VN - Others - Luna in the Tavern [v0.39] [TitDang]

This game has an excellent art style and arousing premise, problem is that's where all the good things end. This game is paywalled to heck and on top of that the English in the game is very broken and riddled with mistakes, which can instantly take one out of the zone.

EDIT: 3-6-20: Ok so there's a skip button now, can't quite remember if it was there before, but you need to be a patron to use it, you have to log in to offer corrections to the already piss poor writing, so that's kind of annoying.

The game in itself isn't so bad
pros:
- Good arts
- Above average content for a 0.1 visual novel

con:
- Handicap if not patreon (No save, no gallery, etc )
- Only being able to click to continue is annoying
- Feels like the game is going to have too many "endings" where you have to start over every time

This game isn't the worst i've played, especially for a 0.1
The art is better than most games out there and since i'm not a dota fan I don't know how she should look but she doesn't look bad from my standards at least. The writing is also bearable, not the best but better than most.

However, that's where the good things end:
As stated by the comments stated the inability to save and load is terrible but other games(that will not be named) have done the same thing but instead of paying 15 dollars to save and load you just can't do it at all. So I can't knock the dev to much for it.

Still, it's pretty greedy to charge 15 dollars for barely more content and the ability to save/load which knocks 3 stars off at least for me