[v0.1.4]
I mean it's a 1 hour read with no erotic content, so I already not recommend checking it out right now for that reason alone. The story idea is interesting and writing is adequate, so I would have given in a 3 star in advance for potential as usual, but there are some glaring issues that heavily deter from the experience and need to be fixed ASAP:
I mean it's a 1 hour read with no erotic content, so I already not recommend checking it out right now for that reason alone. The story idea is interesting and writing is adequate, so I would have given in a 3 star in advance for potential as usual, but there are some glaring issues that heavily deter from the experience and need to be fixed ASAP:
- Get rid of the one-option choices, they add nothing of value and just waste player's time. They appear every 30-60 seconds, it's incredibly annoying.
- Constant gameover choices need to go, there are 5 in the first 30 minutes of the novel and they serve no purpose.
- Cut-scenes look like some amateur 90s FPS letsplay.
- In-door and night environments are almost pitch black, can't see shit.