Version reviewed - Ch1fix
Poorly written story about a brother and sister who are stranded on a tropical island after their yacht sinks.
Pros:
1- The renders are decent.
2- The characters look okay, with the exception of the brother. The sister is actually pretty hot.
Cons:
1- A ridiculous incest story with nothing new to offer. The writing is very rudimentary and unoriginal.
2- I assume this is a machine translation as the dialogue is also awful, filled with numerous errors. There are even parts where the sister is referred to as a "he".
3- The MC looks about 12. Why in the world would the dev choose this character model to portray an 18+ adult male? This alone is reason enough not to download this one.
Final thoughts-
I wouldn't bother with this version. The renders are the only redeeming quality, but as is the case with most failed games, the writing and dialogue are poor. I would suggest that the dev seek help with the writing if he/she wants this game to go anywhere.
Poorly written story about a brother and sister who are stranded on a tropical island after their yacht sinks.
Pros:
1- The renders are decent.
2- The characters look okay, with the exception of the brother. The sister is actually pretty hot.
Cons:
1- A ridiculous incest story with nothing new to offer. The writing is very rudimentary and unoriginal.
2- I assume this is a machine translation as the dialogue is also awful, filled with numerous errors. There are even parts where the sister is referred to as a "he".
3- The MC looks about 12. Why in the world would the dev choose this character model to portray an 18+ adult male? This alone is reason enough not to download this one.
Final thoughts-
I wouldn't bother with this version. The renders are the only redeeming quality, but as is the case with most failed games, the writing and dialogue are poor. I would suggest that the dev seek help with the writing if he/she wants this game to go anywhere.
