Making m/m vn feedback on character design would be appreciated

[towboat]

I had a lot of time to practice art over the pandemic and realized i have some free time to start up a project that i had rolled around breifly a while ago. I didnt want to commit to making a VN unless i felt the art was at least decent in quality and I am starting to enjoy what im making with respect to the project but would like to hear feedback. Still a ways away from releasing anything but i intend to work on this this fall.

 

[Mr. TurTur]

I like the art, it's definitely decent enough for a game. i would advise you against the stechty look though and go with full renderings more.
At least I would be turned off by seeing something like that in a game.

Good luck <3

 

[towboat]

I like the art, it's definitely decent enough for a game. i would advise you against the stechty look though and go with full renderings more.
At least I would be turned off by seeing something like that in a game.

Good luck <3

Yup I am pretty novice at rendering but im testing things out with respect to that. the finished product should look a lot more clean once i get the hang o gthings.