I endured 10 minutes and decide to just stop reading because the ego/alterego idea of writing just annoyed me too much. It wasn't enough to have to listen to a brat NPC, there's him and at least 2 more 'voices' speaking all the time.
Seriously, too annoying. The bits of story I caught weren't that bad, but I really dislike the approach to write the NPC here.
This is so far the worst aspect of the game for me.
-Art is decent and different.At some parts it was a bit weird, but nevertheless gets point ssimply for being unique.
-There are animations, simple ones.
-There are sex sounds.
-It's a sandbox and there is a list of objectives (or the next step actually, which makes sandbox kinda unnecessary).
-MC is the typical teenager spineless brat at first, the voices (ID, superego) on his head talks alot, but do represent what they should be, technically speaking. I really the narrative wasn't centered around that, but it is what it is.
-There is a plot going on that is at least decent enough. I can't really comment much here because as I said, the mc/voices made me start skipping. But for the glimpses I caught it seems it does makes sense moving the plot forward.
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-There are some repeatable scenes
-There is some problems/bug with time advancement.
-HJ, BJ and vaginal present in the game
With all that said, I feel like there is potential here yet.
Writing, (translation perhaps?) narrative choices and such could use more work/love, those are the major downsides so far. Sandbox does not make much sense if there are one expected next choice. Plot is interesting enough.
Art is pretty unique and the major selling point, even if sometimes a bit weird, etc.
Seriously, too annoying. The bits of story I caught weren't that bad, but I really dislike the approach to write the NPC here.
This is so far the worst aspect of the game for me.
-Art is decent and different.At some parts it was a bit weird, but nevertheless gets point ssimply for being unique.
-There are animations, simple ones.
-There are sex sounds.
-It's a sandbox and there is a list of objectives (or the next step actually, which makes sandbox kinda unnecessary).
-MC is the typical teenager spineless brat at first, the voices (ID, superego) on his head talks alot, but do represent what they should be, technically speaking. I really the narrative wasn't centered around that, but it is what it is.
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-There is some problems/bug with time advancement.
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With all that said, I feel like there is potential here yet.
Writing, (translation perhaps?) narrative choices and such could use more work/love, those are the major downsides so far. Sandbox does not make much sense if there are one expected next choice. Plot is interesting enough.
Art is pretty unique and the major selling point, even if sometimes a bit weird, etc.