VN - Ren'Py - Lust Storm [Ep.3 va1.3.3] [Volcano Games/Lust Storm]

Wow...... THIS is a Steam release??? Dev truly needs to go back and change a ton of items. Here's a list:
1. Renders - Poor quality
2. Engrish - Seriously. Proof the dialog
3. AI Voice over - Beyond terrible and with the very poor quality script? It's even worse!
This game is nowhere near ready for a Steam release. In fact, it's not ready for release to this site for Free.

Eh, okay this has some potential. Let's get straight to the bad stuff.

Cons:
The English is really bad like, very bad but I could still understand it to some extent.

Pros:
Lily, one of the love interests, is pretty enough to keep me playing.

In conclusion, this game needs much better grammar, but the love interest's kind of make up for it. As far as the story's theme goes, it definitely has potential.

I can wholeheartedly recommend avoiding this project, I suffered through this so you don't have to.

Pristine, pure, brain damage inducing, badly AI written and even worse AI translated and to top it all, AI voice acted, dogshit.

And I mean it about the brain damage. I didn't have many IQ points left to begin with, and now their count is cut in half.

Visual fidelity doesn't save this either, although in general effort was put into that side of the project, but some very obvious clipping has been missed during testing.

Can it be saved by getting someone to actually proofread this? Maybe.

Does it deserve to be saved? I don't know.

Edit 1: played the "reworked" EP1. Writing improved from "absolute fucking dogshit" to "absolute fucking garbage" with only 4 out of 5 sentences making me want to open my skull, take my brain out and throw it against the wall then smash whatever is left over with a brick.