Makin an h-game and want some criticism for some girls charicter designs

[umbreon2020]

Note: these are REALLY rough sketches, what im most concerned about are the designs (so hair stlye, clothes etc.). If any of the designs are generic let me know, I really don't want that.

These are the enemies that will be encountered in the fantasy district in my game.

Knight:

Beastgirl:

Elf:

Priest (unfinished):

 

[freebirdfreebird]

Overall I’d say these look good, The only thing I really notice is the arm length- on the elf and beast girl the arms seem a bit too long in comparison to the rest of the body.

 

[Meaning Less]

Only thing that catches my eye is that heads seem too small in comparison with body size.

 

[izalde]

Nice sketches, giving me big ragnarok online character design vibes. And that's not a bad thing.

 

[Deleted member 440241]

Hard to say anything with sketches this rough. Even the identifying details that can make them unique aren't very well defined yet, which makes them all about as generic as a stick figure. The elf is a little thicc for her race, so moving on you may want to make her more slender. Something closer to a ballet dancer or gymnast.

 

[Geralt_R]

The elf looks more like your typical Disney Tinkerbell fairy. Make the Elf more graceful, or as was suggested, a bit more slender and graceful. I don't care too much for the somewhat slutty and unpractical knight design, yes, it's a porn game, but let the characters at least wear armor that makes a little sense. It can still be a bit skimpy, but it shouldn't look slutty.