There isn't a lot here story wise, with the weakest aspect of the VN is being the blackmail plot. As a reader you feel she should be afraid as your natural reaction to being blackmailed but she isn't and it doesn't make sense. Fear creates drama and tension to the reader and drives the story on but there's none here. The blackmail story falls apart because of this. It becomes very frustrating as you go on and shows how one dimensional the writing is, with the dev leaning heavily on traditional 'blonde airhead' 'giggly girl' stereotypes to the point where it becomes boring. There's no fear, drama, jeopardy, subtlety or sophistication here, just stupidity. The scene between the FMC and Chelsea in the café where she tells Chelsea she's being blackmailed and they laugh about it, dismiss it and then talk about strippers particularly irritates. FFS this is not a natural reaction when someone tells you they are being blackmailed! The scene ends with 'Lacey doesn't dwell on their chat on the drive home, deciding to take Chelsea's advice and just have fun and be safe'. Yeah, have fun and be safe with your blackmailer! If the FMC always submits what's the point as there no surprises in the background story to make it interesting. She didn't take the drugs yet you don't have a choice to say no and go to the police, even if it leads to an ending. It's also justified by her submissively saying she's complying with the blackmailer to protect her husband's reputation, suggesting that she doesn't matter or is in danger only he does, which is particularly annoying. After that you just jump in head first into the corruption. There's no slow, build up at all here, everything is turned up to 11 straight away. You're all in with anything the blackmailer says with no pause or thought. Multiple times you have opportunities to do something, particularly using the private investigator but the FMC acts like a submissive idiot, forgets and then after a while doesn't care anymore. Inevitably this leads you to the conclusion that you don't care anymore about the story.
If you can get past the stupidity it all looks fantastic with a great selection of beautiful LI's to choose from and the FMC is gorgeous. You want everyone and they want you immediately, there's no build-up, you're free to pick and choose anyone as you want. Whether you like that or not is up to you. However you seem to be the sub in every relationship, so you will always be the good girl and do what they want. Even your female friends undress you, make you wear less, force you to drink more and you don't have choice to object. You have no choices once each scene starts. The FMC basically offers sexual favours to anyone who 'helps' her even when she does need help. If you like that it's up to you but half of the time you're just thinking why, as it becomes a series of sex scenes rather than any pretence at a story. The nurses uniforms are funny but ridiculous. Why aren't they wearing scrubs with their hair tied up for a bit of realism? The male staff are in scrubs, patients in gowns, but it's like the nurses are all off to a Halloween Party at a frat house. There's no way you could work in them.
You don't have a lot of choices here except the path you follow, straight or lesbian. After that decision you just have to go with it, which while it is simpler for the dev, it is sometimes disappointing for the reader when you want a different choice, action or view later in the scene. One downside is that often the person speaking is not the person your looking at which breaks immersion. It mainly happens when there's a scene with group of three. For example Audrey is talking but you're looking at Riley but it's something Riley might say, so you have go back a line or two of dialogue and re-read just to check the story. It would be easier if you were looking at both to save on renders for the dev or the correct person.
I really think the VN would be better without the whole blackmail storyline; if it was just a slice of life story about a nurse. The blackmail plot often just gets in the way and it grates every time it comes up, as its done so badly. It would be much easier if the FMC just had the choice to do what she wants to do, without being 'forced' by a blackmailer and just has fun. It's a shame as everything could have been so much better. There so many VN's with great stories out there that look terrible. This one looks fantastic but has no story.
Looks beautiful, not much story with a few large holes in it