VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Lucky Janitor [Final] [Rean]

Does what it sets out to do pretty well--advertise the developers skill to gauge interest in a larger project.

Its short and fun demo, with only a single "choice" at the end. I personally liked the models and the situations involved. The male MC is atypical of those you might normally find for these games (not a hung shota, not a hunk, not an alterative broody type, not a reedy nerd), and I respect that--he feels real (even if all the girls are strictly porn material). He seems like a real (if young) janitor.

The English is good! Dialogue is very good--not award worthy on it's own, but definitely helps with the immersion.

The animations and poses are sexy, and although there's still some polish that could be applied to the animations (some odd angles or gaps between figures), what's already there is worth watching. Very impressive for a first try.

This is a very silly fun little game. It doesn't aspire to the heights, but for what it is, it's enjoyable. The story is of a down-on-his-luck 20-something guy stuck in a thankless dead-end job he hates. Today, the last day of the school term, a mysterious being intervenes and gives him a sex-filled day.

Right,

While I can not in good conscience mark the game as good, average is a good score in my books, especially for a first attempt.

Graphically, it is honeyselect, so nothing to write home about.

The story is a bit light, and the length is very short, but then again, we've seen a lot worse updates in length that this!

There's only a single choice at the end, which seems to have no effect regardless of which is chosen, as such, I'd recommend to remove if it serves no purpose.

The game could be expanded into something larger fairly easily, as there's the mysterious figure experimenting for god knows what reason. Depending on the writing capabilities of the maker, which do not seem to be too bad from this game, it could potentially lead to something.

In closing, the game is not bad, but it is not good either, it's just in between, and certainly could use some expanding, especially in the story itself, as for now, nobody knows what's going on, and there's no closing or story development, it's just a janitor that fucks five women, because some shadowy figure is experimenting with magic apparently.