Ren'Py - Abandoned - Love in Flux [Prologue Remake] [DezraGames]

Looks amazing, i love the models and renders for the sis and mom, they look actually realistic. I do hope this game gets some updates in the future, seeing as its just a prologue, and doesnt yet have any nudity.

Both female models are amazing, especially the mom. Sad to see this abandoned. As of writing this, the last thing you encounter was the dream with your mom. As the mission doesn't change, I assume it ends there. Great photo to get the code. Give it a try to just see the mom model

after receiving a warning about a negative review that was getting a lot of support from the community, i noticed that none of my reviews strictly adheres to the site rules of reviews as outlined by the trial moderator who messaged me regarding the warning.

i asked for instruction as to how to remove all my reviews, in order to comply with the rules and firstly received a speedy response telling me that a warning is only to highlight that i must change the rule breaking review.
except that the review in question had been removed in its entirety and was no longer available to change, making complicity impossible.

as no further requested instruction was given as to how i may conform with the site rules and remove all rule breaking reviews of negative and positive support, i kindly ask a viewing staff member to remove this

i apologise to all developers who may be effected by my loss of support

also worth noting that no positive review non-complicit to site rules for the same game have been removed which is rather curious

The mom is just perfect ,Love how natural mom looks, that's so hot, The mom is everything i ever wanted in an incest game, incredible job!
With hope the next update is sooner rather than later.
Great game. Great art. Great dialogue. I only have one teensy weensy caveat if you'll permit me.
Mom's mouth is.... Strange somehow, dunno. It's weird. Maybe it's just me.
That's all I got. Keep up the good work, dev

So far, so good for a prologue. I will admit that the dialogue is a little bit on the generic side, but I've come to expect that in these types of games. The dead/disappear dad thing is a bit cliche however, that's what allows the MC to move in on the mom. Speaking of the mother, I can already tell that your design choice for her is going to be divisive. Personally, I dig it. She actually looks like an older woman and not a 20-year-old with gigantic tits. That's so common in other games like this. All in all, I'd say this game is definitely worth keeping on the watch list.

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:
-Nice Renders
-Nice Story
-Nice Prologue
-No grinding
-Nice Milf
Cons:
-None

Conclusion:
Nice story and pretty good length for a Prologue.
Hot Mother with good renders,love the strain marks on her tits,very realistic.
Love the Mixture of time travel and action that seems to be coming in future releases.

worth the download and will keep a watch on this.

Looks like a great game on paper based on the plot, and will have to be seen in the future of how well the Dev manages to execute it. The game looks greaat in the renders and animation department. The story is somewhat like the amazing Spiderman series . Father creates technology, father goes missing, Said technology works only with his DNA therefore Son can use it. The only minor problem I see storywise is that it's very much straightforward and rushed. There's not much to talk about in the prologue, so will definitely keep an eye on this one in the future.

This game has potential! Interesting story, very good art, the girls are nice looking, it's not like the other games were they make the mom look like a pornstar. I loved it! Keep making more please, this game could easily make it to the top

There isn't much to go on yet storywise, and certainly not enough to warrant a 4 or 5-star rating. This could turn out pretty great, or borderline terrible. At the moment, we barely get an introduction to the characters. The models are decent, and the writing is okay.

For a prologue it's not bad, but not great either. The thing that sticks out the most is the plot. It's interesting. There isn't a lot of play time. Which isn't an issue because it's a prologue. I am interested in seeing where it goes. I'll adjust the rating after the next update. Good luck to the dev with this project

A prologue showcasing an interesting idea but poor execution, as well as great renders but with some models who are certainly an acquired taste.
Well as of this review this is just a prologue and doing reviews can be tough with this little content. Currently playtime is about 15 minutes.
The renders are quite well made, high resolution and detail put into them. I would go out on a limb and say that render wise this game is easily in the upper 50% of DAZ produced games on this site. For me personally the model of the "landlady" was somewhat disturbing and the MC looked like a 14 year old imo but this may or may not be a matter of taste.
Now looking at the "Novel" part of this VN one would have to say that the Idea - time traveling back 10 seconds and using that to your advantage - is intriguing. The whole way the story is currently written is not. Rome was not build in a day and Harry Potter does not encounter Voldemort in the first 2 pages, I could go on with metaphors. but I think the point is clear. Stories need developing, an arc of suspense, not a vertical tightrope of action. At one point the MC says "Sorry...This is all so much to take in at once" this is how the player feels as well. So in conclusion, the story needs work.
There is a lot of potential in this game based on the story idea and the quality of the renders. I'm sure a vote on the models would help put some choices into perspective and considering working with a skilled writer to develop the story in a more natural way would also likely result in an improvement.
Good Luck to the dev with the future development.

Gameplay: 2/5 | Renders: 5/5 | Story: 3/5 | Writing: 1/5
GRADE: 2.7/C-