VN - Ren'Py - Luminary Protocol [v0.22] [Jubs Games]

Images and Artwork are great. However that was all that I liked. Animations? Nah? Who needs em apparently. Its a friggin confusing mess of jumping around images on the screen. Did not even bother to finish the first 10 minutes as it had already turned me off. Especially when I read the Dev's comment about the lack of sex as it was just too difficult for him. Ummm. Ok? Its an adult game with no sex? Nah! Big ass No in my book! I don't give a damn how good your story might be if it has no Sex it aint for me. And then toss in the lack of proper animation as well and this quickly became a run for the exit.

Very impressive on the opening with the clips and the writing telling the story is also great, however more work is required transforming the action described by the story telling; by images and clips., eye lids & mouth opening to express life. Hugs and kisses with animation would be fantastic.

As this the Developers first game release I rate as 5 star to encourage you. You doing great and don’t take this low IQ nebbies self centered commends and focus on your goals. Great work for a first timer.

I like this game so far, with some reservations. The story is a familiar trope -- family is mysteriously transported to a different realm where fantasy elements are real -- but the writing seems good so far with dialogues and other interactions flowing pretty well, developing relationships in natural progression. My hope for the future is that the dev improves their rendering to feel less wooden and better reflect the actions described in the story. For example, having people actually hug when that's what's described. I will be following the game with hope for improvement of the graphics while maintaining the quality of the writing and storytelling.

This is the game that I expect to be updated soon with the greatest impatience! Interesting basis and wonderful images of the characters. I hope the author will keep all this and make regular ones. With time, he will probably gain more experience and clean things up more.

First impressions: I'm not a fan of AI graphics in games, but I was pleasantly surprised by the image quality, and I have to say that the story flows quite well, too. One small flaw is the text, which is occasionally flawed. Overall, I liked it, and I'll be following along.