RPGM - Completed - Luna ~ NTR Dungeon Debt Repayment Life [v2.1] [Apple soft]

Introduction
want a TLDR? 5/5 when you cheat the stats to skip all the RPG combat, otherwise hardstuck at 4/5

Game Description
this is a sandbox carnival scene-collector RPG with NTR/corruption. two adventurers, Josuke and Luna, who are platonically in love, enter into a mountain of debt. 10,000,000 gold to be exact. to repay it back they travel to an island where you can make money quick through a whole manner of means, but mostly, by risking it all in a famous dungeon that none have conquered. and on the island, there are many men who seek to steal Luna from Josuke, as well as many lewd undertakings Luna can do in order to pay back the debt

Things I Liked:
- Luna. you need a good FMC for games like this to work and in my opinion Luna is a good FMC. she is very cute, polite, basically how you'd expect a typical naive girl made in a japanese game to behave. because of this, she is also a perfect FMC for the NTR
- corruption/NTR. very well designed. to progress the corruption, you need to spam lewd scenes around the island. but some arent as simple as walk up to a heart NPC and press Enter, some you find from a guild quest and some can be found from defeat scenes, and some are wholely time based. i like this alot. to progress the NTR, you take one of the men into the dungeon with Luna and on each biome you make Luna rests with them, then visits their home the next day, and rinse repeat until Luna falls for them, which is when the NTR gets more serious. its simple in that all it really is is she gets seduced on each rest and each visit, while wrestling with the fact that she has a boyfriend, which isnt deep and riveting storytelling but i still liked it
- NTR routes/antagonists. i only did the playboy and the black dude, however i enjoyed both. each NTR route, which is all 4 of the men, has their own quirks or uniqueness about them, which make the route good. with the playboy its very obvious that the point of his route is gonna be womanising Luna the whole time, and he does so just as you'd expect. the black guy's whole thing was how muscular he was and how good his "massages" were. the dependable axe dude and the mischievous boy would have had their own thing too had i do their routes. the writing for all of the men might not be incredible or amazing personality wise, but i didnt mind as i still enjoyed their character
- art/scenes. very good and very hot. for the art you can definitely tell the artist knows how to draw, its of high quality and the art itself is almost never reused meaning you're always seeing something new. for the scenes there's alot of spicy situations/scenarios Luna finds herself in and the scenes arent too long nor too short. as an added bonus, a lot of the scenes are animated, meaning you get to see tiddies jiggling and a cock moving
- world building. the island is very cool, ngl. the dungeon is very beautiful, and the locations on the island are the same. the map of the whole island is also a very nice touch. and for what its worth the island is neither too big nor too small, this applies to the amount of locations and the locations themselves
- story/premise? putting a question mark here because there isnt exactly a fleshed out story but i definitely think the premise deserves praise. it sets the tone for all the things Luna is gonna get up to in her stay on the island, because anything to repay the debt back for Josuke, right? but oh no, looks like in doing so she changes as a person. its simple and self explanatory

Thing I Disliked:
- this is my only gripe with the game and its the grind. what i immediately realised is that you cant beat the mid-bosses (the bosses that allow you to progress the biomes in the dungeon) legitimately without doing the boring lame RPGM combat grind. this sucked, because the low level enemies themselves dont need grind, they're fine and fun to fight against, but for the mid-bosses you dont have a chance. killing the mid-bosses is a requirement to progressing the NTR and finishing the game meaning you have to do it. all they had to do was reward the player for developing Luna's relationship with the antagonist men by making them (both the dude and Luna) strong after getting closer together thus making them able to kill the mid-boss without grind. but they didnt think that far ahead, i guess, and it sucks

Conclusion
when you download this game, get through the intro, then when you're able to make a save, save, upload it to saveeditor, max all your stats to 9999 and just enjoy the game from there. don't bore yourself with the lame RPGM combat, because you're starving yourself of a very enjoyable NTR game

Ok, I'll played this game a long time ago, and I was angry because the protagonist and Luna have only one scene, at the end of the game if you both virgins when you pay the loan... I started a second playthrough getting the NTR/corruption route and still bad, gameplay is boring, the only thing that I like is a least we have a nice art and sex animations on combat and scenes, but the game still average.

I think there is something that people don't understand. The important thing about NTR is that stealing and breaking the girl or boy in question, the boyfriend or girlfriend is there just for that, to be the couple. Since you later humiliate the latter is another thing, but the main thing is what I said at the beginning.

This game is not funny like NTR, by the time we get to the good part the girl is broken, she doesn't resist, she no longer feels anything for her boyfriend, and all after having swallowed a long time of the game.

JUST A GARBAGE GAME. The one star is left for the design and the animations that are not superfluous, the rest is a waste of time if what you are looking for is an NTR, but if what you are looking for is a girl who is simply seduced, then this game is good for you.

Meh. It'll do if you're bored enough.
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Summary: An uninspired game with nothing new to add, following the same old uninspired tropes and trying to add a little flick of its own by mixing up some sort of modern-day text messaging system and other elements with your classic RPGM medieval fantasy adventure. Go figure.
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Review:

• Art-style: ☆ ☆ ☆
The highest rating I can give this game, the art style is... alright. Again, it's not new, innovative or particularly elaborated - just another female protagonist with gargantuan tits, blank faces in secondary male characters, and your typical NTR antagonists stylized with darker skin. For it to be full cliché, you're just missing the old dude. I'm giving it 3 stars because there are, in fact, some animations. Kudos.

• Gameplay: ☆ ☆
There's nothing much to say about the gameplay. It's RPGM's combat system, but at least, there is a purposeful combat system with some intent to it. You do fight challenging bosses which makes for an engaging fight, and there's a day/night cycle. Besides that, it's a grindfest.

• Storyline: ☆
If I wasn't trying to be fair with my own rating system, I'd give it 0 stars. You owe an obnoxious amount of money to some dudes over loans, and have to pay it back. Old concept, but alright. Issue is, the story plays out horribly. Luna's story with each character will progress based on the following axis:

She's coaxed and harassed, but has no personality about it;
She's stunned, confused, and childishly unaware;
The NTR characters "manipulate her" because they are so daring and sharp, for instance:

• Elaborating the master plan of french kissing her because there's a monster passing by and she was breathing too loud;
• Another will cleverly manipulate her by giving her a massage on her tits because she's tired, then eating her ass. Take notes, James Bond.
• Another will fuck her because he is a youngster who says he's her master, and... that's it. He insists upon this, imperatively and without reason, and it just works. I should try this with my boss, and just imperatively insist it's me who's the boss now.

Oh and she's straight up raped. That's it. Grabbed, and fucked against her will.

There's no seduction, there's no progressive relationship even if they pretend there is, there's just sexual violence that Luna eases into. The partners are all the same: obnoxious, full of themselves, and seeing Luna as a cum dumpster. They have zero depth. And would you like to guess what's Taro's, Luna's boyfriend, personality like? Yeah, I think you know.

I'm not expecting a Shakespearean epic from a game about NTR, and I'm sure my review would have been different in 2017 or 2018. But it's 2024, and this model of storytelling has expired years ago... and smells rotten.

• Grammar: ☆ ☆
It's nicely translated (thank you DazedAnon), but the script itself is stupid. There's a sex scene ocurring, and you get declaratively notified with 'There are sucking sounds happening.' like you just got an amber alert about dangerous activity in your area. I think the translator did his best to save this wreck, but if you check the dialogue, it's written like a teens's fanfiction.
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Stars: 8
Parameters: 4 (Art | Gameplay | Storyline | Grammar)
Final result: 2 ☆ (8/4 = 2 )

A solid game with huge potential but big missteps.







I like the art and I like the premise. It's nice that both the MC and the girl have cheating options to allow it to be balanced. But the game itself isn't engaging. It needs more challenge and more things to do. And the new game+ post game needs some major fixes. Playing a corruption game without challenge is like playing paintball without paint guns. Sure, if you are really imaginative you can still have fun, but it's on you to make it feel authentic.

Spoiler: Translation issues.

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[Review of Version v2.1]

Neat concept, fun artstyle, innovative. Worth watching for future updates and bugfixes. It's worth playing, I'd say. There are definitely many (and much) worse games on here. Even though the MCs boyfriend is fucking lame as hell.

First off, I played the game in jap so I didn't have any problems that mtl version has.

It is a really good one for fmc ntr. Some scene were pretty good and I remember replaying it cause it was pretty good. If you can do japanese or know how to extract for translation while running this, it's a really good pick.

The game itself is quite good. But I strongly recommend not to use this translation since it adds too many bugs, making the game nearly unplayable. Rather get the japanese version and use mtools. I rate the game rather than the translation, since someone might add a proper one in the future.

Fights: same old rpg system most people should know by now. With clothes damage and molest system. Nothing special.
Gameplay: You add one of the bulls to your party, and visit certain floors in the dungeon to see H scenes. Rather easy to find those scenes. It's always on the last floor before each boss floor, additional another bonus scene on the first floor for 1 character (1. floor Forest: beard guy with axe, 1. Floor ice cave: shouta, etc). After each scene you can visit them in the village / slums for another scene.
H-scenes: Really great art, with short animations, and great voice acting. Big plus for the H-scenes. It's more "comedy ntr" than dark ntr (stupid girl doesn't get that guys only want to get in her pants).
Story: same old shit we get in 90%+ ntr rpgs. Couple gets into debt, have to repay their debt, so they do stupid stuff and girl gets fucked.

Overall great game, developer plans to add more features in the future but we'll see. Just as said before, don't use the current uploaded translation (buggy).

As of right now unplayable.
Translation is poor. Text gets out of the text box, mistakes etc.
Gameplay is interesting looks like you can do some fun things. However due to bugs you kinda can't. Huge issue is ending battle with "heart" symbol next to any character it immediately crashes the game.

Mid quality scenes, decent art, good variation of scenes and very bad corruption levels. My expectations were too high.
The scenes are spread out through too much grind, remeniscent of old school fetch quests, go into the dungeon, come back to the start to go back in again, very annoying.
The game tries to do too much, and just falls short, being able to control both characters or 1 or the other is a good idea but in a game like this where the function is just quest prompts and some event triggers, it's really not worth it. And the same with the 4 other 'villains,' it's not new to have multiple villain characters but the hoops you need to jump through to clear the game is ridiculous. Theres a lot of event conditions with people present in party and a certain location.

... Meh... might be a good game for some people that like the grind, but not for me.

Very...meh?

There's a good amount of scenes but they are spread out between the 4 dudes and some random stuff. I feel like NTR games always make this mistake of having too many characters which reduces the scene per. That makes them have to fast forward the girl's corruption which is just not a good thing for NTR.