I was very hesitant on trying this beacuse it's in HTML. But the writing is not too bad, and has a decent amount of content and pics for a 0.15 release. A few things:
* The good
- The AI is not all over the place. What I mean is that with AI characters tend to look too different between images. Consistency here maybe a 4/5. Still room to improve, but not bad(like most).
- Good amount of images. Despite being HTML, it has a good balance between text and pics/vids.
- Good amount of characters and paths.
* The bad
- Maybe cause it is HTML, but you have to deal with whole paragraphs along the pics. The text takes a lot of space while still being small(small makes it a bit harder to read). But is not that there is too much text. Is just that VNs made with RenPy, Unity, etc. would have the wall-of-text cut into sentences, presented little by little so it doesn'ttake space from the pics. Also bigger font that is easier to read.
I was thinking of a few other things to add as good and bad. But it is too early to tell if those will be positives or negatives as this evolves. As of 0.15, I think the 4/5 is fair.
* The good
- The AI is not all over the place. What I mean is that with AI characters tend to look too different between images. Consistency here maybe a 4/5. Still room to improve, but not bad(like most).
- Good amount of images. Despite being HTML, it has a good balance between text and pics/vids.
- Good amount of characters and paths.
* The bad
- Maybe cause it is HTML, but you have to deal with whole paragraphs along the pics. The text takes a lot of space while still being small(small makes it a bit harder to read). But is not that there is too much text. Is just that VNs made with RenPy, Unity, etc. would have the wall-of-text cut into sentences, presented little by little so it doesn'ttake space from the pics. Also bigger font that is easier to read.
I was thinking of a few other things to add as good and bad. But it is too early to tell if those will be positives or negatives as this evolves. As of 0.15, I think the 4/5 is fair.