Needs a lot of work, but I certainly like this as a start.
This has incredible potential, and I have high hopes for it.
The art is solid. The girls' models are SPECTACULAR, some of the highest-quality I've seen in a good while.
The writing is a bit rough around the edges, and cliche, but not offensively so.
In fact, I can appreciate focusing on other aspects first.
The only gameplay (which, to be honest, isn't really expected in a VN) is a "click the hearts" "minigame", but it's (unsurprisingly) quite boring.
Luckily, you only really have to do it twice to level up, so it's an acceptably small hurdle compared to other games that make you grind affection for multiple days. Improvement would be welcome though.
Unfortunately, the NSFW is what is lacking, which is very disappointing with how good these models are! It's not even that they're bad though, it's just that the scenes that exist are too... I'm not sure how you'd call it. "Entry-level", I guess? Currently, there is what feels like a "first" scene for all the girls, as well as an extra two or three for one of them. But hey, at least they're actually animated! And animated well, at that!
None of the scenes go very far, however I can also acknowledge that these kinds of things need to be "eased-into" - you can't go all-out early in the story, else you're left with an empty hand a few hours in.
So I am looking forward to when those "few hours in" arrive.
But for now, this is a VERY solid start!
This has incredible potential, and I have high hopes for it.
The art is solid. The girls' models are SPECTACULAR, some of the highest-quality I've seen in a good while.
The writing is a bit rough around the edges, and cliche, but not offensively so.
In fact, I can appreciate focusing on other aspects first.
The only gameplay (which, to be honest, isn't really expected in a VN) is a "click the hearts" "minigame", but it's (unsurprisingly) quite boring.
Luckily, you only really have to do it twice to level up, so it's an acceptably small hurdle compared to other games that make you grind affection for multiple days. Improvement would be welcome though.
Unfortunately, the NSFW is what is lacking, which is very disappointing with how good these models are! It's not even that they're bad though, it's just that the scenes that exist are too... I'm not sure how you'd call it. "Entry-level", I guess? Currently, there is what feels like a "first" scene for all the girls, as well as an extra two or three for one of them. But hey, at least they're actually animated! And animated well, at that!
None of the scenes go very far, however I can also acknowledge that these kinds of things need to be "eased-into" - you can't go all-out early in the story, else you're left with an empty hand a few hours in.
So I am looking forward to when those "few hours in" arrive.
But for now, this is a VERY solid start!