VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Maid to Please [v0.18.1] [GamesMtP]

what a weird roller-coaster experience.

on one hand models are pretty, scenes are various and fun.

on the hand it's barely a game, almost a kinetic novel with some options to pick romance or domination route. and the biggest elephant in the room is the ending. i read review that mention game just ending, but holy shit, it really JUST END without any warning. there is no conclusion to almost any arcs.

if not taking ending into consideration, game will be a solid 4.5 imo. how ever wit the biggest cock block ending of 2025, cant rate it higher that 3, it just doesnt feel complete. hopefully author will release v2.0 or whatever

Very long Visual Novel, with many girls, very varied and well done sex scenes. Unfortunately, the gameplay does not have many variations, the choices are limited to seeing or not seeing a scene, but there are no paths with different endings. This is unfortunately a very negative point in this type of games. It probably would have been better to have fewer girls, fewer scenes, a shorter story but differentiated into multiple paths. The ending is left out but not incomplete, almost ironic. However, I think it's worth playing, hoping that the author understands the mistakes and improves in the next work. The potential is undoubtedly there.

This game is awful
Version 0.18.1
So game forget your submissive points and only check affection points during scene selections
as results i can't do what i want to and m forced to miss scenes
i basically rage quited when game made me miss 1st fucking sex scene i think/i hope idk but it looked that way
i lost on interactions before, but they didn't implied sex

if you wanna play it make sure you select only +affection options not what you actually wanna chose...

This would've normally merited at least 4 stars, but the way it ended.... Yeah, I really don't think it should be rated any higher.

Story arcs left incomplete, several (supposed) LIs that you cannot go all the way with, an ending that was utterly shallow, almost like the dev just decided he had enough.

I just hope that whatever the dev does next, he scales things down a bit. Less number of LIs, more development for each.

overall, I liked the story and the diversity of LI's. some nice animations.

The end is absolutely disappointing, because there are lots of open paths that are not gone completely.

MC corrupts a lot of women and turns them into submissive sluts. Which is nicely build up, but - come on, it will not work with nearly every woman. Some should rather keep their own will.

worth playing/reading nevertheless, because it has some other content as well. I hope dev rethinks his decision to let the story end like this.

First, for anyone interested, this is NOT completed. It interrupts randomly in the middle of literally nowhere and warns you that continuation might not even exist if the author feels like it. It doesn't END, mind you, it just full on stops in the middle.

If you just look at the premise, it looks pretty alright. A person comes back home after university, while in actuality being a fresh FBI agent looking for his mother's killers. His dad lives with a woman now so he proceeds to seduce everything that moves. The issue is how pacing and writing are handled, along with characters so flat you can surf on them.

I love slow burns, i love slow build up and slow pace, but traditionally calling this pace glacial wouldn't even remotely describe the situation. Imagine staring at the glacier that thaws drop by drop, and it's a damn huge glacier. The main culprit of this is excruciatingly overly verbose writing that describes everything in truly unnecessary details, while at the same time lacking any substance in what's going on. I very rarely mash through dialogues, but this is one of the cases where i knew for certain NOTHING of substance will happen or be said, and it's ultimately just painfully boring.

But i would be able to deal with it if characters weren't cardboard cutouts, the worst of them being the protagonist. A gigachad meme put into motion (no i'm serious, just look at it), he meet zero resistance in any of his relashionships and for him "hey babe, you look fine" is enough for anyone to drop their panties and fall in love. Every girl is a slut, every girl is down to go with another girl, every girl don't mind polygamy, there is no variety in the way people act except with shy girl Miko and bitch girl Sandra (which doesn't have content by the way, and i wanted hers the most). This is so flat, dry, boring and... well, porn it's too boring for porn. Truly a conundrum.

Visually it's tolerable, there is some variety in girl's builds, animations exist i guess but less than impressive.

Overall i simply cannot recommend it, mainly due to how strictly boring and flat this entire project is, not to mention abrupt stop of the story that leaves you hanging.

Absolutely unbearable reading experience. Decent but sparse sexual content.

It's hard to put into words how disappointed I am at this VN so far. I had it on my watch list for years, so I was happy to see it finally "completed" (not really). Some negative reviews talked about the rushed/incomplete ending, but I haven't played this until the end yet so I'm going to tell you about the journey, not the destination.

To illustrate the point I'm about to make, let me tell you that I got the first blowjob scene 15 hours into the game. Fifteen. Hours. The long-winded dialogue and mindless interactions with random characters takes up an unacceptably large chunk of the writing. For a porn game with three hot chicks on the cover, you wouldn't expect 80% of your time being spent talking to dudes, but that's exactly what happens. The game tries way too hard to shove a weird agent/spy/police plot down your throat, and it does so in a deliberately confusing manner. One moment you're checking boxes of porn game clichés with walk-in and morning wood scenes, then the next moment you're tailing and blackmailing a corrupt police officer in exchange for answers to questions you're not even aware of as the reader. Then suddenly you're talking to a guy in a trench coat about weapons of mass destruction in a public diner.

If you still can't picture why this narrative is problematic, let me put it this way: You talk to a girl for 2-5 minutes, then spend the next 20 looking at two dudes talking about some weird conspiracy whose details are left deliberately obscured. It's an interesting narrative choice, but after the initial reveal, this mystery becomes more frustrating than interesting, especially when accompanied by some of the worst dialogue I've ever read.

This is one of those VNs where the writing feels the need to explain every little thing that is happening. If the character is taking a shit, the writer will go into excruciating detail about how many times the character folds the toilet paper and what goes through his mind as he does so. Instead of skipping over the needless fluff, we sit through the entirety of every interaction like it's happening in real time. This kind of writing tumor is commonly found in VNs that have been in development for years, because most devs don't replay their own games after every update. If you've been following the project from the beginning, reading a little bit every few months is digestible enough. But if you're reading the whole thing from the beginning, the mindlessly long-winded dialogue sticks out like a sore thumb.

Calling this a slow-burn game would be criminal. This is more like a frozen turkey you have to slowly dig through with a blunt knife. I don't usually review games before finishing them, but I don't even know if I'll be able to, so might as well review it now. Also, this is a completely linear VN where your "choices" just give you some flavor text based on affinity/submission points. I personally don't mind linear VNs as long as they're not mind-numbingly boring, but just keep that in mind.

Maybe the writing gets better down the line, who knows? I "only" spent 17 hours with it so far (which is an insane thing to say when talking about a fucking porn game). But the truth is that I can't review the sexual content because I literally just got a blowjob scene and nothing else. The gallery is suspiciously small for a game of this size, so I'm not optimistic. And judging by what others have said about some girls not even getting past second/third base, yeah, it's bad. Every time you see another girl on screen and think maybe it's time for at least some relationship development, the game pulls you out and makes you sit through yet another autistically verbose conversation with another dude.

I've played games half the size of this one that had more content and a more interesting plot. The screenshots in the OP do nothing to prepare you for what playing this game is really like. The English is fine, the graphics are fine (although some girls are pretty ugly), but the reading experience is awful. But I guess if you partner up with the skip button, maybe it could be more acceptable. This review could change into a more positive one in case things get better as I play more, but I'm not holding my breath.

Good porn novel.
Not a game mind you.
Plot is OK for the genre, but if you skip here and there you won't miss much.
Gameplay wise, story is 100% kinetic, the only choices you make are:

• will you pursue this LI (good varietes of LIs is there)
• will it be more romantic or more dom/sub relations
• in case less vanilla options are avaliable (rimming, MFF, anal, petplay) you are asked if you want to go this route.

Renders are good, small animations here and there.
Game ends on a a bit random spot, but it is supposedly end of Episode1, with more to follow.

Should you want to play moderately long (6-8 hours, more if you read ALL the text + other route), slightly kinky fap game, look no further!

This was a delightfully fun romp! Variety of women without being a gotta-catch-em-all harem of hundreds, good models, good animations and a storyline that had a conclusion.

Sadly, the outfits from the title aren't in the game.

I'll start with the bad disappointing parts, in particularly the ending. I glanced at a couple reviews before getting started and they said the ending was jarring, I thought "how bad could it be?" Boy howdy it was jarring alright. Quite literally ended mid conversation with basically a stranger *sigh*, and there was so much set up for all of the girls to start showing up more often and having this crazy dynamic going.

I personally wasn't a fan of sneaking around with Beth, though I did enjoy the slow-ish taming of her to get her from being a real bitch to putty in your hands. Charles didn't really have much of a purpose besides feeding you money and being a constant threat of finding out about you and Beth. I guess some people find that kind of thing exciting or thrilling but personally I like characters being able to be free in their own homes to be as freaky as they want. He finally left (sorry about the heart problems) and I was excited for what was coming next for this new freedom and...it was over .

Anyways the good things. I really liked most of the girls. Beth, Miko, and Chris were my personal favorites and I was really looking forward to the new home dynamic...Ashley, and Catalina are next and I'm sad that neither of them mentioned their reactions to the keys on the fridge incident. Hannah and Jasmine aren't so bad, Hannah got a little annoying after a while but at least she changed her hair and was great at pulling people out of their shells, I liked how attached to Chris Jasmine was getting and at least there was one full threesome scene with them. Sandy and Jessica were just kind of meh. Would've enjoyed seeing Beth train Sandy properly but it's whatever, didn't really like her in the first place.

It was a little frustrating to only see things through MC's eyes because I would have loved to see the entire training process between Beth and Miko. The beginning was definitely more about the maid training but clearly towards the end was Beth's maid fetish coming through, but man I wish we could see the one-on-ones with just those two. Not nearly enough pet play with Chris, I assume that would have been part of her Maid Training but alas.

The writing was pretty good, I liked the running joke about trying to talk to Charles and always getting interrupted. The revenge plot was kinda whatever, I don't play these games for that part so I just don't really care, but goddamn this man is productive with his days, he gets more done in a day than I do in a month.

I liked that there was a plethora of interactions between the girls. One peeve of mine is when there's a threesome scene and the girls don't interact with each other at all. I know that's how it be sometimes IRL but it feels weird and stiff to me. An ideal threesome to me should be everyone loving everyone.

Anyway I'm just rambling now. This game was so good up until it ended. There's plenty of potential if the dev decides to make act 2 and I will be here for it if he does. Sorry about the essay.

This VN should have the “abandoned” tag instead of the “completed” one, because there is no ending and half of the girls are still at the third base (the sweet Ashley and the delicious Jasmine for example), or even the first base (the brat Sandy). Too bad because I really enjoyed the revenge plot and the heterogeneous cast of girls, but the dev clearly had another project in mind, so he rushed this one to get the famous “completed” tag, telling everyone to fuck off that it was the end of Act 1 and Act 2 will probably never see the light.

So only play this VN with this in mind: it is NOT completed and will never be.

Quality would suggest more of a 3* rating, but since its completed it falls to 2* for not completing paths + story and ending at a random spot.

Not a lot of player choice, really its just flavor/if you want to see content or not. Story is ridiculous but it works better as a slice of life game. None of the LI paths are completed and it seems like everything could have been wrapped up with just 1 or maybe 2 more chapters.

I would not suggest playing overall if this is the completed product, to me it seemed like a time waste

The premise is great - tame the main more dominant lady, corrupt young girls together with her, have fun with side girls.

It has a fairly slow start, where there is no sexual action whatever for a while, only teasing. That does evolve nicely into next step, where you reach breaking point with several characters and start having sex.

However after it game goes off the rails. Some characters get forgotten outright, some get outright rapid progression, while others get slowed to a crawl. All of it is peppered with dubious overall plot, which progresses in the same way. Characters and conflicts are introduced only to be waved away.

And then the game suddenly ends. You got what you got, you fucked some girls and didn't get some others, well done, get out.

Overall... This game has high points and worth playing it for them. There are several characters that hooked me enough to play it to completion. I would like to get a longer story with better pacing, but it is what it is.

Before the last update (Oct 25) I would have called this an easy 5 star game. Decent writing, nice animations, hot girls, good music, a mix of approaches to take, and hints of lots more to come, with Beth looking to get knocked up. Sadly the dev seems to have lost interest in the project and the ending was pretty rushed. Its not a bad VN to sink your teeth into, theres plenty of action here. Beth in particular has a lot of scenes, but if the other girls are more your type you may be disappointed. This really is an Act 1 game and its doubtful if we will ever get an Act 2.

However rating it lower than a 4 would feel dishonest, there is a lot of really good stuff here if you go into it knowing what to expect.

Story line, renders, animations were amazing for my taste. Enjoyed it a lot and hopefully will we will see an act II, I know I would. Enjoyable playtime. Highly recommended from my part. Looking forward to the new project

Story line is good, graphics are okay and overall I'm interested in what comes next. The MC takes the normal harem leader role but the development takes its time which is a plus for this game. Each of the characters has their own story and the decisions do not impact the story line so severely that you will miss out on content. The multi mod for the game is good and there were no issues installing or running it.

It started pretty well, but the sub-plots are kind of all over the place. The visuals are dceent, and the whole arc with Beth was fun. I think the dev got bored with it, as the "ending" was very rushed.

I struggled on rating this 2 or 3 stars, but landed on 3 because I felt the game overall wasn't terrible, and I'll start with the positives. The writing wasn't spectacular but it was fine, the grammar wasn't terrible, and the characters were likeable. Usually games that have multiple LI's usually have 1 or 2 that are annoying or bad, I liked all of them. There wasn't an abundance of sex scene's, but there was enough content that I was satisfied with.

Onto the negatives. There is a point system for love and corruption, which can force decisions/lock decisions based on the points, which I've never personally liked. I mentioned above that I liked all the LI's, but unfortunately most of them feel neglected and forgotten. While the story is mostly fine, at times the dev kind of gets away from it, and some updates just seem random and pointless.

The grave sin, and why I nearly gave it two stars, and why I may never try another game again is for the following reasoning. It is clear this dev either got burned out or bored, and rushed an "ending" to be done with the game, and in his notes basically said "Eh, I'll make and act two if I can be bothered with it". Just putting some bullshit together to make a "final" chapter doesn't make it better than an abandoned project. How can I trust moving forward this dev won't just throw his hands up once he's bored again?

Overall, the game is just fine, but not really worth playing if you just come across it for the first time, unless you want to waste your time with this current "resolution" to the story.

The dev gave us all a big middle finger by not actually giving this AVN a proper ending. For that alone this is getting a terrible review. I was going to give maybe 2 or 3 stars but basically abandoning this forces me to move it to 1 star.

Too many of the girls here are lolli.

If it wasn't for Catalina and Elizabeth then this would be a dumpster fire of an AVN. And even then I felt like there was not enough content with them and too much with Miko

Could have been great turned out not great

Awesome game, great characters and story is developing and going in the right direction. pretty hooked. cant wait to see how it goes keep up the great work.

pros
hot models
good renders
no grind
no mini games