VN - Ren'Py - Loving Slaves [S1] [Domination Man]

Let's skip the second-hand slave, this game feels more like a demo than anything else.

Several frames are missing, an entire scene is missing, and a variable is poorly defined.
The choices have no impact, and the end of the chapter is just the three slaves taking pity on the MC.

This "game" hasn't even been playtested by the developer, otherwise it wouldn't be in this state.

Jane tries to cook
See Dick fuck Jane
Jane gets spooged

And so on, this is the dialogue train. It's so bad it's hilarious.
The renders aren't terrible, but the "story" is abrupt and idiotic. The MC goes from zero to 3 whores in like a half dozen clicks.
Great if you hate grinding and hate character development I guess.

Oddly I think it's worth the download, I had a good laugh.

the mc is a loser, such a pathetic man that it is incredible.

If you were excited about him dominating and earning his slaves then don't, they are just leftovers slaves of some other dude that feels bad about the MC being such a loser so he gives him his sloppy seconds. He has so little respect for him that he even fucks them before giving them away, so MC recives slaves with another dude's cum still dripping out, that's how little respect he gets.

The story is absolutely retarded, even for a porn game, the dialogs the same, renders are mediocre and the characters are either pathetic, disgusting or just stupid, imposible to care about any of them. This could have maybe been better if we played as the blonde guy instead of the MC, but that wouldn't have fixed the other shortcomings either.

Such a lazy attempt at a VN, 1/5.

V.S1 (whatever that means)

enter name then...
jake is fucking his slave (click)
JAKE: fuck you are so tight (click)
jake cums in her (click)
JAKE: fuck me (click)
JAKE : you really are something (click)
jake slumps on the couch (click)

i would like to say it gets less 'picture book' with regards to the writing at this point but.....just a couple of clicks later..
'the slaves look down'. plural. only one in screen and refers to only one, but plural. then a few more clicks later, "please can i suck you dick?".
is there a comma missing and she is calling you (MC) names or is spell checking a diploma level qualification now? i do wonder.

you then get to scene where the MC has a chest appear and wonders what his gift is. he is then told what his gift is before he opens it. witty repartee abound

at that point the game ended as my pc shut down. this was due to my body taking over to protect my brain and hit the power button.
gets a star for the art, which is not bad, but not great either. the rest is just crap. would rather play a spam unity game