2D Making a pixel art H-Game, want critique for mc

[umbreon2020]

Making a pixel art H-Game, wanted to make the art style a little cartoony mixed with some realism, thoughts? Is it to cartoony? are the colors to simple?

the MC is going to be some demon boy in hell tryna get laid

the game will be sidescroller and probobly a beat em up

retro?

 

[mello.second]

Nice pixel art! Probably this is a little subjective but here's my thought :

A demon "boy" is a little too bulky for that kind of figure, try making his eyes rounder and his height shorter. That will make his image become innocent-like if that's what you're going for. If you're going for a bulky muscular "man" I think you should remove the cape or change it into a tight shirt or whatever clothes that made him looks Alpha. Good luck on your game!

Here's a little fanart from me

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[umbreon2020]

thanks for the cratique!

 

[Deleted member 3964847]

I like the first one more tbh, but everything looks fine.
Personally i would make the outlines darker but it depends on what kind of art you want to use for the scenarios too.