[R>Writer] Paid Looking for writer who can do Netorare/Cuckold writing [Closed]

[NTR Critic]

Project: Let's Split Up Gang, a scooby doo ntr parody game

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Looking for: Writer with experience in degrading ntr type stuff

Employment Type: Paid in bitcoin

Work commitment: One Off with potential for more

Preferred method of contact: here or discord @ ntrcritic

Job Description: Looking to get someone to put (better) words to my ideas. Would have themes like NTR, cheating, SPH, defloration, and impregnation (plus more probably)

Additional comments: Again, I can only pay via BTC right now

Some of the character art:

 

[DickPicket]

Sent you a friend request

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Looks like a fun project

You only have one real problem... actually, several but those problems are not that bad. But the main problem is getting players to be invested personally into your characters to make it a NTR from a comic that is by design lighthearted and amusing. The main risk is turning into a doorknob game (everyone gets a turn). And no, I am not trying to be a buzzkill or a KnowItAll ass.

In order to get an NTR out of a group of friends, the characters have to be invested in each other emotionally first. You have two choices really. First either keep the soft-core naive characters as if you were watching a cartoon episode. Or second, something else. In either case you can go in any direction, perhaps a 2D world, a Ren'py 3D world, AI, etc... You can make a dark world or a fun-loving cartoon world with it. All these possibilities make your project a possible fun one. But again, the characters have to be invested in each other to make it a NTR.

Now you could start out that the "kids" have grown up some and logically Daphne and Fred have started dating with Velma looking in jealous of those two while the player (MC) would be Shaggy. That would be a logical start. Regardless about the relationship dynamics, you are going to have to world build. Like making it that both Fred and Daphne coming from wealth, Velma from a family of teachers and Shaggy just your average guy or whatever.

Best of all you can introduce comedy with Scooby. Or if you REALLY want to go down a dark path....

Just how NTR do you want to make it is really up to you. Hopefully you have a character map, clearly defined goals, mileposts, and a 'flavor." Now I can write and am good at it, but whomever you take onboard has to give voice to your vision as well as the characters. Think of it as the old 60s version of the Star Trek characters to the new ones that have come out, night and day difference but each work within their own shows. The thing about your project is you are up against Scooby-Doo canon and certain expectations.

I imagine you are going to have to start off slow building the characters personalities, motivations, strengths/weakness, and interrelation dynamics to build up toward a tension and conflict. Too fast a start and poof you lost player creditability, too slow and pondering a loss of interest.

Personally, I'd love to see what you cook up. Whether you realize it or not, you have taken on one big project

 

[NTR Critic]

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