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Nimbus Commando

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No no... i think i explained myself wrong... The hallucination was the talk with Lacey that creates the motivation for him to leave... He DOES leave her for real, gets suitcases, gets into the train and leaves, the Lacey(hallucination) talk and him leaving her for real (no hallucination or nightmare) are the last couple of scenes of the update.
About damn time, since she is a fucking cancer.
 

Avaron1974

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The game will have proably 7 endings, with two good, two neutral, two bad and one horrific.
Sounds better than what I was thinking. I was expecting 1 good, 1 bad, 1 absolutely god awful and hopefully maybe a neutral just incase.

Having a couple of others to account for variations would be awesome.

I do not share your hopelessness
It's not hopelessness as such it's the direction of the story expecting too much from the characters we have right now.

More and more drama gets piled on both internal within the group and external but without any actual high points.

The drama is constant with only sex scenes and coffee shop visits breaking it up. Apart from Jared they haven't had a big win that's brought them together and given them something to build on. Jared can't exactly be called their win either, it was his fiance that fucked him over.

My lack of optimism is purely because of the amount of drama constantly piling up. More gets added without any resolution which is starting to make the conversations between Lacey and the MC a bit repetitive. They have had a whole list of arguments over the same things with absolutely none of it being resolved.

The first episode was fantastic. I loved relationship drama there, by the end of the second episode it was starting to get piled on a bit too thick. After having a third update of them having the exact same problems and going over the exact same points is getting a bit old now.

With all the different external problems piling up this was the update to start bringing them all together to get ready to deal with all the other problems. With how this ended though I doubt anything will improve with them next time either.

There are only so many times we can go through Lacey mess up, MC go booo, Lacey cry and tell a story about how sorry she is, MC fucks her and forgives her, Lacey mess up again aaaaaaaaand repeat.

With how easily they are all manipulated and how badly they messed up walking into that trap, they need to start coming together.
 

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Sounds better than what I was thinking. I was expecting 1 good, 1 bad, 1 absolutely god awful and hopefully maybe a neutral just incase.

Having a couple of others to account for variations would be awesome.

It's not hopelessness as such it's the direction of the story expecting too much from the characters we have right now.

More and more drama gets piled on both internal within the group and external but without any actual high points.

The drama is constant with only sex scenes and coffee shop visits breaking it up. Apart from Jared they haven't had a big win that's brought them together and given them something to build on. Jared can't exactly be called their win either, it was his fiance that fucked him over.

My lack of optimism is purely because of the amount of drama constantly piling up. More gets added without any resolution which is starting to make the conversations between Lacey and the MC a bit repetitive. They have had a whole list of arguments over the same things with absolutely none of it being resolved.

The first episode was fantastic. I loved relationship drama there, by the end of the second episode it was starting to get piled on a bit too thick. After having a third update of them having the exact same problems and going over the exact same points is getting a bit old now.

With all the different external problems piling up this was the update to start bringing them all together to get ready to deal with all the other problems. With how this ended though I doubt anything will improve with them next time either.

There are only so many times we can go through Lacey mess up, MC go booo, Lacey cry and tell a story about how sorry she is, MC fucks her and forgives her, Lacey mess up again aaaaaaaaand repeat.

With how easily they are all manipulated and how badly they messed up walking into that trap, they need to start coming together.
Yea and I fully expect they'll only come together Act 6 as I stated before because the Dev will pop up some major threat that they have to work together to overcome, I doubt its going to get much better the next two Acts, next Act probably someone will trackdown the MC in a snap tell him off for running away, he'll come back, I assume it will then get a bit of patch up, followed by Lacey fucking up again, followed by another round of patch up, and likely end on another cliffhanger. I expect Act 5 will be more of the same with only Act 6 likely starting straight up with the major threat, and the first half of the Act will likely have them be miserable, the second part of the Act will have them come together and perform a penultimate patch up, followed by a final confrontation against what the big bad is, with the ending afterward where unless they die everything get magically solved a way or another between the MC & Lacey.
 

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I just finished act 2, came here to see when act 2 was released, expecting be depressed that I was going to have to wait a year for the next chapter, considering the lengths of the chapters... And I see act 3 was uploaded? Today?! I think I'm the one who stole all the MC's luck. I'm so fucking addicted to this story right now.
 

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Sounds better than what I was thinking. I was expecting 1 good, 1 bad, 1 absolutely god awful and hopefully maybe a neutral just incase.

Having a couple of others to account for variations would be awesome.



It's not hopelessness as such it's the direction of the story expecting too much from the characters we have right now.

More and more drama gets piled on both internal within the group and external but without any actual high points.

The drama is constant with only sex scenes and coffee shop visits breaking it up. Apart from Jared they haven't had a big win that's brought them together and given them something to build on. Jared can't exactly be called their win either, it was his fiance that fucked him over.

My lack of optimism is purely because of the amount of drama constantly piling up. More gets added without any resolution which is starting to make the conversations between Lacey and the MC a bit repetitive. They have had a whole list of arguments over the same things with absolutely none of it being resolved.

The first episode was fantastic. I loved relationship drama there, by the end of the second episode it was starting to get piled on a bit too thick. After having a third update of them having the exact same problems and going over the exact same points is getting a bit old now.

With all the different external problems piling up this was the update to start bringing them all together to get ready to deal with all the other problems. With how this ended though I doubt anything will improve with them next time either.

There are only so many times we can go through Lacey mess up, MC go booo, Lacey cry and tell a story about how sorry she is, MC fucks her and forgives her, Lacey mess up again aaaaaaaaand repeat.

With how easily they are all manipulated and how badly they messed up walking into that trap, they need to start coming together.
You know, on this I agree with you completely this is why I dislike Vegas so much, it was a missed train to actually get something good and interesting going, not something that would have resolved anything, both Lacey and Mc would still have enoumous issues, heck you could have Lacey do a small fuckup and MC have nightmares to underline his declining health, but at least we could have seen something that deepened the bonds and demonstrated love.

Instead we got the same drama, not a different kind, but the same event and dynamic structure.
Corrupting/instigator friend (or Lacey) starts shit -> everyone follows said friend (or Lacey) without a reason, MC included (with Lacey we have a reason) -> parties are not to be held accountable due to *insert brain damage and/or drug of choice here* -> MC suffers -> MC gets half an apology and a "reward" - > MC is told he should get over it.

Imagine the "I realized I never loved you but now I do with all the fiber of my being" was dropped at the dinner instead of a damn hotel hall in front of strangers.
Even having Lacey ask MC to repeat the rules at the dinner and then ask him to add another one/two/three (or substitute them all with it) which would state something like: "Lacey is mine", "I have control over her" or whatever suit your fancy, even super romantic ones or tied to one of the specific paths (it is 6 am over here, my brain is half fried).

Or having a path choice there in one of the nights in the suite or tied to the BDSM club (if you want to keep the roofied subplot going they could either be on stage or participate in a class together) or the stripper club (MC could have a choice of having Lacey dance or have a private dance or both and he could dance too I guess, even if I disliked that scene quite a bit for several reasons).

And I am not saying that you could not have Lacey or some of the friends fuck up a bit (keep emilio for example or an overly handsy guy at the BDSM club), but it shouldn't be the backbone of the arc.

It seems like the piling on is mandatory, and maybe the Prof is trying to follow the 3 phases of narration (intro, escalation, resolution) or the classic tragedy structure (intro, rise, climax, return and catastrophe, obviously manipulated for the purpose of the story), but it really seem that he is stuck in creating issues for the characters for the sake of it and uses crutches that make no sense whatsoever.

The problem with this is that we are supposed to hope for MC to let go of his pain, but the fuck ups from friends and Lacey are constant, so it does sound like a giant "get over it man, who cares about your feelings"!
Trust Lacey! even if she shows absolutely nothing for it aside from words! (And I trust her as a reader, but I cannot see how MC could).

Act 2 was perfect in this, MC was shown to be unable to heal because he didn't want to face the past and did not want anyone to talk or think badly about Lacey (we only see the latter in act 3), while fully recognizing that the culprit (with obvious extenuating circumstances, she is a very unfortunate woman) was Lacey (granted, Lacey still recognizes this but still deflects, MC friends do not).
The whole Dianne dialogue was cathartic and Lacey truly glowed.

And when you force drama but then you want to show that "it wasn't that bad" you trip over heavy inconsistencies with the previous acts, I already posted parts of dialogues when Lacey fully admits that dressing for other men is akin to cheating, yet now miracolously it is not anymore and Jeanette trying to justify the whole thing as "like a trip to the lingerie store" sounds so ridicolous that you can't help but smirk, go into the variables and remove her as lover.
Notwithstanding the fact that she just saw what Lacey did to MC, voluntarily or not, and yet at the end of the trip she wants to be superfriends with her, because they had so much fun (but wasn't she ashamed like a dog after the BDSM club?).

And as a side note: drugs do not change your whole personality, it is hard to read parts like this (alcohol however...).

So yeah, the drama is relentless, without building good moments, so it is hard to imagine how or why MC should care about these people that keep on hurting him.
With Anna we go from being disappointed that she lied to him (on a pretty fucking huge issue) to dates for example.
And you could say the same with Mia and Veronica (whose friend or foe moment in act 1 was genuinely thrilling).

Without good moments to build up the relationships it all feels very fabricated and thin, which is what leads you to your thoughts on the continuation of the story.
We are told those relationships are there, but we don't really "see" them? (aside from Lacey and MC)
An easy example is Mia, she does a mess, goes behind Lacey's back, hates and tries to hurt MC, half an hour later we read MC say: Mia is family.
I mean...

And if I can be a bit of a daydreamer: the visit from the three stooges was surely a good moment to understand Lacey better, still it would have been even better if she was about to paint herself from Mia's pictures, instead of going (with quite a bit of hypocrisy) off on these guys, burning the girl that shouldn't have been, burning a past that shouldn't have happened.
And I get why the three stooges are there, it is a way for the prof to instill trust in Lacey, she is cutting the ties off somehow, and gives him a chance to write her going off on Isaac for Mc humiliation, which was missing since act 1.
Oh I would have kept Lacey going off on Mia and probably would have made it last 1 hour of gameplay, it was severely needed :p .

I guess I should put the usual disclaimer that it might look like I am overly critical, but the points I make really come from what I hope is perceived as contructive criticism.


I just finished act 2, came here to see when act 2 was released, expecting be depressed that I was going to have to wait a year for the next chapter, considering the lengths of the chapters... And I see act 3 was uploaded? Today?! I think I'm the one who stole all the MC's luck. I'm so fucking addicted to this story right now.
Welcome to the club, I suggest 5 consecutive playthroughs to start.
 
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I will have to say if we really saw nothing but yet things happened clearly, then this emotionally damaging game is not worth it lol. So much depression to get barely anything for all the mental retardism of these characters I have to read. If they are all that easily manipulated for what? To just imagine what happens?
 

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All Lacey does is stupid shit, blames everything on drugs and muh brain damage, everyone forgives her and who gives and fuck about what the MC feels nothing gets resolved MC acts like a bitch and follows along like a good little dog and everyone forgives her and everyone moves on to the next thing she will do what's funny is everyone seems to be allowed to do terrible shit and then gets forgiven the MC though if he even gets angry he is told to get over it and move on he gets told to just forgive all the damn time fucking retarded and hell the dumb fuck does the being buddies with Isaac and shit is just pathetic bro wonder if he will just become friends with all of his wifes old fuck buddies fitting since he is a retard.
 
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Alright so playing Act 3, I noted something that brought my thoughts back to an earlier theory I had, a correlation between this game and AlwaysFan, at one point Veronica talk with some unknown individual about how their some major money that seems to be involved in the plot targeting Lacey, and they question the connection, which bring me back to my theory... alright so we know Lacey was abused by her father, what if he wasn't her father, what if her mother had cheated with some individual and conceived Lacey out of that affair, which would be why her father hated her and abused her.

Now someone had theorized that whoever was after Lacey could be her father, but what if its her biological father, a rich prick which had an affair with her mother and which has figured possibly because her mother informed him after Lacey had left home, and he decided to try to isolate his biological daughter so he can jump him and claim her as his own and effectively establish a positive relationship with her by 'saving' her from troubles and abandon by her husband, this would allow him to effectively forge a strong relationship from the get go with her. At the end their will be a confrontation between them and he'll hand over control of his company to Lacey whom will hand its leadership to the MC, which will chose what do to with it, and depending on what path you chose it will define what sort of business you'll make out of it, a porn empire on the slut path, a BDSM club on the punishment path, and a normal business on the vanilla path. I know some people have complained about my theory previously but if its true the Prof is inspired by AlwaysFan for some of the narrative of this game it would be the matching outcome.

Edit: So the excuse they give for why someone would be interested in Lacey would be because of whatever lands she might own after her father died... except the plot extend to months before he died... which mean it doesn't make sense. Its a land in Tennessee, just about the only natural resource that would typically motivate some efforts normally might be oil, but its not a state renowned for it and it seem fairly limited in term of oil potential, so wasting so much money and efforts over it would be ridiculous.

The only other theory I could come up with is supernatural in nature, this Act has the lawyer from Augusta calling about reparation for the MC & Lacey, which remind us that this reality does possess supernatural beings and forces, I wonder if that is where the male equivalent to Augusta's is located, with its own potential portal to the dark world. The fact their is a very specific speculation that only someone from what is supposed to be Lacey's paternal family to own the land would support that sort of idea, so perhaps Lacey & the MC will end up having to go there and face, a place powered by good for the purpose of evil, basically the opposite of the one in Augusta. It could explain what sort of supernatural threat could lead to magically solve all of the characters problems during the final Act.
 
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Lady Lydia

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Looking at what Abby did, I figured out what she was trying doing is effectively trying to teach the MC:

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Anger is now understood as a natural and important signal that can help you identify boundaries, unmet needs, or injustices. It can be a powerful catalyst for positive action and growth if processed correctly, and is not simply an emotion to be "let go" without first being understood.

The Role of Anger

Rather than an inherently negative emotion that should be immediately discarded, modern psychological approaches suggest that anger serves several constructive purposes:

  • Signals a Problem Anger is a warning signal that something is wrong, your boundaries have been crossed, or something important to you is threatened.
  • Motivates Action It can raise your energy level and propel you to make changes to solve problems, advocate for yourself, or address an injustice.
  • Provides Self-Awareness Understanding what triggers your anger can help you learn about your own values, needs, and what you are willing to accept in your life.
How Anger Teaches You to "Let Go"

The process of "letting go" involves acknowledging, understanding, and processing the anger, not just suppressing or ignoring it.
  1. Acknowledge and Identify: The first step is to recognize the emotion and identify its source (e.g., "I am angry because I feel disrespected").
  2. Process the Feeling: Allow yourself to feel the anger without judgment. It is energy that needs to move, through safe expressions like exercise, journaling, or talking to a trusted person.
  3. Learn the Lesson: Use the anger as a guide to understand the underlying issue. Ask yourself what boundary was broken or what need wasn't met.
  4. Choose to Release: After the emotion has been processed and its lesson learned, you can make an intentional decision to stop replaying the event and holding onto the bitterness. This forgiveness is a choice you make for your own well-being and peace of mind, not for the person who caused the harm.
By learning from your anger, you transform its intense energy into a positive force for self-awareness and personal growth, ultimately leading to a healthy release and inner peace.

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I am pretty sure the Prof outright did the same thing I did, looked it up on Google, and decided to create the entire girl's day precisely based on the info the AI fed him because I wrote a simple sentence and the above result basically explain entirely the thought process Abby had to push the entire thing.

Its funny that on that day the person that showed the most empathy was the sales girl at the sexy clothes store, seriously its insane that the Prof created so many characters that are supposed to be smart and wise, yet all of them are dumb the minute the narrative requires it.
 
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Lacey messes up - MC gets nervous - Lacey blames the drugs - MC forgives her - Lacey messes up - MC gets nervous - Lacey blames the drugs - MC forgives her....

It feels like I'm stuck in Groundhog Day. Everything that happened here had already happened exactly the same way in the first two acts.

And I'm really sorry, but I couldn't finish act 3. It's simply frustrating to see the MC (with serious mental problems) being abused by his toxic wife (and supposed friends) again and again and again, in an endless cycle. There's no redemption in this game, it's an infinite limbo of suffering.

I'll come back when the option "Fuck you Lacey, it's over" finally appears. :ROFLMAO:
 

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So, I have been reading the comments and I don't even know where to start. I don't have the time or the energy to get into it all now, but I will say this...
I still really liked this Act. Lacey is still one of if not my favorite character. I understand people hate her and you have the right to hate her and I understand that because of my love for the character my opinions will be just as biased towards her as someone who hates her. But wow.
Reading these comments have been like sitting an a room watching people argue if a glass is half full or half empty while I thinking it's always full just with half water and half air.

I am going to say a few things before I go to bed.

First a couple of replies.

No. He has developed hallucinations, in one of those, Lacey tells him that she is gonna get high on K and start slutting around again to make him hate her, so he could leave her... He does, but again, the whole scene was a hallucination.
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I read some comments a ways back discussing who the Professor is portraying as the main character of this VN. The MC or Lacey. I think I mentioned this before, but I don't think either of them are the main character and also both of them are. The main character of this VN is the relationship between them.
So many people have talked about wanting an option to leave or kill Lacey. I'd love to see that because after choosing it you'd just drop to a game over screen because the whole point of this VN would be over.

I also saw someone (maybe DF) say that they think the Professor reads these comments. I really doubt that. After reading the updates and comments he has posted in Patreon about his anxiety issues there is no way he could make it through these comments.

There is so much more I'd like to respond to individually, but I want to get to a few general comments.

My first comments are about what I'll call the non-issues. These are a few things that have been talked about repeatedly but I don't think there is a problem or issues.

Non-issue #1
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Before I head to bed I do want to talk about one more thing. (I have so much more, but I'll get to that later)
The Vegas Trip.

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Like I said I've got alot more I want to discuss, but I got to get to bed.

Have fun tearing me apart...
 

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Well, after playing this update only one thing is certain, Anna and Kelly are the only decent women around the mc. The rest really are just a bunch of despicable human beings. And I'm sorry but Abby deserved a punch right to her face

What the fuck was this girl's day bullshit ???

But even after saying that, the Lacey hate train here is cringe and stupid. She's a fucked up human being but we saw some real progress in act 3. While the MC is still deeply fucked up, but at least he's in therapy

A lot of people that were talking at the release of act 3 were just simply lying about Lacey and what she's doing in this act.

The quality is still there and when it's good it's really good (even if sometimes redundant) but I have to say that the ending was a real let down. And we'll have to wait months for part 4 after that ?

wtf !

ps : the office scene with Will and Stephen was shockingly bad, perhaps the worst thing in the whole game. That was beyond ridiculous
 
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Yea so the ending to Act 3 feels really dumb, I mean why did the MC snap at that point? You'd expect he'd snap because of a stimulus that would cause him to snap, however instead he just does randomly at the very end of the Act, after the girl's day in Vegas it would have made far more sense, give him a grave shock to cause him to experience a mental breakdown, but after seeing the therapist several times and everything, it feels very much like a very dictated event by the Dev, it doesn't happen when it make sense to happen but when the Dev wanted the MC to break for convenience of his narrative break between Act 3 and Act 4. At this point it feels like the Prof knows his story doesn't work and employing the cliffhangers ending to try to keep people hooked until the next Act, lacking a solid narrative they compensate by using cheap narrative techniques to keep the readers obsession, because at this point I can't say what even drive me to play this shit is interest, its about the same sentiment people feel like watching a train derailing.
 

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As much as I enjoy this VN and I support the developer, playing this makes me feel like I'm temporarily living in the head of someone with bipolar disorder. It really is a whirlwind of emotions.

Most people seem to let the MC off the hook here, but I don't. Much of this shit is his fault for simply just letting shit happen around him. Imagine letting someone you've just met (Abby) run some experiment on you and your relationship. To the point where she drugs your wife and girlfriends, which they are at this point especially Mia.

Allowing yourself to be treated like he was during "girls day" or for even allowing such a thing on a trip with Lacey and Mia that he is paying for.
I'm glad that he's now seeing a therapist, she was right to be really concerned. I wouldn't be surprised if he spends part of the next chapter in a mental hospital.
 

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The whole Dianne dialogue was cathartic and Lacey truly glowed.
The whole thing with Dianne was perfect, absolutely spot on. Not only did she call Lacey out and hold her accountable but she's seen the same kind of relationship from the MC's side so it's spoken from experience not just ranting.

She's the exact friend that Lacey needs to help her grow.

I am a bit saddened by the whole Vegas thing mainly with Jeanette. She was one of my faves but the BDSM club really let her down.

Shameful admittance but during the 2 years me and my twin sister traveled we did go to a couple of raves and happened to pop ex on more than one occasion. It didn't make me do anything I didn't want to or change anything about me personality wise. What it did do is make me want to dance and talk a lot of waffle for few hours. I couldn't stay still at all.

It's also insanely dangerous to spike someone with. If someone happened to have a medical condition or a bad high then it doesn't end well.

I did wonder to myself if Abby was put there just to make Lacey look good in comparison. Abby fucked up mahoosively which took some of the heat of the others.

Yue is also making her way to my shit list slowly. I adored her for the first 2 parts but now she's essentially wanting to do to Brandon the same thing Lacey has done to the MC. Her and Brandon have a kind of thing going on and she's chasing the MC. I do find that a bit icky.

I think Jamie is going to end up as one of my faves. He was super adorable as a guy but now he's leaning more into his feminine side even going to some boobs, I think the now she will be a sweetheart.

I want to like Anna but she did annoy me during the trap fail. She's all mouth and rage against Lacey but the second she needs to show a bit of spine she breaks down and shits herself.

Mia is the friend no one needs. She just brings chaos and amplifies problems that don't need amplifying.

The biggest issue being with so many women is it takes constant effort to keep them all happy and make sure no one is jealous. Having them all in a kind of harem looks great on paper but so few of them have shown themselves to be worth the effort it would take. This is why I keep harping on about the dev needing to start building them up because the longer it keeps going with the friend group drama the less girls the players will want to keep around. Prof needs to realise he's making some of these girls incredibly unlikable and reel it in a bit, especially with Mia and Lacey. Mia right now is like one of the antagonists, any further and he'll be unable to bring her back to a tolerable state.

He also needs to start resolving some of the drama even if only in the friend group. He keeps piling it on and it's getting overwhelming. 3 updates of constant drama and no time to breath.

I think for his next game he should lean into the drama and do a tragedy instead of trying to push a group romance ark too. Without the nonsense excuses, he clearly knows how to write dramatic stories. If he wasn't trying to keep a handful of relationships going and Lacey's constant excuses it would be a good drama story. Sadly he hasn't quite got the balance between the drama and relationship building right now. It's very heavy on drama and far too light on relationship building.
 

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As much as I enjoy this VN and I support the developer, playing this makes me feel like I'm temporarily living in the head of someone with bipolar disorder. It really is a whirlwind of emotions.

Most people seem to let the MC off the hook here, but I don't. Much of this shit is his fault for simply just letting shit happen around him. Imagine letting someone you've just met (Abby) run some experiment on you and your relationship. To the point where she drugs your wife and girlfriends, which they are at this point especially Mia.

Allowing yourself to be treated like he was during "girls day" or for even allowing such a thing on a trip with Lacey and Mia that he is paying for.
I'm glad that he's now seeing a therapist, she was right to be really concerned. I wouldn't be surprised if he spends part of the next chapter in a mental hospital.
If you don't understand why the MC let everything that happen to him happen, you haven't paid enough attention to his characterization, he is a broken passive man that does pretty much anything anyone ask of him, because he is driven by a desperate need to make everything better for everyone else. He did what Abby asked because he trust Jeanette, and she is her sister, and because of that he assumed she knew better and wouldn't do anything that would have cause serious damage.

As for the notion he is heading to a mental hospital you clearly don't understand how the Dev of this game think, I thought the three Acts would have shown this Dev doesn't believe in really solving problems unless it serve their narrative, and their narrative is built on a onslaught of drama, solving problems equate to stopping drama, so nothing really constructive is going to happen during this story until the final Act, at which point having driven its story into the ground via an excess of drama, the Dev is very likely to pull the typical 'United We Stand' trope of tossing a major threat to the characters, forcing them to overcome their issues to triumph, with failure likely to lead to death in the case of either or both of Lacey & MC, otherwise its going to be some sort of positive ending that hasn't been earned but artificially justified by the shared triumph.

So yea the likely outcome is next Act will start with someone quickly catching up to the MC and make him feel guilty for running away and abandoning all his girls, before proceed to whatever actual story the Dev will have artificially fabricated for that Act, which as I stated before will likely follow the pattern of them patching things up, Lacey fucking things up, patching things up again, and end on another cliffhanger to keep us hooked until Act 5, if you expect anything else you haven't learned any lesson from the first 3 Acts that all virtually followed the same framework.

The whole thing with Dianne was perfect, absolutely spot on. Not only did she call Lacey out and hold her accountable but she's seen the same kind of relationship from the MC's side so it's spoken from experience not just ranting.

She's the exact friend that Lacey needs to help her grow.

I am a bit saddened by the whole Vegas thing mainly with Jeanette. She was one of my faves but the BDSM club really let her down.

Shameful admittance but during the 2 years me and my twin sister traveled we did go to a couple of raves and happened to pop ex on more than one occasion. It didn't make me do anything I didn't want to or change anything about me personality wise. What it did do is make me want to dance and talk a lot of waffle for few hours. I couldn't stay still at all.

It's also insanely dangerous to spike someone with. If someone happened to have a medical condition or a bad high then it doesn't end well.

I did wonder to myself if Abby was put there just to make Lacey look good in comparison. Abby fucked up mahoosively which took some of the heat of the others.

Yue is also making her way to my shit list slowly. I adored her for the first 2 parts but now she's essentially wanting to do to Brandon the same thing Lacey has done to the MC. Her and Brandon have a kind of thing going on and she's chasing the MC. I do find that a bit icky.

I think Jamie is going to end up as one of my faves. He was super adorable as a guy but now he's leaning more into his feminine side even going to some boobs, I think the now she will be a sweetheart.

I want to like Anna but she did annoy me during the trap fail. She's all mouth and rage against Lacey but the second she needs to show a bit of spine she breaks down and shits herself.

Mia is the friend no one needs. She just brings chaos and amplifies problems that don't need amplifying.

The biggest issue being with so many women is it takes constant effort to keep them all happy and make sure no one is jealous. Having them all in a kind of harem looks great on paper but so few of them have shown themselves to be worth the effort it would take. This is why I keep harping on about the dev needing to start building them up because the longer it keeps going with the friend group drama the less girls the players will want to keep around. Prof needs to realise he's making some of these girls incredibly unlikable and reel it in a bit, especially with Mia and Lacey. Mia right now is like one of the antagonists, any further and he'll be unable to bring her back to a tolerable state.

He also needs to start resolving some of the drama even if only in the friend group. He keeps piling it on and it's getting overwhelming. 3 updates of constant drama and no time to breath.

I think for his next game he should lean into the drama and do a tragedy instead of trying to push a group romance ark too. Without the nonsense excuses, he clearly knows how to write dramatic stories. If he wasn't trying to keep a handful of relationships going and Lacey's constant excuses it would be a good drama story. Sadly he hasn't quite got the balance between the drama and relationship building right now. It's very heavy on drama and far too light on relationship building.
Huh first, what was that about Yue? My Yue was very hooked to the MC and chose him over Brandon, but the MC basically forced her to take Brandon and implied just about they'd figure something out later. I guess you possibly have a lower point version of that Yue meeting, or you misunderstood things, anyhow the MC would be to blame on that one, Yue clearly want to be with the MC in my version but said outright to Yue that she has to date Brandon, so if anything I think the Dev intend basically 3 possible outcomes, either the MC cuck Brandon, either the MC & Lacey swing with Yue & Brandon, either the MC decide later to stay away from Yue? I guess that will be our choice down the line. Not that I like it, I would have rather kept Yue for the MC, I don't know if their is a way to possibly keep her for the MC, if their is its unknown yet.

As for why he doesn't bother it seem at all to fix the relationships issues, look at what I wrote above, to me its becoming incredibly clear the Dev intend to pull a last Act major struggle to get everyone to play nice together, nothing will be earned and everything magically enforced upon the characters, its the only way I can see things heading after 3 Acts of dramatic onslaught.
 
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No, i really meant the Professor, it was just another way to say that he has some writting issues.
No, I meant when you said character teleportation from point A to B. I was wondering which character you were referring to.


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It doesn't matter if Lacey considers it minor or not... but that MC considered it important enough that he wanted to mention it, so for him, it was not minor. And again we end with a MC being policed on what he can feel or think.
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That’s fine. We all understand things differently. I initially posted for the 1st time to try to understand why some of you see the game vastly differently from me. I think I’ve got my answer after a couple interactions. Don’t take offense if I don’t respond to you again. I feel like we’re just going to recycle the same points over and over and that means it’s time to call it a day.

The point was that instead of what he thinks he is writing, he is sure that what he has writted matches his intent.

Like i said, its not about dictating what the others want so he can write the other people story, but to have someone that checks that he is fully aware of the consecuencies of what he has written, and he goes with it with that exact intent.

And of course, this "editing" and "fact checking" would be done in private, during the writting portion of the game development, not a discussion in public forum for other users to see or participate.

This last part is not meant to throw shades. If it is, I apologise.

I don’t know, the fact that you ended up choosing the term "bad ideas" in the first place suggests there’s an agenda. Maybe it wasn’t the wording you were looking for, a lot of us don’t seem to be native English speakers.

If someone were ever to become this "editor" or "fact checker", they would need to be unequivocally objective and neutral in their assessment. You guys have very strong and biased opinions, which is completely fine as fans, but definitely not compatible with a neutral fact-checker. I’m tempted to think your views would bleed into the "fact-checking".
 
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