HTML Abandoned Lovely Disgusting World [v0.02] [Mia Iriko]

LovYa

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Overview:
Hi, I'm Mia Iriko. "Lovely Disgusting World" is a text based game witch is many non-linear stories inside. Every story takes place in the same city called The Darklove. Some stories has very extreme content inside (kinks like scat, guro, bestiality e.t.c) but some of them has vanilla content, without any extremes stuff. So check it out, you'll probably find something interesting in the game, no matter what you like.

Important: this is a very early version of my game. For now "Lovely disgusting world" contains only one endless story named "Mia and her Mother's secret" which is pretty extreme. But if you don't like kinks like scat, in future you also find vanilia stories in this game, so do not reject "Lovely Disgusting World" if you don't like extremes. I public this game now because I want take your opinions before I spend many hours doing things who who I may improve if I known your opinions.​

Thread Updated: 2020-06-25
Release Date: 2020-06-24
Developer: Mia Iriko F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 0.02
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
Length: Short
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Rozhok

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I saw the disclaimer at the start, so I understand the grammar and style errors. But its pretty significant and since it is text only, can be quite bothersome. Get a proofreader if possible. However, I do quite like dark and kinky stories, so keep it up!
 

X-Skull

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If you want people's opinions on your new game then I suggest a poll where it's only fair that everyone gets to vote their kinks into your game.
 
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will_990

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Your game main title brought me in as I'm normally not into depressing/dark things (regarding se. games), but it's definitely eye-catching.
Best wishes for your endeavour. :)
 
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LovYa

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I saw the disclaimer at the start, so I understand the grammar and style errors. But its pretty significant and since it is text only, can be quite bothersome. Get a proofreader if possible. However, I do quite like dark and kinky stories, so keep it up!
Hi, is the text so bad I should improve my english and start working on the game after I learn better, or maybe it's not that bothersome and I may not stop working? Of course the text will improve with another updates, becouse I will be learn but if now my game is compleatly unreadable maybe I should stopped project for now, how are you think?

If you want people's opinions on your new game then I suggest a poll where it's only fair that everyone gets to vote their kinks into your game.
I think it's unnecessary becouse I have so many kinks so everyone will find something they like in my next stories. But I will definitely do a survey when I'm done "Mia and her mother's secret" to find out in wich order I should make another stories.

Your game main title brought me in as I'm normally not into depressing/dark things (regarding se. games), but it's definitely eye-catching.
Best wishes for your endeavour. :)
Thanks :giggle:
 
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Content is so small but its normal since you call it ' a very early version '. I dont find your english bothersome maybe its because i m also not native and suck at english so i d rather prefer you to continue the game while studying english .I like the fact that you re into kinks&fetishes ,many game here doesnt have many variety of them.I hope in next updates we will see more extremes ,especially i got really excited when i saw the guro in kinks , i know one reader is not enough but i ll definitely play -or read or whatsoever- this
also as a female ,female protagonist for laifu
 
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Did you stop working on this game or working on grammar etc stuffs?
 
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I wish there was more content but I can't wait for the next update, and The english isn't that bad, But I play alot of Machine Translated hentai games, so I am use to broken english, What you could do is find a proof-reader to read the text and make sure it is grammatically correct?
 

LovYa

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Hi... Em, really sorry for everyone, but I stopped with makes this game because of my personal issues, and now I'm not in the mood to develop this project. But I'm thinking about making other game in Ren'py, and this time I promise not to disappoint you all (or at least inform you when I'm about to onhold game). Again, sorry.
 
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Hi... Em, really sorry for everyone, but I stopped with makes this game because of my personal issues, and now I'm not in the mood to develop this project. But I'm thinking about making other game in Ren'py, and this time I promise not to disappoint you all (or at least inform you when I'm about to onhold game). Again, sorry.
i hope you re alright now,do whatever you please you re the boss))
if it s ok to say,what will the new potential game be about?and what genres will it include?
 
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LovYa

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My new game will be a blend of reality and weird fantasies you have seen in Lovely Disgusting World. The main protagonist is a normal girl, attending a normal school, in a world like ours. Thanks to this, people who don't like extreme kinks also may play in my new game... but of course, I will make also many extreme kinks scenes. And, since it's renpy, I will add porn images and films (or hentai in case of weird fantasies). So, thanks for your words and I hope you guys like what I will do.
 
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