Ren'Py Abandoned Maelstrom's Sweet Lewdness [v0.01] [Hamokalt]

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You've got a slave. She's willing to do everything for you. You can train her to do whatever you want. Will you make her become a sweet girlfriend? Will you make her become a lewd chick? It's all up to you.​

Thread Updated: 2020-07-12
Release Date: 2020-07-12
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Version: 0.01
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Language: English
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fuck !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no!!!!!!
i want more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and interesting game. the art can change when the game was done. strange game
 
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ara1111

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My kind of game. Essentially consensual dom/sub positions, but in all aspects of life, not just sex. In fact I never even fucked her. Never tried to.
The girl is pretty likeable. Card system is pretty interesting as a concept. Especially after the SPOILER. Interesting SPOILER. I have high hopes for this, hopefully it doesn't end up dying like sculptor did, the last dom/sub game like this I played.

Should add a sign on the 'talk' option when you can actually talk to her. As is you just have no way to tell beyond tediously clicking it every day

Some typos:
''What are this cards'' should be ''What are these cards''
''There's some conditions'' should be ''there are some conditions''

Visually, the girls breasts on one side are attached to her body at uneven levels. It looks weird. That's just plain not how breasts work. Everything else can be ignored with the 'its anime lol' justification, but this is weird.
 
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masterdragonson

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Seems interesting though a few things come to mind.
  • Would be nice if you could change how she addresses the player. A difference between the Master/Slave, Boyfriend/Girlfriend, use the Player's Name or Custom Nickname.
  • Lewd Commands, Include some dialogue with the event or it just seems like a media player. This is the closest thing the game has to Scene Replay at the moment.
  • Longer Day Activities. Seems odd that you only get one command a day.
  • Headpats :love:
  • Being able to discover more Date Locations.
  • Money? It's an odd stat, is it possible to make her work or give her an allowance? Doesn't seem to do anything at the moment just wondering if the Player will need to make money for something? In the Date it was assumed the the Player has infinite money.
  • Stat Guide, maybe when this gets more advanced a general indication of what the threshold is for the next event.
  • Art could use a bit of work but it does have a simple charm to it.
  • Additional Outfits. Because customizing your waifu can make bank :sneaky:
From Itch.io this is aiming to be done in October. Oktoberfest
 
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masterdragonson

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ara1111 said:
This is explictly part of the story though
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Her 'cleaning' or other one short activities aren't really story though, at best it's her doing a little dance. There isn't much 'story' in having her clean X Days to very slowly increment a stat.

The Conversations I can see only getting one of those a day but it shouldn't consume the entire day.
 
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masterdragonson said:
Her 'cleaning' or other one short activities aren't really story though, at best it's her doing a little dance. There isn't much 'story' in having her clean X Days to very slowly increment a stat.

The Conversations I can see only getting one of those a day but it shouldn't consume the entire day.
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If you play through to the end of the demo her yes all of it is very much explicitly part of the story,
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maverih345456

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Good game I wonder when the game will be completed along with the walkthrough so I can find a good ending.
 
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Loved the story and various options for different paths! Lots of potentials that could be similar to Teaching Feelings.

I'm just a bit meh with the art... mostly when Maelstrom was masturbating... I was a bit disgusted. I'm not sure if I'm just used with great art and I'll get over it seeing different Maelstrom poses in the future. Reminds me how I kept watching overweight porn to get used to my chubby girlfriend.
 
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