Part of me wants to rate this game a bit lower as it does have problems that are kind of annoying... but the potential to make this game really good is there and the bits of it that are enjoyable make me want to keep checking for more updates
Pros:
-The pacing of the relationship with the love interests is fairly good. It's slow, which pisses some people off, but fuck those idiots. It makes sense that it would take time and affection to break through the shell of both Hana and Rina, especially given how they are used to being heavily abused, and at the start of the game have never met the MC before. The development of the tentative friendship and them learning to challenge their old views on life makes sense. It would be bizarre and poor writing if they just jumped onto the MC's dick after a few days. Not all porn has to be brainless fuck fests. There's still lewd content, but it's done at a slower, more mature pace that fits with the subject matter of recovering from an abusive household and learning to trust again.
-You give headpats to a MILF. Do I need to say more? The embarrassed pout Hana gets after headpatting is adorable. Rina can fuck off, Hana is the best girl in this game.
-After Rina warms up to you a little bit her dialogue changes for the generic questions you can ask her, and you see a much more genuine side of her as she honestly engages with you for once. This is an excellent touch, and NEEDS to be implemented with Hana as well to show off her growing sense of self worth and confidence in herself. I hope the characters keep evolving in their casual interactions with the MC as well as their sexual ones throughout the development of this game.
Cons:
-The game is one of those "sandbox" games that... really isn't a sandbox. You're forced to go through content with various characters to progress with other ones. I REALLY hope this won't force you to get into sexual relationships with characters you aren't interested in in the future once the relationships with various love interests becomes more developed.
-On the topic of characters.... Lilly. She's not very likeable and I wish I could honestly skip her content so far. She's 30, but still acts like a petulant child and blames the MC for being forced to leave the town and leave her and his friends behind. I mean... come on, his parent's moved, not his fault. And her continued insistence of treating the distance that grew between them due to the move as his fault and something to hold against him is also ridiculous. People grow apart, it's not that deep. She just doesn't feel engaging or interesting to me, and I don't like how 'lecturing' she gets with the MC for things that weren't his fault. I get how this would all hurt her as a child but once again... she's fucking 30 now. Get over it.
-The clothes at the mall you can buy for both Hana and Rina only show up as an option during lewd scenes with them, they don't wear them around the house on their own volition. Maybe this is something that is actually kind of hard to code properly in Ren'Py, I have no idea, but it would be nice to see them in the alternate outfits at least some of the time when they're just around the house.
-Rina's attitude on sex seems a bit inconsistent with her backstory and personality. She's into femdom and likes to tease the MC constantly, and I love that... but the whole: flirty, confident, soft domination thing is REALLY at odds with how she's also portrayed as a mistrusting, suspicious and jaded person who refuses to let people become close to her. This gets even more confusing when she also reveals how she never had any friends or people that liked her even amongst the demi-humans as she is a half breed. I'm not sure if she is supposed to be sexually experienced or a virgin honestly, there are too many mixed signals. I like the soft femdom content with her, and I don't mind her backstory, but they don't feel like they mesh together that well at the moment.
TLDR:
Good game with a nice premise, but the execution is a bit boring and kind of a grindy click fest at the moment. The writing is nothing anyone hasn't seen before, but the slow development of the characters and more mature pacing of the story is a VERY nice change of pace from a lot of the schlock out there. Has potential to become a masterfully done game now that the sexual and romantic interactions are starting to really come together, and I hope that this one can stick the landing as it starts to get into the more 'action' centered updates in the future.