VN - Ren'Py - Mastering the Pink Box [v0.09] [Studio 68 Games!]

I am editing my review because the dev turned 180 degrees from the initial versions of the game and now has forced scenes and forced swinging. I don't mind swining or sharing but the entire game is about just this type of content now and there is absolutely no relationships or romance at all. Everyone in the devs game is a swinger and there is not a single monogamous couple. The game really took a dive.

After playing the latest update, 5 stars. This game stands nearly alone as one of the few with an open-ended world that doesn't devolve into either a predictable haremfest or predictable ntrfest, you truly don't know what will happen next.

-Artwork
Decent, not outstanding by daz standards, but skin textures are very passable and modern. It helps that all the girls are extremely attractive, and most stay within the realm of realistic proportions.

-Animations
Mixed; the game could use more, particularly because it's clear the dev has an eye for great shot composition, just more frames are needed. Having said that, the animations present are well done without the typical laziness of genital clipping or twisted bones. I can only see this improving in future versions.

-Story
I loved it. Yes, it's set in a college setting, but little my little it's revealed more is going on here behind the scenes; rumors of secret clubs and illicit liasons everywhere. If you're like me and don't like boring predictable games that all blend together, give this a try!

As another reviewer pointed out below, the MC's personality is a breath of fresh air. Overall he's a nice guy, but not insecure or wimpy, but also loves to perv out. Very enjoyable to play as.

-Dialogue
Solid, has a few minor english mistakes but other than those it's very easy to read. Bonus points for avoiding overexpositions and lengthy MC narratives; the characters just talk like normal people, and some of the bro banter is quite humorous at times.

Overall, the sum of the parts is much greater than the individual. Why 5 stars if I just described average artwork and animations? Because the number of games that have extremely attractive girls who also speak like normal people and partipate in an engaging story is extremely low. All together, not a game to be missed.

I really enjoyed the initial release, but this update kind of ruined my expectations as the MC continues to meet more and more girls but the developer doesn't seem to give you the option to choose who to pursue and who to reject, you just automatically have to kiss all of them you meet basically turning the MC into a huge player.. If it's going to be a story told from the developers perspective and not the players then I don't think this novel will be for me.

Appears to be a very good enthralling story, with good graphics and characters. I was really getting into it. Worth a 5, Until the introduction of soccer mini-games and then "point and click". Sorry, lost interest.

I was really pleasantly surprised by this one. I'm actually glad I didn't play it until the third release came out because I probably would have deleted it if I had played only the first release. The characters start off seeming very much like standard college student stereotypes but start showing more and more depth the longer you play. There's the girl who is into you but can't help sending mixed signals all over the place. She doesn't know what to do about it because she grew up around too many guys and hasn't learned how to be good at being a girl. Another girl is apparently a whore but is actually deeply in love with her boyfriend and is willing to do anything for him: even indulge his cuck fetish.
The only thing I can think of that I didn't like was that Colleen's situation was explained in too much detail too soon, it should have been left as a mystery for much longer. It's like the dev switched into character development mode and went overdrive on it.
In any case, this is a really good game and I'm rating it 5 stars even though I've been burned on rating games this early before.

Reviewing v0,04
This game is super fun. I love the models (some seem pretty original) , and I love the writing (funny, light hearted, and clear). I also love the premise that every girl in the game is a total slut, and I love that a theme is group sex. Swinging, orgies, bukkake, bring it on, please!

I want to give it 4.5 stars but it seems only either 4 or 5 are possible answers. The only thing taking away from it for me is that there is minimal cumshots. If all these girls are "cumsluts" I want to see them love cum. If there is a blowjob that ends in mouth creampie, please show cum leaking out their lips, In my opinion, the cumshot is an important visual confirmation of the orgasm. And in my opinion, hot sluts are hotter if they love cum in their mouth and on their body.

One game wiht lot of Funny and lewd, its my taste. Beatyfull models from college, funny caracters wearing hot clothes whith camel toe, Funny story, i really like it. Congrats to developer and I hope for full VN.

A fresh premise that lends itself to the genre, well-written with good dialogue, and quality renders (although some full animations would be nice). A promising start for sure. Well worth the read.

I will definitely be keeping an eye on this one.

clear and well written narrative and dialogue, some genuine funny moments.. The lawyer lift scene and girls reactions that followed had me genuinely laughing out loud..
Visuals are on a VN average but nothing special, yet nothing poor either..
Looks like it could be a interesting story going forwards if the dev sticks with it and doesnt fall into the usual fan service pit falls or mass LI adding which would make the story to complex to keep track as a dev..
Well worth a read if your looking for a fresh VN to start