broom. You buy her a new broom, and teach her how she can get better at Quidditch.

I want to build up the corruption naturally per character, so that's why I am looking for someone who's experienced in writing story and who would like to help us out.

I hope it's clearer now

 

[SirSpitz]

Ok I see where your going with this

Just a point to make-- Voltimort, why would he himself assign himself for this task? In the "Harry Potter" world he meddles with big themes, like the lost items of the school's founders and used higher magic. Would it not be better if Voltimort assign someone like Snape who is already there?

To that end being a potions master Snape would be able to brew up very diabolic love potions that would lead to the corruption of any Hogwarts student. More to the point if Voltimort wanted himself to corrupt the girl, he could have Snape make those potions so he can use them....it would make for a very short game/story line. Plus several character flaws Miss Granger is Muggle born and the "Harry Potter" theme of pure-bloods verse half bolds is at issue.

Now what if you created a new teacher that Voltimort gets appointed as a teacher, for advanced magic studies--a true wicked witch, and that witch wants to create a Covent of witches loyal to Voltimort....all females, all friends to each other would be the reason why she would want those girls in her Witches Covent. From that point you can add corruption and a story theme of cuckoldry because as we know Ron Weasely is in love with Miss Granger and Harry with Jenny. You can even reverse the role of Snape as not being a corruptor who fails at saving the girls and who himself is corrupted and perhaps ends up with Jenny as a slap to Harry

 

[PadoruPadoruuu]

Hi! I was simply scrolling when I found this and I wanted to add a few more points to what SirSpitz said and maybe another option if you want to continue to the Vold-mort MC route


"Harry Potter" has a LOT of things that can be potentially used for corruption based stories. Love potions, compulsion charms, befuddlement charms, the status difference between pure and mudbloods, and more! Which is why I'd agree that this would be a short story if Vold-mort is the MC.

Instead of Vold why not have the MC be someone who has the motive of getting all the girls but not in a high enough status that he can do it in a week. An example would be a declining heir of a noble family who decides to get rich and powerful by getting all the girls, a mudblood who wants the tables turned or even the second son which want to get even with his family? All those examples open more storylines such as corrupting your family members, getting detention with sexy teachers, accepting an alliance with Vold or replacing him, and other random fetishes.

Though if you do follow this advice keep in mind the Year you want the character in and his house (maybe have a class/faction reputation system? XD)

Now if you want to continue with the Vold-mort route you would want an actual reason why he couldn't just... do what he wants so easily otherwise the game will be bland and all that. An idea that comes into mind about Vol'mort is a... Shade. A horcrux too weak to escape the castle and decides to possess a weak DADA teacher (or if you want, possess a person then apply to DADA) then go on his sexual conquest regaining the power his old body had by fucking witches and performing tantric rituals and eventually take over the school.

This way there will be a power system from [weak to "can't be bothered to try" strong] that is somewhat explainable and you can maybe limit Snape's participation by having limited materials, suspicion levels on actions, and other things.


Well, that is most of it I suppose. I'm wishing you the best of luck in this game!

 

[SirSpitz]

Actually with every book released in the series, some new magic or concept was introduced or was expanded upon.

"THE UNBREAKABLE VOW," had to have the parties both agree and couldn't be imposed like a curse. A plot mechanic would have to be introduced to get around all the other story mechanics that would make the store line too short. So taking a look at my idea of wicked witch and a Covent, you would need the following conditions:

1: Covents have to be banned by the Ministry of Magic
2: Members would have to volunteer
3: It has to be on the level of the dark arts
4: It has to be all consuming in its corruption

There is a problem with my theme as well. Each of the 3 girls have their own personal motivations. Harmione is drawn to scholar interests; Loona more into magical beasts, and Ginny is more into sports. So yo bring all of them into one shared interest there has to be something addictive that corrupts them but does so in a way that plays to their character.

So if a Covent theme is the addictive mechanism, it would have to do for them many things as well. For example, in the story the lesser power of Covent magic would increase their power (a little piece of them is shared among all of them) making them better at their interests. Full blown Covent status would make them all much more powerful individually as witches because they would be sharing power--and why the Ministry would ban them.

The reason why I suggested a new character, the wicked witch, is mainly to introduce this addictive and new magic that slowly would corrupt the girls as they where slowly introduced to it. It also has the added advantage of a very sexy wicked witch with a full body that every women usually envies. From there the corruption can take almost any kind of sex tag from magical monster love, to girl-on-girl....etc...etc....